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Stick With U: chapter one (part 2)
AT THE MILK LOUNGE
Shane laughed at Carmen’s reaction and she stare at her, Carmen stared back at Shane and the stay like that for a while just complete lost in each other eyes.
– let me give you a hand – said Shane breaking the stare and the silence, she grabbed a bill from her wallet and whistled to the bartender who looked at the bill in Shane’s hand and approached immediately
– The gorgeous woman right here wanna talk to you, so be a good boy and be nice with her ok? – said Shane and even thought that she has had more than 10 shots she was still right and conscious
Carmen ordered a couple of drinks but was kind of difficult for the bartender to get what she tried to mean cause her Mexican accent was mixed with her wasted accent.
– Thank you – said Carmen looking at Shane’s eyes – it seems like you know how the system works –
– You’re very welcome, and yeah, haha, you can said that I know the way that many system works- Shane said winked at Carmen
– I bet on it – said Carmen under her breath
– Sorry? –
– Im Carmen – she said smiling softly
– Hey Carmen, im Shane – she smiled back and lent forward really close to Carmen’s ear and whispered – Un placer conocerte Hermosa (it is a pleasure to met you gorgeous) –
Carmen also went to Shane’s ear and whispered in the sexier voice you can ever imagine – puedo asegurarte que el placer sera completamente mio (I can bet you, that the pleasure will be all mine) she said smirking
Shane just chuckled a little and the take the drink that Carmen just handled, after Carmen finished her drink in one swallow she did the same
– Well like I said, it is a pleasure run into you tonight but I have to go – Shane said as she stood up – I guess I’ll see you around – Carmen tried to stood up, so she can said goodbye to Shane but she almost fell so she hold on Shane, that hold he backr for prevent her to fall
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(28 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
cool update, still chuckling over it!
im lovin this fic, babez!!!! You got me supa hooked!!! I wuz crackin up especially at alice =D . . . Whelp, like alwayz from me, BAby-gurl, LYLAS ;p and plz tell me dat you got mo 4 me like right now, lol!! Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!! Holla!!
Really like it… plz continue it’s a really cool and different story!
I’m loving it so far. That’s so like papi, “damn Vanilla!” haha, This one had me rolling. Awesome story so far.