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Summer Vacation. Chapter 18
Tina sniffed, her eyes watering at Lottie’s emotional speech, she willed for Bette to say something, anything … just something,
“Oh fine …” Lottie mumbled, deafened by Bette’s silence, she bent back to pick up her i-pod before walking on past them and back to her room,
She left a stunned and silent Bette contemplating her own ‘way-off-the-mark’ assumptions as she digested everything Lottie had said,
“I should …” muttered Bette, indicating with her arm the direction of Lottie’s retreat,
“Leave her,” suggested Tina, “let her cool off … you were pretty harsh …” she added softly,
Bette looked ashamed, aware of that fact,
“I was so mad T …” she replied, explaining, “I just saw red … I didn’t think of how she sees it … how she’s different to them …”
Tina nodded, “She’ll understand, I’m sure”
Tina sat Bette down and made her drink coffee and eat a bagel and some fruit, despite her best efforts to convince Tina that she just wasn’t hungry. Angie sat with them, asking occasional questions to clarify what she’d overheard, Bette winced as she explained some of the things that had been said, by both her and Lottie,
Somehow when she had it played back to her through her daughters eyes their argument seemed a lot more one sided and she began to feel like the bad guy,
“Hey …” said Tina, slotting herself onto Bette’s lap, she pulled Bette’s head towards her chest, gently stroking her hair,
“I fucked up …” said Bette, “I let her think I don’t care … when I do”
Tina kissed the top of her head gently, “It’s okay … she’ll understand”
“Lottie never gets cross …” said Angie, in her own way demonstrating to her Mom that she viewed Lottie on ‘her’ level, someone for the adults to watch out for and not yell at … “even when Mitch tore a great big hole in his Lysander costume on Friday she didn’t yell,”
Bette’s face fell further, she finished with the last of her bagel, washing it down with the rest of her coffee before getting up to leave, Tina and Angie stayed put,
“Is she going to apologise …?” asked Angie, finishing off the rest of her Mom’s fruit,
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(45 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
Lottie has an evil streak…..evil but also cute!! PPS
Lottie and Jo, sittin’ in a tree… ok, I just turned into an eight yr old… And how anyone could ever think Bette Porter is wrong for ANYTHING is beyong me. Angie’s adorable. And I’m SO glad Bette and Lottie are going to ‘try again.’ PPS!
Sorry about the hangover but good too see a post!
I would hate to get in the way of those two sisters. When they put their heads together the world will be turning a different direction. I hope that in the letter it states that Maxine loved Bette with all of her heart and that one day she could take her rightful place in the family.
How on earth do you manage to fit so much story on a single page? I’m always really pleased to see you’ve posted, but I was like, “aww, man” when I saw this chapter was just 1 page (yes, I’m greedy… grateful, but greedy)… then forgot about the length as I was reading. You’ve managed to get some torrid sex in, step Jo and Lottie’s relationship a notch, disclose more of Maxine’s past, and maybe get Bette and Lottie seeing eye to eye, all in a one-er. That was a *great* post, I can’t wait for more at this point. Thanks, sofa.
I am so into Lottie…love the story so more soon pleasz
hey i love this story… so glad betee went back to lottie… and now between the two of them they can tackle the world…
Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!… And gosh was it worth it!!!! Wow… Can’t believe that you managed this hot hot hot beginning and then went on with such an interesting follow up of the intrigue… Well done!!! I really like the pace you’re going and the info you’re giving away…It really all makes sense and you’re not making things too easy for either Bette or Lottie, which keeps us hooked (that’s a lie, you know what actually hooks me to your story… Starts with a “B” and ends with a “T”!)… And by the way, i have to raise my voice and agree with NYGayLady… Never seen anything as RIGHT as Bette Porter!!!… Thanks Sofa, thanks a lot!
Oooo loves this story, it’s so great and diffirent….and your writing is great, you’re really talented. Loved the chocolate mousse part and the fact that Lottie & Jo have a date, YAY!!! LOL. Lottie & Angie are sweet together, Lottie is with this family to stay. Post soon please :o))
Wow that was awesome!
Way to go Lottie – a teenage chip of the Bette Porter block!!!!!!
Great story with our wonderful Bette and a younger version of her in the same story!
Like it – thanks.