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Summer Vacation. Chapter 9
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“Oh,” Lottie blushed, embarrassed, “yeah thanks … its new,” she added, hoping to redeem herself.
“It’s okay,” said the girl, laughing, “I had a late night too … just going home myself,” and she continued laughing as she walked off.
“Hey!” shouted Lottie after her, “Hey … if you were on your way to a barbeque at your boss’s house, what would you take?”
The girl laughed, raising her arms up in the air, “I don’t know … is he cute?”
“He’s a she …” Lottie replied, amused
“Then take flowers …” said the girl, “or chocolates,” she shouted, “there’s this great little shop over on Fairfax” she yelled, pointing, “epicurean … try there!”
Lottie smiled as she watched her walk away.
Tina hugged Shane tightly, “God I’ve missed you!” she said, refusing to release her tight grip,
Shane laughed a deep, warm, caring laugh, Bette and Tina were her family, before Carmen they were closest thing to family she’d ever had, “Missed you more” she said.
Tina wrapped one arm around her smiling, “Come on,” she said, “where’s my beautiful nephew?”
Everyone stood gathered around Carmen on the sofa where she sat holding their beautiful 4 month old son. He had her eyes, and a tiny crop of the blackest hair.
“I think Aunty Tina wants a hold,” Shane said quietly, she had the softest voice and yet when she spoke, everyone paid attention.
Tina held him gently in her arms, “He’s so beautiful you guys … and he’s got so big! … in just a month”
She stared down at him, thinking back almost exactly a month ago as they’d stood next to Shane and Carmen in Carmen’s mothers church and had him blessed. Neither she nor Bette believed in all that but it wasn’t really about the religion. More about welcoming another life into their family, into their hearts, to love and protect.
Tina smiled to herself remembering how later, back in their home Bette had crawled into her lap and cried, her sheer happiness for Shane. It was then Bette had first asked her whether she ever thought about them having another child. Looking at him then, the tiny baby she held in her arms, she couldn’t help but wonder.
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WOW!!!! There is some drama comming up I can see it. But not to much I hope. Thank you PPS
I really enjoyed the chapter, and I’m intrigued by what Lottie has to tell Bette. I hope you post soon.
Sofasitter…you are killing me here. What did Lottie REALLY want to say? “Keep them there were for you anyway MOM” OR ” Keep them there were for you anyway SIS” Bette will not be getting any sleep anytime soon…and we need to be little flies on the wall so post soon.
THIS WAS A NICE CHAPTER! SOOO THERES SOME DRAMA COMIN,WELL WE ARE HOOKED SOOO BRING IT ON BUT AFTER SOME TIBETTE LOVIN….TINA HAS TO PROPERLY WELCOME BETTE HOME,RIGHT….P.P.S.
i have read your story all week at work… to bad i can’t comment at work… but please know i am reading and loving every word… i hope lottie gets the courage to get this talk with bette… and soon i hope… now that doesn’t mean this story has to end… please don’t do that… but please do continue… real soon
You have me on the edge of my seat! Between the sexual tension of TIBette and Lottie’s secret I’m running around screaming! lol Post soon!
I still think Lottie’s B’s sister…but even if I’m wrong, the story’s great!! I love how you describe B&T’s relationship! They just seem…real. I’m sure it sounds weird but I just think you give them authenticity…and they’re really cute!
This chapter was delightful and very interesting. PPS.
I’m jonesin’ for some strawberries now. Not chocolate-covered ones though. I prefer Cool Whip. =)
That was great, and what a nice surprise for Tina and Angelica. Who the heck is Lottie. She can’t be Bette’s daughter, but I know theirs something.
I think Lottie is Bettes haft sister!
oh u tease…it’s gotta b Bette’s half-sister…more soon please, i can’t wait for the opening of the presents, the alone time of b and t, and the revelation…hear me??????? i can’t wait!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME!!!… I have my theory about Lottie now, I think. Okay, how about some quality reunion time for you know who… Huh? Thanks for this beautiful reunion! ;)
this is going to be interesting. please post soon because the waiting is just torture.
Wow you are a tease please post soon
This is really nice, an intriguing and well-written story. Thank you so much.
this is getting better, i want to know when Lottie will tell her little secret and how will handle the rest of the gang
i’m on the edge of my seat…who is lottie? she has fair skin not dark, so maybe she is bette’s another half sister from her white mother