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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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Alice leant against the wall just outside the front door of The Planet, the sounds of Carmen mixing tunes and livening up the place filtered through the open door. Yet Alice stood alone after Shane had failed to find a babysitter and ended up staying home to watch Freddie, she looked around hopelessly, searching the street for any evidence of Lara and Dana, knowing they too were unlikely to show.
“I’m okay thanks …” mumbled Lottie, pleased it was Alice not Bette or Tina who called, but also slightly disappointed it wasn’t Jo, “it was nothing really …” Lottie added, “I just fainted”
“what are you doing with the rest of your evening then …? asked Alice as she studied her feet, trying to seem engrossed in the conversation as a group of girls walked past her, “resting I hope?”
Lottie laughed, “I guess … although I’ve done nothing but sleep all day …” she said wistfully. “I suppose I don’t have much choice though … I think I’ve been stood up …” she added in a quiet voice,
“Huh?” questioned Alice, picking up the tone, “stood up …?”
“Jo …” explained Lottie, “we were supposed to have drink … but she hasn’t called … it’s no big deal”
Alice smiled, she knew that one well …
“Well listen … if you’re bored … I’m just hanging out down at The Planet …?” Alice suggested, eager for a playmate …
“I dunno …” mumbled Lottie, anxious not to run in to Bette … or Tina …
“Aw … c’mon” begged Alice, “no one else is here … Shane was meant to come but she has the baby, and Dana and Lara are a no show so it’s just me … c’mon …” she begged again … “if you don’t come then I’ll just have to call Helena …”
Something in her voice told Lottie that Alice needed a friend right then just about as much as she did, she sighed, maybe tequila’s with Alice really would be the best medicine,
“Carmen’s really cooking up a storm …” added Alice, playing the hard sell,
“Okaaaay …” Lottie relented, “I need to take a shower though … give me about half an hour?”
“Yay!” exclaimed Alice, suddenly feeling better, if Lisa was going to force her back into the single life again then she might as well have some fun with it, plus hanging with a cute and unknown teenager in her usual haunt was sure to set some tongues wagging,
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!