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Strictly Roommates – Chapter 10
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It only took several seconds for Tina to realize that Bette was naked. The pool light framed Bette in a white glow that that seemed to stick to her skin. Tina could see the soft curve of Bette’s ass as her arms and legs propelled her through the water. She could also see the absence of any bathing suit strap around her back.
Tina knew that she should give Bette some privacy, but she couldn’t help but to hang back in the shadows. Knowing that Bette was nude and so near to her made Tina feel palpably aroused. Her breath became so hard to catch that Tina, just for a moment, actually worried for her own safety. She stared without blinking as Bette’s toned arms sliced through the water. Every three strokes, Bette would turn her head out of the water to take in a breath. Each time she did so, Tina could see the swell of her breast, the nipple just barely staying underwater.
It was on one of these third strokes that Bette first noticed Tina standing on the patio. At first she considered stopping, thinking that perhaps Tina needed something. But she paid consistent attention to Tina, without Tina knowing it. Every third stroke she was able to watch Tina for a little over a second. And this went on for about five minutes.
At first Bette didn’t understand the reason for Tina’s continued presence outside. But the more Bette watched her, the more she realized that Tina had positioned herself so as not to be seen. She’s watching me, Bette thought. She knows I’m naked and she’s watching me. The thought that Tina was at least curious, and possibly aroused, made Bette aroused.
Bette knew that she should let it go; wait for Tina to go back in the house before getting out of the pool herself. But she felt empowered by the stare that Tina had on her. If only just for this one night, she wanted to revel in this feeling. She wanted to push the envelope a little bit.
Without looking in Tina’s direction, Bette stopped swimming once her last lap brought her back into the shallow end. She made sure not to acknowledge Tina’s presence in any way, so as not to make this an uncomfortable situation. At first she stayed low, kneeling so that only her neck and head poked out of the water. Going under once more to push her hair back off her forehead, Bette got to her feet as she came back up.
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I’m with tbte409. I can’t wait for Milk and I’d love an extra post tonight. Also, that was amazing. So much longing and sexual tension!
Loving your story very much!! So hot and sexy *Phew..fans self* I love the building tension between Tibette. When they come undone its gonna be completely earth shattering and mindblowing!! Thanks PPVS!! :)
Fantastic lead up, u r doing a great job, hmmmmmm will Milk be the place to seal those feelings in front of all…after some moments of internal jealousy of course…
Wow, maybe they will share a dance at the club and let the feelings flow into one another. Please let Alice keep her mouth shut for just a little while so they can notice how one another feel without the both of them trying to be noble PPS
wow so yeah I read this twice..wow four pages of just greatness..temptation..torture i can’t wait for Milk…so hot…PPS
Wowwwwwwwwww. Was so not expecting this chapter. Maybe next time they’ll both go for a late-night swim. ;)
If I was swinning with either one of them I would drown,my mouth wwould be under the water and my eyes a foot above the water. Milks here come a new love affair,a forever one.
Wow, how you can write!
and to think, they could be doing this to each other LOL i hope Milk will help ;)
Damn that was sexy and hot, love it. Now let see the Milk night coming and hope they show each other about their feeling. Please post more, thanks!
Alright, they’re going to combust! PPS
That was incredibly sexy. Looking forward to more.
omg!! to be Tina watching Bette swim naked….I would have passed out. She is fine as hell! lol nice update. they won’t be able to hold out much longer I’m sure. but if u are a masochistic author I suppose u can make this slow burn go on for another 50 chapters if you were so inclined. PLEASE DON’T DO THAT TO US!!!
One word : Milk…
I just caught up. Wow, so erotic, sensual, and steamy. Just think they were only a few inches apart.
WOW..Magical is the perfect word….
Holy hell, what an image! Bette and Tina weren’t the only two turned on by that chapter!
Awesome story… I can’t wait for some milk either!! ;)
okay, we have a “Peeping Tina” very interesting. I know that I enjoying reading her watching. The night at Milk is sure to be stressful :) for them. Look forward to reading more, soon I hope :)
dam that was hot… i have a feeling they will be turning everyone down at milk.. and maybe they will have at least 1 dance with each other…and then another and another… pps
that was so so sexy. they are not gonna be able to fight those feelings for too much longer. and i’ll be here waiting!
Well now. Bette has one up on Tina, cos she knew Tina was watching… Naughty, but so hot. The night at Milk seems like it’s either going to be a bit of a disaster, or the springboard to something amazing. Love it, atlas, thanks for the post!
Ok, so I’ve been a silent reader from the beginning, but this chapter was totally mindblowing! They totally need to tell each other how they feel! Or alternately, they can just kiss each other senseless at Milk and continue on from there!! :PAm loving this story! PPS!!! :)
LOL I just read that again…..Holy mother of god have mercy on my soul…you can write girl…..cannot wait for milk..my first comment I ws speechless…truly….very sensual !!!
and that one is when they are apart…i wonder how it would be when they are finally together…NICE! i dont blame tina at all…bette swimming naked…NICER! cant wait for the morning after…:)
Can’t wait for your next post. hopefully within the next 24 hours??? ;-)
woww girl! this story is sooo good! totally amasing! I love how you write their closeness.. you should let them cuddle on the couch or something :P and of course an hot dance in Milk.. making all the other girls jealous! but then again, it’s your story.. and i can’t wait to read more of it!! PPS! thanks xx
Wow, these two have got to get together!
Ah the pain of unrequited love…
wow. I’m with denEmat, with all this sexual tension between them a kiss would be like an earthquake and explosions topped with fireworks. Thanks!
Soooo hot!!!! They are destined for each other.
Wow! So thus far I’ve been a silent reader but this chapter was just too magical to stay silent about! So sexy and hot. Hopefully they kiss at milk it’ll be the kiss of the century! PPS
Can’t wait to see what happens at Milk. Would love to find another post from you tonight. PPPS!
Wow! What an update – that was so hot! So much sexual tension that I can’t wait to see what happens at Milk! Thank you for this story :)
Talk about heating things up! Can’t wait to read what goes down at MILK. Now that Bette has an idea of how Tina feels about her how will she react to Tina dancing w/ other ladies at MILK? How will Tina react to the swarms of ladies making a b-line for Bette when she walks in MILKS’s doors? This should be good. PPS!
hot! Nicely written. Especially it was cute that tina knew those little things about bette. Pps