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Summer Vacation. Chapter 37
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“At the end of the performance,” Jo explained, their heads bowed together in plot, “it’s customary to thank people who’ve helped once the first performance is over …”
Angie nodded, “Okay,”
“So you think you can do that?” Jo asked, checking,
“Thank Lottie?”
“Yes,”
Angie nodded enthusiastically, “I’m sure I can,”
A little while later and they were gathered in costume at the foot of the stage, listening to emphatic words of wisdom from Jo and Lottie, who’d arrive just moments before, a little earlier that usual for a Tuesday, since Tina’s patient list had been small and she’d sloped off home early herself to see Bette,
“This is it,” said Jo precisely, “after today there’s no more rehearsals, and we want it to be a good show, don’t we?”
About thirty young voices all piped up, “Yes …”
“But today’s our chance to practice getting it right,” Lottie added, trying to take the pressure off them all just a little bit, “so if you’ve got questions or you’re just not sure then now’s the time to ask …”
They all began nodding seriously as they digested her words,
“So lets get on with it!” Jo suggested, and all at once havoc broke loose with excited cheer,
“Oh God …” Lottie whispered, quietly in her girlfriends ear, “someone’s been giving them crazy pills …”
But their insanity was short lived, and soon the hard work began to look as if it actually paid off, when the run through of the first half went extraordinarily smoothly, Lottie stopping them only once to make the tiniest adjustment to a dance so that the audience could actually see little Michael who played Puck,
As they broke for half time, Jo took hold of Lottie’s wrist and dragged her backstage into the wings,
“What?”
“I …” Jo paused, “I got you something,”
Lottie smiled, perplexed, “What? … what did you get me?”
Jo blushed furiously then began wishing she’d had the ability to wait until they were somewhere more private, but watching Lottie direct and formulate the play she’d struggled with such a lot in the beginning was just too much for her, and she couldn’t help it,
She ducked behind the sets and returned with a small wrapped package, a neat bow tied around its middle,
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Alice is just too much, way over the top,lol. but love her too death and probably the best friend that everyone wants!. love how lottie got her good about not gettin’ any, LOL. lottie fits in so well. i know summer vacation but maybe lottie will consider transferring to LA???
i agree with honda90, thank you for this story and the nice long updates. It is one of my all time favorites because you really seem to understand the characters and speak in their voice incredibly well. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story! Thanks again for the great update and please post soon! :)
This story is one of my absolute favourite and I am so glad dat u’ve been posting regularly, many thanks. Can’t wait for the party PPS
I love this Sofa! The pace is perfect as you develop the characters and storyline. Alice is a trip, but I love this Lottie character! LMAO I think that Alice may have a match there. Can’t wait to see where you take this next. Post as soon as you can! Thanks Sofa :-))
How cute are Lottie and Jo? And how “cute” are Bette and Tina for that matter? Hickeys, at that hour of the morning, tut-tut. I like that Bette was willing to swallow pride and ask for photos for Al’s b-day surprise for Lottie… Speaking of, is the tape of Hels *that* bad? Unless she was wearing dodgy clothes (impossible, I’d imagine, for a Peabody) and singing karaoke off-key, I can’t think as to what the big deal is. She’s not the person she was then, and everyone knows it, so hopefully it’s not a problem. Anyway, why is Alice so set on showing it? Hmm, curiouser and curiouser. Great chapter, sofa. Cheers for the post!
Thanks for satiating me Sofa! Can’t wait to see what the deal is with the tape and what else Alice has planned at the party. Love this story!
B&T are hot and sweet, Lottie and Jo are cute, Helena and Alice are funny and cute. Please post more, thanks!
How will Bette handle Lottie having the money to finance their project? I hope that this project will bring them together. I love all the flirtation and can’t wait to read more!
no *you’re* the best girlfriend ever…hehe…ok, well now that i’ve let my secret out–that i am always tempted to gush a great deal more than i ever actually do–i’ll just say what i think. definitions aside, this story always feels epic…its got everything, birth, death, and the meanings of the daily things in between…and the sex is hot, because it lives in the tapestry you create with your writing…as always, baby, your writing is downright poetic. but nothing i can say here can really describe how i feel reading your stories…really…truely…i’ll stop now;) your writings are as beautiful as you are…xoxox
I can’t ever seem to get enough of this story…at least your generous enough to give large portions!!! Pls post soon…
The story gets better and better! Can’t wait for the Paris trip, that should be a lot of fun!
Wow, that Alice sure can make a production out of things, I hope she’s scheduled a bit of free time for socializing during the party. Too bad Jo and Lottie didn’t enlist her to help with the play, they would have had more free time and Alice could have worked off some of her excess energy. At while Peggy’s in town. Otherwise Helena might get ‘pressed’ into service. May I recommend the girls check out the Rue de Dragon? It’s been a while but there used to be some charming and unpretentious restaurants there. And the Marais is a good stroll away from the bulk of the tourists. And may I further that you make good use of the fact that you’ve got, however briefly, Bette and Tina, as well as Alice and Helena, in empty houses?
I agree with all of the above… can’t help but love Lottie, so unspoiled by all of her wealth… hope this party finally convinces her that she is truly loved.. and that she belongs … that’s what we all want really, to be loved and to belong to someone…….. love it as always…. thanks sofa!
Wow, love the Bette and Tina time together and how embarrassed Lottie was about the kiss. Can’t wait for more of this very intriquing story.