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Summer Vacation. Chapter 37
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She stood on the front porch waiting, a soft voice called out from within telling her to hold on just a moment,
It was already warm despite the early hour, and it felt odd to be already out and about, reminding her of how restless she was in the early mornings when she first arrived in LA, unable to sleep once the din of the city got going in full force. Life out at Helena’s had changed that instantly, now she awoke every morning to the sound of the ocean coming in with the gentle breeze through open windows. Even at Jo’s the sound of simple neighbourhood noises, cars and people as they set out to work were beginning to feel familiar,
She’d adjusted back into the Californian way of life, remembering a notion from her early childhood that living in the ‘sunshine’ state meant long walks along the beach and strolls through parks as her mother stopped them regularly to take photographs or sketch, and how despite the seasons she never felt cold, not like snowy winters in New York or rainy days in England,
“Hey …” Shane answered the door, a toothbrush in her mouth and Freddie in her arms, he wore a spit-up on one-piece which read ‘My diaper’s like the President … full of shit!’ and had his hands wrapped around a gooey half sucked cookie, which he waved lovingly in Lottie’s direction,
Lottie grinned, reaching out to tickle his side, “Hey, I just brought you back the keys,”
“Oh … right,” Shane stepped out to join her on the porch, “so … what did Bette think?”
“She really liked it,” Lottie replied, “I mean the idea, she liked the idea, and the place too …”
Shane nodded, “Well it suits me … I’d much prefer another art studio next to Wax instead of some factory or storage place or whatever it might get turned into,”
Lottie frowned, “Do you think there’s other people interested in it?”
“No …” Shane replied quickly, “I mean, I don’t know … I don’t think so,” she paused to wipe a spit bubble from Freddie’s chin, “sorry, we’re having a messy time this morning,”
“So I see!” Lottie chuckled giving Freddie a smiley wave,
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Alice is just too much, way over the top,lol. but love her too death and probably the best friend that everyone wants!. love how lottie got her good about not gettin’ any, LOL. lottie fits in so well. i know summer vacation but maybe lottie will consider transferring to LA???
i agree with honda90, thank you for this story and the nice long updates. It is one of my all time favorites because you really seem to understand the characters and speak in their voice incredibly well. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story! Thanks again for the great update and please post soon! :)
This story is one of my absolute favourite and I am so glad dat u’ve been posting regularly, many thanks. Can’t wait for the party PPS
I love this Sofa! The pace is perfect as you develop the characters and storyline. Alice is a trip, but I love this Lottie character! LMAO I think that Alice may have a match there. Can’t wait to see where you take this next. Post as soon as you can! Thanks Sofa :-))
How cute are Lottie and Jo? And how “cute” are Bette and Tina for that matter? Hickeys, at that hour of the morning, tut-tut. I like that Bette was willing to swallow pride and ask for photos for Al’s b-day surprise for Lottie… Speaking of, is the tape of Hels *that* bad? Unless she was wearing dodgy clothes (impossible, I’d imagine, for a Peabody) and singing karaoke off-key, I can’t think as to what the big deal is. She’s not the person she was then, and everyone knows it, so hopefully it’s not a problem. Anyway, why is Alice so set on showing it? Hmm, curiouser and curiouser. Great chapter, sofa. Cheers for the post!
Thanks for satiating me Sofa! Can’t wait to see what the deal is with the tape and what else Alice has planned at the party. Love this story!
B&T are hot and sweet, Lottie and Jo are cute, Helena and Alice are funny and cute. Please post more, thanks!
How will Bette handle Lottie having the money to finance their project? I hope that this project will bring them together. I love all the flirtation and can’t wait to read more!
no *you’re* the best girlfriend ever…hehe…ok, well now that i’ve let my secret out–that i am always tempted to gush a great deal more than i ever actually do–i’ll just say what i think. definitions aside, this story always feels epic…its got everything, birth, death, and the meanings of the daily things in between…and the sex is hot, because it lives in the tapestry you create with your writing…as always, baby, your writing is downright poetic. but nothing i can say here can really describe how i feel reading your stories…really…truely…i’ll stop now;) your writings are as beautiful as you are…xoxox
I can’t ever seem to get enough of this story…at least your generous enough to give large portions!!! Pls post soon…
The story gets better and better! Can’t wait for the Paris trip, that should be a lot of fun!
Wow, that Alice sure can make a production out of things, I hope she’s scheduled a bit of free time for socializing during the party. Too bad Jo and Lottie didn’t enlist her to help with the play, they would have had more free time and Alice could have worked off some of her excess energy. At while Peggy’s in town. Otherwise Helena might get ‘pressed’ into service. May I recommend the girls check out the Rue de Dragon? It’s been a while but there used to be some charming and unpretentious restaurants there. And the Marais is a good stroll away from the bulk of the tourists. And may I further that you make good use of the fact that you’ve got, however briefly, Bette and Tina, as well as Alice and Helena, in empty houses?
I agree with all of the above… can’t help but love Lottie, so unspoiled by all of her wealth… hope this party finally convinces her that she is truly loved.. and that she belongs … that’s what we all want really, to be loved and to belong to someone…….. love it as always…. thanks sofa!
Wow, love the Bette and Tina time together and how embarrassed Lottie was about the kiss. Can’t wait for more of this very intriquing story.