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Summer Vacation. Chapter 43
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Bette smiled with relief in return, “Good … before we go in,” she added, after a pause, “you should just know that everyone loves having you here and we’re all really glad that you had the guts to come find me,” she hesitated, letting the words fully sink in, “especially me …”
Lottie smiled, “Thanks Bette …”
“They’re coming!” Alice hissed, and she and Tina leapt away from the window, returning to stand around the corner with Kit, Helena and Che,
Jo reached for Che and pulled him into her, covering his mouth gently as she reiterated, “Ssh!”
The door opened, and they heard Bette’s voice as she entered, “Here we are … seems a little dusty I know,”
Tina suppressed a smile, knowing they’d gone to great lengths not to clean the back porch so Lottie would be utterly drawn in to the surprise,
Lottie replied, “No, it’s nice,”
They wandered through, the house in darkness, Lottie found her eyes struggling to adjust from the brightness outside, wondering why Bette didn’t rush to draw the blinds or switch the light on,
Bette stood to her side, arms upon her shoulder, “Well, I’m glad you agreed to come cos we all just wanted to wish you a … Happy Birthday!”
And with that she flicked the light, stepping from Lottie’s side as the room erupted into cheer, bodies appearing from everywhere as Angie ran up and hugged her, followed closely by Li, Helena, Alice and Jo with Che,
Lottie stood amongst them speechless, her eyes unbelievably wide as she went over the faces in the room, all of which she recognised except one, a guy who stood beside James who she took to be his partner,
“This is …” she paused, not sure how to continue, she looked for Jo amongst the crowd and found her, her eyes looking back with a cheeky glint that both calmed and reassured her, “this is amazing …” she grinned, “you guys!”
Alice jumped up and down excitedly in front of her, “Are you surprised, do you like it?”
Lottie burst out laughing, her jaw still agape with shock, “Hell yeah I’m surprised!!” she turned back to Bette, her eyes passing over every member of their family as she did so, “and I suppose you knew *all* about this?”
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ha! what are you going to do to me in the spotlight? nuffin i’m sure, nuuuufffin! this was a great chapter sweety, i loved it. boy, bette and helena sure get along great near the end huh? makes one wonder if they might have a bit of adult fun once tina falls off a cliff and the kidlets take a nap hey? muahahahaha…ok, sorry, *ahem* in all seriousness, i do actually like your tina a lot. she’s so motheringly, and its all so wholesome in a fantastically visionary way…you’ve delved into los angeles lesbian life from a much more satisfying angle than the show does, right on down to the ongoing presence of artistic vision, the loyalties of extended family, and a little revolutionary named Che. good show baby, i look forward to more…this story really is like that ride at an amusement park that you just don’t want to leave, because the sun is shining and your grrl is beside you, and your hair is whipping in the breeze. xoxo
Sofa, this was a fabulous chapter! Che may turn out to be a little too much for poor Kit if he keeps this up. I can’t wait for Bette and Lottie to develope a closer relationship. The two of them are the only family they’ve got (and Kit of course), it would be nice for them to really find each other.
Mustard and onions-raw, for maximum spunkiness! God only knows what that mysterious brown sauce is that you Brits keep talking about. I have a birthday coming up soon, I’m going to see if I can find somebody willing to let me spit beer on her thighs-such a novel way to celebrate.
Hey there Sofa! nice to see you had a good time over the spotlight.. it was funny to read some of your answers and at the same time some of them left me in a thoughtful mood. Anyway, about this chapy.. I loved how you portrait lil Che… he just makes me smile everytime he apears on some scene. I hope Lottie and Bette can talk a little more in a future chapter.. you know… *really talk*. (readers note: tomorrow is my b-day.. how I wish I had friends like the girls!! I would love to have a surprise party like that one!.. well a girl can dream, right?). Take care em, nice week!
Heya Sofa! Good stuff! When is Tina taking that nap???? Hee Hee *evil grin* Can’t wait to see just where you take this story. For the record, I just like plain old ketchup on my hot dog! MORE!
I was surprised that it wasn’t a NC17 but I loved it none the less.I couldn’t wait to read about Lottie’s reaction to the surprise. Angie is too cute my daughter would be the same way.PPS.
Wow, they are learning more about each other. I love how the entire family still gets together. Loved the scene with Bette cleavage diving with Tina and Angie’s glare to her mom before she busted up into giggles. Post soon.
Hi Sofa! Loved ya in the spotlight! Glad to be in the *know* about the *asteriks* too funny,…. I find myself doing it too … can’t wait to see how Bette tries to convince Lotties to pursue her art, as I *hope* she will… Maybe she will have Miss Sparks’ help…(wish Jo was my *teacher*), anyway, can’t wait for the giving to begin…. I’ll just sit back on my sofa and maybe reread your great stories…actually I’ve started… Tks
Hello Sofa… first you Rocked it out in the Spotlight :P… booyaa… this is so very good… I love the family atmosphere you create… it is just so beautiful and special… not perfect… it has its flaws but that is what makes a family so very special… just being there for one another… I love how Bette is chiseling away her resistance and eventually I think she might ask “Lottie” to stay… to complete there family and to well pursue the art that so empowers their family gene… hugs, JC (King hmmmmm… ok… I accept :P)
I am glad that Bette is getting more insights into Lottie. I hope that she makes sure that they finish their conversation. Lottie and Bette need one another and I can’t wait to see them develop a closer relationship. This chapter was AWESOME!
Hrm, I wonder how Bette’s gonna get Lottie to come around to doing art full time, without Lottie feeling like she’s being nagged… The party is awesome and they’ve not even gotten round to the gift giving yet. Great chapter, I love the way this story flows. thanks, sofa!
gotta have more; love your story…of course i like the onions and brown gravy style…
Sofa you really know how to make a reader feel like there right in the story. In the morning after the pool party I could see school teacher Jo waiting for Angie to go away so she could get up. I have back yard parties in the summertime and some of my friends work at the local high school where my son goes to school, it’s all in good fun till you have to threaten you kid about keeping quite about parties at school. Then the beach, I almost felt like I was right there watching all the goings on. Great chapter, Thank you. Md
Fantastic update… wish i was at that party. gosh they had loads of fun! the humor in the update was great. but i was wondering about lotti’s thoughts of making a mistake. i really wish she would tranfer to CU and change her major to art, because that seems to be what she loves the best! medical school is so not her!
LOVED IT!!!!!!
THAT WAS GREAT!