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Strangers At First Sight (Prologue)
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Alice’s POV-
I stood alone in my darkened, moonlit apartment, staring out of the large, single-paned window that was on the side of the main room’s wall and offered a magnificent view of the outside world. As I listened to the raspy ticking of the clock and the gentle tapping of raindrops on the window, I was reminded again of how empty I felt, because of her. Looking back on everything, I can’t believe that I didn’t listen to my friends warnings and concerns. They told me that she was a controlling liar and even cheating on me behind my back, but I didn’t want to hear it, because my own suspicions were allready high enough. Then all of my fears were confirmed when I saw her making out with some random woman that she had just met at a club. That’s right, Gabby fucked up my life so bad that not even my friends could put the pieces back together. I wake up in the morning and put on a fake smile to get through another day, then almost every night, reality comes to visit and kick me in the teeth.
I pressed my fingers lightly onto the cool glass of the window to get a sense of feeling, but nothing happened. So before I could let my conscience get the best of me, I was about to turn away, when I saw a gold Lexus slowly sputter to a stop in front of my apartment building. I turned back to face the window and watched as the brunette woman got out of the driver’s side door and walked around to the front to lift the hood, but she looked around at the engine and wires like she had no clue what everything was. As I looked closer, I noticed that she seemed so sad and desolate, and I couldn’t tell if she was crying or if it was just rain drops falling from her face. I suddenly felt very sympathetic towards her even though she was a complete stranger. I guess it’s just because I know what sadness feels like. I let out a sigh and looked at my watch. It was almost midnight, so it would probably take a very long time before someone would show up to help her. Even though I didn’t know much, I knew enough about cars to offer a helping hand, since there was almost always something wrong with my little blue Mini.
If you were to ask me now, I don’t know exactly why I went outside to help her, but I’m sure as hell glad that I did.
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Yes, please continue…really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Oh, and love that Lara will be out of the way sooner rather than later, but that’s just because I love the dynamic of Danish together. So now you need to find the time to juggle a couple of stories…lucky us.
oh wow this is awesome..please continue
Yay! Another Danish story to fuel my infatuation! There’s deffinit potential here, and the begining was amazing. I love the despcriptions and how you peice everything togeather so nicely. Can’t wait for more!
AH! Why’s you leave it there! :-( Ok, totally loving it already! I love new twists on how Danish met, and this is already great! I hope that you get over your writers block for your other story, because I’m totally waiting for an update on it! Keep writing, because you are awesome at it!! ;-)
Sweet start! Sucker for Danish beginnings here. LOL. This is great. keep it up my friend!
yay 2geeky, that was such a great start… you know I love you’re writing and you know I love Danish so obviously this was fab! sorry to hear you’re still having writers block… that sucks :( hope that it resolves itself soon, because I love your stories! x
Well Alice and Dana meeting has got to be fate right? Loved the ending ” She would change my world forever ” sigh!. So show us how 2geeky, cos i cant wait. Pleeese keep this story goin. Thanks.
At first I thought this was going to be a really sad story, but after reading a little bit more I found myself smiling. This is such a sweet first meeting of these two.
Like suzieb_33 I am too a sucker for the Danish beginnings especially if they are different from the show. Hope you keep it up because it sounds good!Keep it up!