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Subtleties * Chapter 10
CHAPTER 10
Bette giggled softly, looking down at her hand, her fingers easily intertwined with those of the blonde. Both women lay on their back on the cool gallery floor looking up at the spheres; their flushed faces hidden in the dim multi-colored light of the room.
"Why are you laughing over there?" Tina smiled.
"Because I can’t remember the last time I made-out like a teenager on the floor of a darkened room."
"Hmmm," Tina sighed, "And I can’t remember ever making out with someone as enthusiastic and as skillful as yourself. You do realize we’ve been kissing for the better part of an hour."
"I am fully aware of that fact, as is my bruised back." Bette turned to her side to face the blonde who was still literally trying to catch her breath. "You are fucking sexy as hell."
Bette reached down and caressed the sliver of exposed skin at Tina’s waist. The minute Tina felt Bette’s fingers upon her, she shuddered.
"What are you doing?"
"Touching the only bit of skin you have seemed to allow me. Why on earth are you wearing a turtleneck?"
Tina laughed, "Based on your occasional lustful glances the other day I assumed you were quite taken with my bosom. I thought I would choose a tighter top that showed off their, ahem, ampleness."
"Did you just use the word, ‘bosom’?" Bette laughed
"I’m originally from the South dear, don’t you forget it."
"Well for future reference, cleavage – especially yours – will always be appreciated. No need to cover up."
"Now, if I show you everything, what will you have to look forward to?" Tina pulled her shirt up and inch or two to reveal her taught midsection, reveling in the hunger in Bette’s eyes.
"Good Lord," Bette whispered as she placed the flat of her hand on Tina’s abdomen and leaned forward to kiss the mischievous blonde. Just as their lips were to meet, Tina traced the brunette’s jaw with her forefinger,
"Bette?"
"Hmm?"
"I think I’m…," before Tina could finish her thought, her stomach rumbled violently.
"Hungry?"
Bette sat up and stood, groaning as she did so,
"Remind me never to lie on the floor again – especially when I have a comfy couch in my office." Bette raised her brow suggestively as she reached down to help Tina into a standing position. "Where would you like to go for dinner?"
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(71 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
ok, I will just wait right here for next chapter. This is so good
Strtgirl’s comment cracked me up. I loved this chapter too and am eagerly anticipating the next. Hubba hubba.
“I like to cook. I like to bake. What can I say, I’m a catch”…priceless phrase!!!! You go Tina….get a clue BP. :) Love this chapter…so much fun, teasing, tension, and honesty…way to go. One of my fav stories!!
Yeah! More to read of this really fine story. I look forward to the next . . .
i yeah… please let tina help her… loving this and the slow burn…pps
I’m going to wait too. So good.
You hit a home run w/this story. Everything about it is wonderful. Your writing makes it. PPVS.
Love the tension and the gentle teasing between them.
What a great chapter. So looking forward to more!
and it has started snowing again………… not that I’m trying to guilt-trip you or anything, but just picture this shivery, frost-bitten queue waiting for your next post…..
That was very lovely. This is a nice read.
Your update is always a treat and a pleasure to read.Thank you.
Phew! Reading about this Tina leaves me with a lot of energy too. Looove the slow burning..
I seriously love this take-charge-lap-straddling Tina. I love this beautiful update. Thanks scaf :)
Not nice to leave us like that my friend and too short too lol. That was great and sweet, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Love, love, love it! I agree with you… heu, with Tina, there is no such thing as not having the time. It’s just a question of how to manage it, and where our priorities are. It might be difficult sometimes, and yet, it’s as simple as that… Thanks a lot for the update. And BTW, I’m a sucker for slowburn! ;) K.
Another wonderful chapter – thank you! As others have said, I love your Tina – a catch indeed! And I’m with strtgirl, so we’ll just start an orderly queue (yes, I’m English!) and wait for your next post. Hopefully you’ll be so concerned about our poor time management that you’ll post real soon!!
Thanks for the great update! Tina is a total catch. I just love this story and can’t wait for more. Thanks for posting.
Aaaaarghh!! Too short!! I am handling the slow burn but can you please, please, not make us wait another 5 days?? (it’s five for me because of the fucking time difference)
Yay, Go Tina. “For us…Let me help you.” Oh gosh yes, please let Tina help her. This is shaping up to be one hell of a ride with these two. Tina is my girl. I love the sassy southern Tina. I’m having a ball reading this. Thanks so much for posting. More Please.
loving this. can’t wait to read how Tina helps Bette. lol. pps
Hi scaf, Many thanks for another fabulous chapter. Bette adn Tina are taking things slowly and at their own pace. I just love the conversations and easy way they are in each other’s company. There is an attraction but also a great friendship forming. I can’t wait to read more. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
Wonderful Chapter from a Great writer!!!! Thank you PPVS
Still waiting……….
This is just so damn good. I can’t get enough of it, please post soon. Thank you wonderful writing.