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Summer Vacation. Chapter 18
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“Where’s Bette?” Tina asked,
Lottie looked at her confused,
“She’s not with us …” said Angie, worried,
Tina put her hand out to her daughters shoulder, indicating there was nothing to get too worried about,
“Yeah … I haven’t seen her …” continued Lottie, “we assumed you guys were still asleep”
“Maybe she went to get breakfast?” Angie suggested, knowing her Moms love of pastries and decent coffee,
“Maybe …” mumbled Tina, not sounding quite so sure, she wandered back towards the bedroom in search of her cell to call Bette,
Lottie shrugged at Angie, smiling, “Want some juice?” she asked, heading down towards the kitchen to make coffee, she felt her stomach rumbling after their early morning exercise,
“Hey Tina!” Lottie yelled, seeing a note addressed to Tina taped to the side of the coffee pot, “there’s a note from Bette …!”
Tina came rushing back, she and Lottie read the note quickly, ‘Gone to see Roger – be back soon’
“Fuck …!” said Lottie slowly, forgetting that Angelica was right beside her, Tina and Angie frowned at her choice of word, “What …?” asked Lottie innocently, “admit it … he’s toast …!”
Angie giggled, unfamiliar with the expression suggesting Roger’s probable demise …
They ordered breakfast, carefully ordering something delicious for Bette to have on her return, Tina watched the clock anxiously, repeatedly picking up her cell and then putting it down again, resisting the temptation to call,
Lottie saw her growing more restless as they finished up breakfast and cleared away the dishes from the table, Angie hurried off to continue with a game she was playing on the playstation, oblivious to her mothers anxiety,
“Why don’t you just call her?” suggested Lottie, settling down on the sofa with her i-pod, she sighed, Tina seemed not to be hearing her,
Tina was helping herself to a third cup of coffee when she heard Bette letting knock firmly against the door to their suite, Tina rushed through eagerly,
“Where have you been?” she asked, pulling Bette close towards her for a full length hug,
Bette sighed against her shoulder, “Where’s Lottie …?” she asked stiffly,
Tina pulled away, considering for a moment the dark expression on Bette’s face, it was one she knew, but not that well, few people had suffered at the hands of it, it was the look Bette saved for sheer disappointment combined with intense anger and hurt, it made Tina shiver,
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Lottie has an evil streak…..evil but also cute!! PPS
Lottie and Jo, sittin’ in a tree… ok, I just turned into an eight yr old… And how anyone could ever think Bette Porter is wrong for ANYTHING is beyong me. Angie’s adorable. And I’m SO glad Bette and Lottie are going to ‘try again.’ PPS!
Sorry about the hangover but good too see a post!
I would hate to get in the way of those two sisters. When they put their heads together the world will be turning a different direction. I hope that in the letter it states that Maxine loved Bette with all of her heart and that one day she could take her rightful place in the family.
How on earth do you manage to fit so much story on a single page? I’m always really pleased to see you’ve posted, but I was like, “aww, man” when I saw this chapter was just 1 page (yes, I’m greedy… grateful, but greedy)… then forgot about the length as I was reading. You’ve managed to get some torrid sex in, step Jo and Lottie’s relationship a notch, disclose more of Maxine’s past, and maybe get Bette and Lottie seeing eye to eye, all in a one-er. That was a *great* post, I can’t wait for more at this point. Thanks, sofa.
I am so into Lottie…love the story so more soon pleasz
hey i love this story… so glad betee went back to lottie… and now between the two of them they can tackle the world…
Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!… And gosh was it worth it!!!! Wow… Can’t believe that you managed this hot hot hot beginning and then went on with such an interesting follow up of the intrigue… Well done!!! I really like the pace you’re going and the info you’re giving away…It really all makes sense and you’re not making things too easy for either Bette or Lottie, which keeps us hooked (that’s a lie, you know what actually hooks me to your story… Starts with a “B” and ends with a “T”!)… And by the way, i have to raise my voice and agree with NYGayLady… Never seen anything as RIGHT as Bette Porter!!!… Thanks Sofa, thanks a lot!
Oooo loves this story, it’s so great and diffirent….and your writing is great, you’re really talented. Loved the chocolate mousse part and the fact that Lottie & Jo have a date, YAY!!! LOL. Lottie & Angie are sweet together, Lottie is with this family to stay. Post soon please :o))
Wow that was awesome!
Way to go Lottie – a teenage chip of the Bette Porter block!!!!!!
Great story with our wonderful Bette and a younger version of her in the same story!
Like it – thanks.