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Summer Vacation. Chapter 9
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Tina moaned, louder as Bette began to plant tiny feathery kisses along her jaw line …
“Then what are we waiting for?” asked Bette
From the open front door came a tiny cough … “ um … Tina?” said Lottie, aware of what she’d just walked into …
“Lottie …” giggled Tina, pulling herself away from Bette’s light kisses, “we’re waiting for her,” she said, turning round to greet Lottie where she stood nervously holding a bunch of bright orange ‘Birds of Paradise’,
“Bette,” said Tina, pulling Bette’s hand to bring Bette towards her, “this is Lottie,” she said. “Lottie … this is Bette.”
Bette stood quietly taking her in, feeling as though she already knew her. For some reason she’d expected someone plain and yet she was by all accounts, very pretty. Her long dark hair and fair complexion made her look willowy and older than she was, wiser somehow. She held Bette’s stare with her eyes, watching her, Bette looked back at her and suddenly saw a myriad of expressions cross her face.
How did she managed to look so shocked, scared and in awe … all at the same time?
Lottie mentally checked herself, so … there she was … She set about remembering to breathe, then think, and most of all not speak before she’d worked out what to say.
Fate was screwing with her, did they always surprise each other like this? Would she have agreed to come if she’d known Bette would be there?
Lottie realised, like an idiot, she was still standing mute in the doorway carrying a bunch of gigantic scary looking flowers and a box of chocolate covered strawberries. She willed Tina, or Bette, to say something …
“Hi …” said Bette, after what felt like the longest time, “can I help you with those?” she asked, indicating the flowers.
“Thanks …” rushed Lottie, “they’re um … for Tina … to erm … well, to say thank you for inviting me.”
“It’s our pleasure,” replied Bette, “won’t you come inside?”
Tina watched them comically. It was strange how in the last two weeks she’d never pictured the two of them in the same room together. She wasn’t stupid, she knew there were elements of Lottie which had reminded her of Bette, the art … the eyes … the serious laugh … she’d put it all down to Bette being absent, to her looking for ways to see Bette in everyone around her.
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WOW!!!! There is some drama comming up I can see it. But not to much I hope. Thank you PPS
I really enjoyed the chapter, and I’m intrigued by what Lottie has to tell Bette. I hope you post soon.
Sofasitter…you are killing me here. What did Lottie REALLY want to say? “Keep them there were for you anyway MOM” OR ” Keep them there were for you anyway SIS” Bette will not be getting any sleep anytime soon…and we need to be little flies on the wall so post soon.
THIS WAS A NICE CHAPTER! SOOO THERES SOME DRAMA COMIN,WELL WE ARE HOOKED SOOO BRING IT ON BUT AFTER SOME TIBETTE LOVIN….TINA HAS TO PROPERLY WELCOME BETTE HOME,RIGHT….P.P.S.
i have read your story all week at work… to bad i can’t comment at work… but please know i am reading and loving every word… i hope lottie gets the courage to get this talk with bette… and soon i hope… now that doesn’t mean this story has to end… please don’t do that… but please do continue… real soon
You have me on the edge of my seat! Between the sexual tension of TIBette and Lottie’s secret I’m running around screaming! lol Post soon!
I still think Lottie’s B’s sister…but even if I’m wrong, the story’s great!! I love how you describe B&T’s relationship! They just seem…real. I’m sure it sounds weird but I just think you give them authenticity…and they’re really cute!
This chapter was delightful and very interesting. PPS.
I’m jonesin’ for some strawberries now. Not chocolate-covered ones though. I prefer Cool Whip. =)
That was great, and what a nice surprise for Tina and Angelica. Who the heck is Lottie. She can’t be Bette’s daughter, but I know theirs something.
I think Lottie is Bettes haft sister!
oh u tease…it’s gotta b Bette’s half-sister…more soon please, i can’t wait for the opening of the presents, the alone time of b and t, and the revelation…hear me??????? i can’t wait!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME!!!… I have my theory about Lottie now, I think. Okay, how about some quality reunion time for you know who… Huh? Thanks for this beautiful reunion! ;)
this is going to be interesting. please post soon because the waiting is just torture.
Wow you are a tease please post soon
This is really nice, an intriguing and well-written story. Thank you so much.
this is getting better, i want to know when Lottie will tell her little secret and how will handle the rest of the gang
i’m on the edge of my seat…who is lottie? she has fair skin not dark, so maybe she is bette’s another half sister from her white mother