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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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“Hey … what are you guys up to?” asked Tina, as she entered the kitchen of chaos, setting down the bags of food she’d brought for supper,
“Hey …” said Bette, leaning across to Tina and kissing her on the cheek, “Hey … how was your day …?
Tina wrinkled up her nose, “Okay … I saw Lottie … … … what *are* you two making …?” Tina asked,
“Erm …” Bette chuckled, “we were attempting cookies …”
Tina laughed, Angie’s cheeks and forehead were covered with cookie paste as were her fingers, Tina noticed trails of cookie dough caught in Bette’s hair just behind her ear where her sticky fingers had tried to push the curls back,
“Here …” said Tina, extracting a small piece of dough …
“Thanks …” mumbled Bette, lifting one finger to let Tina have a taste,
“Well it tastes okay …” marvelled Tina, pleasantly surprised, her mouth full of cookie dough,
Bette grinned, aware that she could make edible food, just not without an almighty mess,
“You two finish up …” suggested Tina, “I’ll fix dinner …”
Lottie sighed as Jo’s answer machine picked up for the 3rd time, “Hey Jo … it’s me again … just wondering if you still want to meet tonight … call me … I don’t fancy staying in …”
She lay back down on the bed, thinking about Tina … and Bette … and Angie and Alice and all of them, Jo and Kit and everyone she knew in LA. How would they react when they found out she was Bette’s sister, how would they feel about her then, she felt a desperate urge to just tell them all, quickly and then run the hell away …
The running away option was so very tempting. She couldn’t do it … and wouldn’t do it, not after everything it had taken to get to this point but still … the urge was there.
It was like the urge she’d had to leave San Francisco after she’d first found out, she remembered her dad begging her to stay, begging her not to go looking for Bette after such a long time, told her she’d never ever find what she was looking for. He was lying … right?
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!