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Summer Vacation. Chapter 37
They sat with Kit in the deserted Planet, long before the morning breakfast rush, each cradling cups of coffee and a disgruntled look at the chosen start time of Alice’s morning meeting,
Che played on the floor beside them, orange juice inside a plastic cup being pushed around by a set of toy cars to the animated sounds of ‘vroom-vroom’
“Great,” replied Alice excitedly, stuffing the two tapes into her bag, “that’s nearly everything I think, apart from Helena, she’s holding out on me,”
Kit and Lara exchanged indifferent looks, presuming that with Helena, Alice had her own ways of being persuasive,
“So all that’s left is the cake …” said Alice, mentally checking through her own list, “oh and confirmation of the music from Carmen, but Shane said not to bother her about it till after the set on Thursday,”
Lara nodded, pausing for a moment to pat the bump as it began waking up, “Uh oh …” she muttered, feeling an instant wave of nausea, “excuse me …”
Kit watched her leave, hoping for business sake that Lara’s morning sickness would settle down soon, it didn’t help much to have a head chef who turned green at the sight of food,
“Take it easy on her …” Kit said lightly, “this pregnancy is taking more out of her than she thought,”
Alice bowled on unwittingly, not uncaring, just not noticing, “I will, I know, now, where are we with the drinks?”
Kit shook her head in exasperation, “Bette said she’d sort it, she’s off up there today or tomorrow to see what sort of state it’s in,”
Alice smiled to herself as she thought things over silently, “It’s a great idea, this way she’ll ‘never’ suspect!”
As they chatted, the door to The Planet opened and Lottie and Jo strolled in, unseen by the others, Lara spotted them both on her way back from the bathroom,
“Hi guys …”
Lottie turned and smiled, stepping away from ordering them both pancakes, juice and coffee, to hug Lara lightly, “Hi … how’s junior?”
Lara smiled lamely, “A bit too active,”
Lottie answered sympathetically, “Aw … sorry …”
“Hi Jo …” said Lara, greeting her casually,
Jo stood close to Lottie’s right hand side, the look in her eyes displaying that they were feeling very much ‘together’ that morning, “Hey Lara,”
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Alice is just too much, way over the top,lol. but love her too death and probably the best friend that everyone wants!. love how lottie got her good about not gettin’ any, LOL. lottie fits in so well. i know summer vacation but maybe lottie will consider transferring to LA???
i agree with honda90, thank you for this story and the nice long updates. It is one of my all time favorites because you really seem to understand the characters and speak in their voice incredibly well. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story! Thanks again for the great update and please post soon! :)
This story is one of my absolute favourite and I am so glad dat u’ve been posting regularly, many thanks. Can’t wait for the party PPS
I love this Sofa! The pace is perfect as you develop the characters and storyline. Alice is a trip, but I love this Lottie character! LMAO I think that Alice may have a match there. Can’t wait to see where you take this next. Post as soon as you can! Thanks Sofa :-))
How cute are Lottie and Jo? And how “cute” are Bette and Tina for that matter? Hickeys, at that hour of the morning, tut-tut. I like that Bette was willing to swallow pride and ask for photos for Al’s b-day surprise for Lottie… Speaking of, is the tape of Hels *that* bad? Unless she was wearing dodgy clothes (impossible, I’d imagine, for a Peabody) and singing karaoke off-key, I can’t think as to what the big deal is. She’s not the person she was then, and everyone knows it, so hopefully it’s not a problem. Anyway, why is Alice so set on showing it? Hmm, curiouser and curiouser. Great chapter, sofa. Cheers for the post!
Thanks for satiating me Sofa! Can’t wait to see what the deal is with the tape and what else Alice has planned at the party. Love this story!
B&T are hot and sweet, Lottie and Jo are cute, Helena and Alice are funny and cute. Please post more, thanks!
How will Bette handle Lottie having the money to finance their project? I hope that this project will bring them together. I love all the flirtation and can’t wait to read more!
no *you’re* the best girlfriend ever…hehe…ok, well now that i’ve let my secret out–that i am always tempted to gush a great deal more than i ever actually do–i’ll just say what i think. definitions aside, this story always feels epic…its got everything, birth, death, and the meanings of the daily things in between…and the sex is hot, because it lives in the tapestry you create with your writing…as always, baby, your writing is downright poetic. but nothing i can say here can really describe how i feel reading your stories…really…truely…i’ll stop now;) your writings are as beautiful as you are…xoxox
I can’t ever seem to get enough of this story…at least your generous enough to give large portions!!! Pls post soon…
The story gets better and better! Can’t wait for the Paris trip, that should be a lot of fun!
Wow, that Alice sure can make a production out of things, I hope she’s scheduled a bit of free time for socializing during the party. Too bad Jo and Lottie didn’t enlist her to help with the play, they would have had more free time and Alice could have worked off some of her excess energy. At while Peggy’s in town. Otherwise Helena might get ‘pressed’ into service. May I recommend the girls check out the Rue de Dragon? It’s been a while but there used to be some charming and unpretentious restaurants there. And the Marais is a good stroll away from the bulk of the tourists. And may I further that you make good use of the fact that you’ve got, however briefly, Bette and Tina, as well as Alice and Helena, in empty houses?
I agree with all of the above… can’t help but love Lottie, so unspoiled by all of her wealth… hope this party finally convinces her that she is truly loved.. and that she belongs … that’s what we all want really, to be loved and to belong to someone…….. love it as always…. thanks sofa!
Wow, love the Bette and Tina time together and how embarrassed Lottie was about the kiss. Can’t wait for more of this very intriquing story.