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Summer Vacation. Chapter 22
“Baby,” Tina whispered, “I can never take it back that I conceived her without you … but tonight, we’re going to celebrate *together* … that *we* made her …”
Bette wiped away a stray tear which had rolled down her cheek, she sniffed, “Tee …”
“Uh huh …”
Bette was silent, unsure what she wanted to say, or that she trusted her voice enough to say it,
Tina smiled, “It’s okay Bette … I know”
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“Thanks for doing this …” said Lottie, glancing across at Jo as she drove them both out towards the Mall,
Jo grinned, “No problem … can’t believe you left it ‘till the day before her birthday to get her a present, but still … no problem”
Lottie chuckled, “Yeah … I sort of forgot”
Jo fought back the urge to ask why … to ask perhaps if there were ‘other’ things on her mind which had made her forget so easily, she bit her bottom lip roughly, reminding herself that she had to be patient and forcing any thoughts to the contrary to pass on by,
Conversely, whenever she thought she could get away with it, and without drawing too much attention to herself Lottie glanced sideways at Jo, taking her in,
She was ‘so’ cute, the way she concentrated hard on her driving, and she’d obviously given a bit more thought to her outfit in light of their planned lunchtime rendezvous. The grey cords she wore hugged her hips tightly and were twinned with a cute green shirt that was unbuttoned at the top, to dress it down she’d chosen a simple grey vest to wear underneath, now that they were alone she’d opened up the shirt a little more and exposed a thin patch of skin just above the waistband of her cords where the vest didn’t reach, Lottie liked it, for one whenever she leant forwards at a junction to see out it gave her a perfect glimpse of delicious cleavage,
“May I help you?” asked Jo, catching Lottie staring unabashedly at her breasts,
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(53 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
i get to be first…that was great! super hot, i might add and really well written.
the website swallowed my comment last chapter. Thanks for the frequent posts and *hot* b/t scene.
Loving the Bette and Tina loving, and definitely Liking the Lottie and Jo liking!!!! Nevertheless, Bette had something to say to Tina, and I think she needs to get it out. PPS!
OMG!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!!! You write so well!!!! Thank you PPS
ALmost 11. Trouble just started. Love how Jo thinks. also Bette and Tina. I like frosting,any color/ thanks for posting
ALmost 11. Trouble just started. Love how Jo thinks. also Bette and Tina. I like frosting,any color/ thanks for posting
YAY U POSTED!!! i say it again y oh y can’t IC make B & T like yours!!!!!! POST AGIN WILL YA AND LIKE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!!!!!!!!
I so love this story Sofa! this paintball game should be a riot! Post soon!
oh and yeah…..2 things 1 what was it that B had to tell Tee and 2 it maybe obvious to some but what happened with the frosting….and if there was sex involved Y OH Y DID U NOT WRITE IT!!! AND WILL U WRITE IT AS A KIND OF REFLECTION…….I HOPE!!!!!! LOL
B&T are HOT! I wonder what Bette wants to talk to Tee about? LMAO @ Lottie!
YOU ROCK WOMEN!maybe t-time for another baby its been 10 yrs.??? p.p.s.
I just caught up. Have I mentioned lately that I love this story. I can’t wait to read the next one.
That poem… and what followed… hot. Very hot. Bette needs to not worry so much about not being there at the moment of conception. It was done by Tina out of love, and they’re still in love, which is why Bette’s there. She’s been there throughout Angie’s life, and that’s what matters, so… it’s got to be let go. I’m *really* enjoying Lottie and Jo falling in… lust? like? …love? with each other. Lovely update, sofa. Cheers
Awwwwwwww loved it – this is one of your best posts ever!!!! Just can’t get enough of your writing, you’re really talented. Now; on with a cosy Lottie and Jo evening and I believe Bette wanted to say something so Tina should let her. Post soon and have great weekend :o))
a great chapter…such a great story…it makes me smile all the time…I having so much fun with both these relationships you’re showing us…and again adore Lottie…angie is a sweetheart…as for B and T!!!!! pink frosting, ha-ha-ha…ewwwwwwwww gross as angie says, lmao…pps
Again, I luv this story! Especially how Lottie is slowly becoming a part of Bette, Tina and Angie’s life. I think that’s good thing for all. The Jo/Lottie slow burn is really heating up! Wowzer!!!
I look forward to your story every time that log on. It makes me laugh, cry and dance all at once. The closeness that Bette and Tina share and then the new beginnings of a new Bette and Tina in Lottie and Jo. This story is just so fun to read.
Damn B&T are hot, L&J are cute!