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Summer Vacation. Chapter 42
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Bette smirked, “I dunno,” she paused, pulling Tina into her, “I would have thought you two were better equipped to answer ‘that’ question!”
“Fuck you Bette,” Alice grumbled, still harbouring a touch of embarrassment,
Lara looked between the two couples, completely perplexed, “What’s this?”
“These two were experimenting a little with the chocolate frosting,” Tina explained, grinning like a Cheshire cat,
Lara giggled, then realising the implications that had for her masterpiece muttered, “Ew … you guys, that’s gross …”
Bette set about mocking them even more, holding her hand to her ear as if hearing a far away calling, “Wait a minute, that’s what I can hear Lottie saying when she pictures Alice’s nipples as she taking a bite!”
Alice picked up the closest object to hand, a damp tea towel and threw it at her, “Fuck you!”
Realising she’d maybe gone a step too far, Bette went after her, “Alice, Al … wait,”
Alice whipped around, “What?”
“I’m sorry,” Bette appealed to her better nature, “I’m sorry okay?”
Alice frowned, “I’m doing my best not to have anything mess this up Bette,”
Bette nodded, realising that she was right, that as the party drew closer it was clear all the effort Alice put in to making it something to remember, the decorations, the food, the way she organised everything and everyone, leaving them all the simple responsibility of showing up,
“I’m sorry,” Bette repeated, throwing her arm across her best friends shoulder, “I really appreciate everything you’ve done, honestly,”
Sulking just a little bit, Alice came back, sticking her finger in to each of the offerings of icing once again to deliberate upon which was better,
“She’s got a point though,” Helena raised, looking as if she feared getting shot by saying it, “I mean, I don’t even know how well I’m gonna be able to look at this cake if it’s completely covered in chocolate frosting,”
“How about we put the chocolate through the middle then?” Lara suggested, “and the vanilla cream on top?”
Alice and Helena both nodded, “Okay …”
Lara and Dana were first to go, filling both cars full of things to be taken up to the beach house the following morning. Dana slipped on her shades as she watched Lara drive away, shouting back to Alice that she’d catch up with her later at Shane’s to go to the gig,
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Thankyou for keeping up with this story, I really enjoy it
Ah its fun when the girls don’t act their age and party. At least Bette didn’t call the police on them, heh.
ROFL what an enjoyable chapter,lol they are all drunk, HAHA helena and alice with chocolate frosting, hehe poor lottie… i’m sure sooner or later someone will catch her and jo. alice is soooooo funny,lol..bette sleeps thru anything, poor tina,lol.. great update!
love mama bear Tina!!! PPS!!!
Think of chocolate on Alice nipple and The reserve Helena saying I’m going to eat you up. and getting caught The older they are the cuter they become. Will Lottie see ALICES NIPPLES. while .Eating the cake?? Bette and Tina getting caught hOPE THE PARTY GOES well.
Hey sofa I know wat u mean about da feeling when u read all da posts n then realize that u have to wait. Great chapter now let da fun start with the party:)Post soon Please, thanks
baby, for you i will write any kind of story…vampires, clones, angie, you got it. i’ll read the rest of this current chapter when i’m done talking to youuuuuu;) xoxoxox
wow, sofa… What a treat with back-to-back posts! I don’t think I’ll be able to eat chocolate icing again without thinking of you… errr, your story… Fun chapter, always love the drunken gang. Poor Ang though, she’ll have plenty to discuss in her future therapy!! She’ll soon be hesitant to walk into a room without covering her eyes!
Jesus, you take a week’s vacation after waiting forever for someone to post the next chapter, which they do while you are gone (BRIEFLY!) and then you get left out of the shout outs. How soon they forget. Shuffles away with head bowed, sniffling.
Hello Sofa… ok to start off… think what you will but … hmmmmm… chocolate Icing and Helena doesn’t sound to bad… nor does vanilla or any other kind of icing… so yeah… more of that please… :P… I absolutely love this story… Everytime I read it… it feels like family… the way you weave the relationships is just magical… and just so special… I love absolutely Angie and how she wants Lottie to stay… that is just so precious… the bonding of their family is so strong that it hurts to think of them losing anyone of them… you are magical… and well I must say doing a kick ass job in the spotlight :P… hehe… lovely… love and hugs, JC
For funnyone – Lol, I missed you .. stop sniffling and get back here!!! Look, I mentioned you over on my Q&A spotlight thread and you haven’t even asked me a question yet, of that’s not love what is … pfft!!!!!
Yay!! I’m so glad this story is back…it’s one of the only ones I read ’cause I love it so much. Thanks for keeping up with it!! I always love the group of friends, & jo/lottie are super cute. Can’t wait to read about Lottie’s party!
That was fun. I really like Lottie. Looking 4 ward to the beach house. Thx & PPS.
I’ve enjoyed your stories for a long time now and am just commenting. I love your Lottie character. Anything you write is golden. Looking forward to more.
Sofa, this story is getting better and better with each chapter, please keep em comming. I feel like a littl kid waiting for the next one. Md
LOL! Tina is such a good Mom to all the girls. Poor Angie having to be woke up by the drunken Aunties, now she will have something to hold over them. I am so happy that I got to read this chapter before an emotionally taxing day ahead, thanks for the smile and laughs.
Bette and Tina are still the grown ups when it comes to the gang. Only Kit is more grown up than Bette and Tina. Loved how Angie is still freaking out about catching them enjoying one another. Hope that Lottie decides to stay longer than just the summer.
This is a story you can’t get enough of. But 4 pages…bonus, thankyou!!!
Great update! I love that…Bette sleeping through the whole swim in the middle of the night. Lucky that Tina heard them…they were all three sheets to the wind! I wouldn’t eat that cake either after seeing what Lottie did. LOL
That was funny and love it!