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Summer Vacation. Chapter 20
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“Never mind about that, just tell Tina you were with me … she’ll understand,” Alice studied her carefully, “You really like this girl … don’t you?”
Lottie nodded, “Just don’t get carried away Al … it’s just a date”
Alice giggled, “Are you seeing her again? … wait … are you bringing her to Angie’s party on Saturday … cos that could be weird, are you gonna tell Bette? … you know you should … after all she’s Angie’s teacher …”
“Al …” Lottie silenced her with a finger to Alice’s lips … “breathe …” she added, pausing, “besides, Bette already knows … she was there at the restaurant with an artist from the university”
Alice raised her eyebrows in surprise, “Bette knows … and she was ‘okay’ with it?”
Lottie shrugged, unable to say for sure about that,
Alice shook her head slowly, clearly thinking about something,
“What?” asked Lottie, “what’s the big deal about Bette knowing?”
“Nothing …” said Alice, thinking, “just … y’know … you’re her little sister … she’s *going* to have something to say about it …” she stated knowing Bette too well to think she wouldn’t have an opinion,
Lottie tried to smile and blow off Alice’s last statement, covering up the nervous tension she now felt,
Alice took hold of her arm as they both left The Planet to go their separate ways, “Don’t worry about it, I’m sure you’ll be fine …”
Lottie nodded, now not so convinced, “I have to go … although now you’ve got me all nervous about even seeing Tina …” she admitted,
Alice laughed, “You’ve got nothing to worry about with Tina … she knows exactly what you’re going through!”
Lottie looked at her, puzzled,
Alice glanced at her watch, realising that she was already late for work, not that that was unusual, she decided to skip the explanation, “Another time … I’ve got to run …” she said, giving Lottie a friendly peck on the cheek,
Lottie watched as she turned and ran off down the street, almost bumping into someone on her way back to her car, Lottie laughed, there was something so very lovable about her,
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was wonderin where u went…..good to see u’re back
thanks for the awesome b/t scene. what’s up with lisa.
Hmmm… so Lottie’s been left a bit spellbound, eh? She’s got a lot of exploring to do, with Jo or whoever… (maybe not Al though. I think Bette would kill her.) Sweetness between B & T. I like that Bette can be vulnerable with Tina, and Tina can comfort her in the right way…. *What* is Lisa’s problem? She’s wound tighter than a drum, and is a total cow to boot. What did Alice ever see in her? Why is Tina partners with someone so constantly stroppy and uptight? Goodness… Anyway, I’m still loving the story, thanks for the chapter, sofa. Post soon!
I was thinking of this story today and lo and behold you post! Thanks!
You hit on all the high spots. What is wrong with Lisa? Bette will need to tell Melvin about Lottie. that will be hard thanks
great update!tooooo SHORT!P.P.S.
Love the level of communication and love u write Bette and Tina in this fic. Bette needs to be a lot more open and receptive to her sister.
Oh yea!!! Someone needs to check Lisa real soon and real bad.
I love how you write the small nuances that make up Bette and Tina. The early morning conversation that they had and then the love making session that eased Bette’s mind and allowed her to sleep were written so well that I could see it as I read. The fear of revealing to Melvin the existance of Lottie and the money has got Bette fearing her fathers response and his ill health. Tina is Bette’s rock and shoulder to lean on and she is going to need her along with their little girl to help her get through this period of unease.
Happy dance, u posted and such a great one too…I adore Lottie, and of course the relationships you have created with B and T, B and H…but wtf’s up with Lisa???!!!! Alice???? that was nasty what she said to Lottie and obviously envious!!!!thanks…more soon huh???
Great to see another post from you – I don’t have time for a long comment, since I’m at work….but know I love it :o)) The Jo/Lottie kiss was sooooo cute!!
Hehe… Lottie and Jo make me happy… Clearly, I just giggled. *rolls eyes* ANYWAY, fantastic as usual. Love the way you capture the little B&T things! :)
Lovely, intimate scene w/B & T in the wee hours of the morning.
I was so happy to see your post. Great Chapter!!! Just love B&T. What is up with Lisa? Thanks PPS
Lisa is a bitch and she need Tina or someone to slap her head upside down to stop her being a bitch. Anyway love Lottie and Jo, B&T. Poor Helena and like her friendship with Bette!