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Summer Vacation. Chapter 20
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[memory…]
They stood in front of the Paris print in Jo’s lounge making out for what seemed like hours before she finally felt Jo start to pull away, her lungs burning from lack of oxygen,
Lottie gasped, only realising then how breathless she’d become, “Oh … wow!”
Jo giggled, and pulled her closer, looking deep into Lottie’s clear blue eyes, Lottie felt how it made her feel weak and vulnerable as well as strong and desired all at the same time. She had things she was trying to hide and it scared her that Jo might be able to see them, but at the same time it was an amazing feeling to think that Jo might be someone who she could maybe … one day … imagine herself allowing to get close enough to see …
Jo leant closer, planting a light but firm kiss on Lottie’s lips, slowly urging her backwards and towards the couch, she led and Lottie followed, her direction controlled by the slight pressure of Jo’s right thigh as it pressed between her own, like the way it had when they danced, only better because it was firmer … and clearly intentional,
They made out like that on Jo’s couch for hours, Lottie couldn’t believe how different it felt to kiss her, how different and yet how right, all the guys she’d ever kissed before were nice and girlfriends had always said they improved with age but none of them held a scratch to Jo, none were as soft, as forceful, as knowing. It was like she knew exactly how to kiss her to make those tiny hairs on the back of her neck stand upon edge, and the sensation of Jo’s hands on her shoulders, her upper arms and back just heightened those feelings of pleasure, making it seem as though someone were standing by her feet running tiny electric shocks right through her body,
Lottie shuddered, coming out of her fantasy from the night before and back into the dim early morning reality of her bedroom,
It was scary,
Because nothing had ever felt like that before,
But in another sense it was exciting and compelling and the most indescribable incredible feeling she’d ever experienced in her entire life …
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was wonderin where u went…..good to see u’re back
thanks for the awesome b/t scene. what’s up with lisa.
Hmmm… so Lottie’s been left a bit spellbound, eh? She’s got a lot of exploring to do, with Jo or whoever… (maybe not Al though. I think Bette would kill her.) Sweetness between B & T. I like that Bette can be vulnerable with Tina, and Tina can comfort her in the right way…. *What* is Lisa’s problem? She’s wound tighter than a drum, and is a total cow to boot. What did Alice ever see in her? Why is Tina partners with someone so constantly stroppy and uptight? Goodness… Anyway, I’m still loving the story, thanks for the chapter, sofa. Post soon!
I was thinking of this story today and lo and behold you post! Thanks!
You hit on all the high spots. What is wrong with Lisa? Bette will need to tell Melvin about Lottie. that will be hard thanks
great update!tooooo SHORT!P.P.S.
Love the level of communication and love u write Bette and Tina in this fic. Bette needs to be a lot more open and receptive to her sister.
Oh yea!!! Someone needs to check Lisa real soon and real bad.
I love how you write the small nuances that make up Bette and Tina. The early morning conversation that they had and then the love making session that eased Bette’s mind and allowed her to sleep were written so well that I could see it as I read. The fear of revealing to Melvin the existance of Lottie and the money has got Bette fearing her fathers response and his ill health. Tina is Bette’s rock and shoulder to lean on and she is going to need her along with their little girl to help her get through this period of unease.
Happy dance, u posted and such a great one too…I adore Lottie, and of course the relationships you have created with B and T, B and H…but wtf’s up with Lisa???!!!! Alice???? that was nasty what she said to Lottie and obviously envious!!!!thanks…more soon huh???
Great to see another post from you – I don’t have time for a long comment, since I’m at work….but know I love it :o)) The Jo/Lottie kiss was sooooo cute!!
Hehe… Lottie and Jo make me happy… Clearly, I just giggled. *rolls eyes* ANYWAY, fantastic as usual. Love the way you capture the little B&T things! :)
Lovely, intimate scene w/B & T in the wee hours of the morning.
I was so happy to see your post. Great Chapter!!! Just love B&T. What is up with Lisa? Thanks PPS
Lisa is a bitch and she need Tina or someone to slap her head upside down to stop her being a bitch. Anyway love Lottie and Jo, B&T. Poor Helena and like her friendship with Bette!