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Summer Vacation. Chapter 42
“Any time you like …” Kit grumbled, after they’d gone round in circles five times debating pancakes or waffles,
“I’ll have waffles with syrup, and fruit please,” Jo decided on, picking Che up to sit against her hip as his moans and whines for a lift were starting to grate on her,
“I’ll have … erm … the pancakes,” Lottie decided on, “no, eggs … no, pancakes, blueberry, with …” she paused, “is Lara in?”
Kit nodded,
“With extra berries then …”
They took their seats and as they walked away, backs turned, Kit had a sudden sense of déjà vu, remembering all those mornings when they were a young, hardworking, childless couple she’d seen Bette and Tina in the same way, rocking up late for breakfast with their friends, unconcerned and unaware of anything or anyone that was going on around them,
“Kit’s looking at you funny,” Jo noted, as they both sat down,
Lottie turned and looked back, caught Kit’s eye and for a second they exchanged the same odd look that had become almost distinctly familiar and unique to both of them, before Kit smiled and dropped her eyes, going back to fixing them both their coffees,
“She does that sometimes,” Lottie replied, “I think she does it when she gets to thinking that I remind her of Bette,”
Jo pulled Che to sit on her lap, urging him to sit still in the hope it might relate to a more settled morning, “I don’t get it,” she thought aloud, continuing the conversation, “everyone says so but I don’t see that you look *that* much like her,”
Lottie shrugged, “I guess,”
In some ways it wasn’t that she looked like her, she knew that, it was the tiny nuances in their facial expressions, the way their eyes were equally expressive and their moods apt to swiftly alter and change that made Bette’s friends and family see a likeness there. For Jo, who knew Lottie really before she knew Bette, all she saw were two long legged brunettes, and if she’d been forced as an outsider to pick which of the group she might have been related to would have probably found herself opting for Helena, based on the Englishisms and public school accent alone,
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Thankyou for keeping up with this story, I really enjoy it
Ah its fun when the girls don’t act their age and party. At least Bette didn’t call the police on them, heh.
ROFL what an enjoyable chapter,lol they are all drunk, HAHA helena and alice with chocolate frosting, hehe poor lottie… i’m sure sooner or later someone will catch her and jo. alice is soooooo funny,lol..bette sleeps thru anything, poor tina,lol.. great update!
love mama bear Tina!!! PPS!!!
Think of chocolate on Alice nipple and The reserve Helena saying I’m going to eat you up. and getting caught The older they are the cuter they become. Will Lottie see ALICES NIPPLES. while .Eating the cake?? Bette and Tina getting caught hOPE THE PARTY GOES well.
Hey sofa I know wat u mean about da feeling when u read all da posts n then realize that u have to wait. Great chapter now let da fun start with the party:)Post soon Please, thanks
baby, for you i will write any kind of story…vampires, clones, angie, you got it. i’ll read the rest of this current chapter when i’m done talking to youuuuuu;) xoxoxox
wow, sofa… What a treat with back-to-back posts! I don’t think I’ll be able to eat chocolate icing again without thinking of you… errr, your story… Fun chapter, always love the drunken gang. Poor Ang though, she’ll have plenty to discuss in her future therapy!! She’ll soon be hesitant to walk into a room without covering her eyes!
Jesus, you take a week’s vacation after waiting forever for someone to post the next chapter, which they do while you are gone (BRIEFLY!) and then you get left out of the shout outs. How soon they forget. Shuffles away with head bowed, sniffling.
Hello Sofa… ok to start off… think what you will but … hmmmmm… chocolate Icing and Helena doesn’t sound to bad… nor does vanilla or any other kind of icing… so yeah… more of that please… :P… I absolutely love this story… Everytime I read it… it feels like family… the way you weave the relationships is just magical… and just so special… I love absolutely Angie and how she wants Lottie to stay… that is just so precious… the bonding of their family is so strong that it hurts to think of them losing anyone of them… you are magical… and well I must say doing a kick ass job in the spotlight :P… hehe… lovely… love and hugs, JC
For funnyone – Lol, I missed you .. stop sniffling and get back here!!! Look, I mentioned you over on my Q&A spotlight thread and you haven’t even asked me a question yet, of that’s not love what is … pfft!!!!!
Yay!! I’m so glad this story is back…it’s one of the only ones I read ’cause I love it so much. Thanks for keeping up with it!! I always love the group of friends, & jo/lottie are super cute. Can’t wait to read about Lottie’s party!
That was fun. I really like Lottie. Looking 4 ward to the beach house. Thx & PPS.
I’ve enjoyed your stories for a long time now and am just commenting. I love your Lottie character. Anything you write is golden. Looking forward to more.
Sofa, this story is getting better and better with each chapter, please keep em comming. I feel like a littl kid waiting for the next one. Md
LOL! Tina is such a good Mom to all the girls. Poor Angie having to be woke up by the drunken Aunties, now she will have something to hold over them. I am so happy that I got to read this chapter before an emotionally taxing day ahead, thanks for the smile and laughs.
Bette and Tina are still the grown ups when it comes to the gang. Only Kit is more grown up than Bette and Tina. Loved how Angie is still freaking out about catching them enjoying one another. Hope that Lottie decides to stay longer than just the summer.
This is a story you can’t get enough of. But 4 pages…bonus, thankyou!!!
Great update! I love that…Bette sleeping through the whole swim in the middle of the night. Lucky that Tina heard them…they were all three sheets to the wind! I wouldn’t eat that cake either after seeing what Lottie did. LOL
That was funny and love it!