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Sun Salutations: Chapter 12
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“Hel, we’re not going to do this right now.”
“Do what? What are we doing?”
“Look. I wanted you to know the truth, you now know it and I’m going to let you deal with it in whatever way you want.”
“I’m a little confused here Bette. I confessed my feelings to you, we shared a wonderful kiss and now you’re telling me to apologize to Tina for not ***** my wife? What am I missing Bette? I DO NOT want to discuss that twit. I’d much rather talk about us”, smiling, as she moved her hand between Bette and herself.
“A monster Hel?”
“That’s right. A monster. She likes to ***** with people for sport!”
While leaving her eyes as they were,
“No, we aren’t quite done here
“Thanks for the reminder to disinfect my mouth Bette. I can not BELIEVE that you are under Tina’s wicked spell. She is going to ***** you until you’re blue in the face and then leave. You mark my words Bette.” Obvious signs of frustration embraced
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ok tea still hot!! and whats up with carmen stalking?? luved it!!
they both drank green tea. oh very cleaver my pretty. greenie, im so not kidding about the helbette stuff. lol. kinda. my monitor will shrivel and die if that happens. there is no earthly reason why. make it a dream sequence/stand alone chappy to get i out of your system, girl. dont they have breathing techniques for that. heehee. why do you think your blocked. cuz its nasty on so many levels. im as warped as tina when it comes to working out, so i get it big time. honest to god when you wrote, tina started looking around deviously, my stomach dropped and i said, oh shit out loud, knowing what was gonna be happening. and then a big grin. ya really do bring it girl. so do what you have to do tonight, *wink wink* to get the evil thoughts out of your system. there is hella enough drama all over the boards and all the other stuff you mentioned they have to work through. said in tinas voice, are you listening. thanks
This tina kind of borders on a bit of psycho to a degree, how she can be so callous (honest)with carmen like that…it just invites stalking…Hmmm..But obviously bette can hold her own…a fight between these two would be very explosive..yikes!!!
next pls
LOL! I see that you started writing a Hel/Bette scene already! With YOU in the middle! I mean “they both drank green tea”?? =P JK!
As for the REAL Hel/Bette scene, well, I hope that your author’s block stays on permanently. But in case it wears off, I just have to say, I hope Tina will have fun “blowing off steam” with her next conquest.
Nah, that’s not what I mean.
Really, I already dread the moment it happens, but I know it will add something important to the story. Maybe to Bette and Tina’s relationship too? If Tina decides not to simply take the next person in the line just to make Bette jealous, which would be… predictable and boring. Seriously, if she wants to “settle down” *shivers* going back to her old ways would just prove Helena right. So no “blowing off steam” with anyone, specially somebody who work with wood and stuff. Please!
I appreciate that Tina is trying to change, that Bette doesn’t get all psyco-crazy-bitch over Tina’s past, that they can deal with all their shit as adults. They communicate in a way that is rare in most Bette/Tina’s stories. Which is why all those loose ends worry me so much.
I understand exactly how Tina may fit into Bette’s.. uh.. necessities (?) at the moment. I also know it’s not fair to say that this whole thing means much more to her than it does to Bette, but it is the truth. As you said, Bette is only now getting her life back and Tina’s been there to help her, so yes, it means a lot to her to have Tina around. But she’s changing and moving on because she NEEDS to, while Tina is doing that because of Bette. I don’t know if that made any sense, though O.o…
It’s just… it hurts when you see that someone like TINA is willing to settle down and Bette isn’t!!! It sounds unfair. What the hell, so is life, right? Bette is going to be wasting the best thing that ever happened to her, but it’s her choice. >>.<< *remembers Tina’s class and takes a deep breath* Well, maybe they’re just not in the same page. It happens all the time. I just feel sorry for them. Finally, I keep saying that I’m worried about Bette’s reaction, the possibility of a Hel/Bette scene, but that’s what makes it interesting, right? Oh, and in case you decide to post that Hel/Bette part, please let us know so we can be prepared, that is, leave a bucket beside the pc =P Hm… One last comment.. I think this Tina is Geminy.
Alright, my girls are still good (whew). I think Bette should have a conversation with Tina and let her know that she is not ready to settle down. Tina made mention a few chapters back that she needed Bette in her life in whatever capacity, as such what if Bette let’s Tina know that she needs this time to be a ‘free spirit.’ How will Tina deal with it, if in effect she becomes like Carmen (jealous). This difference should be that Tina has the opportunity to ultimately settle down with Bette in the future. Whereas Carmen has no chance with Tina.
I don’t agree with honda90 about Tina bordering on psycho. I know someone who can act just like that… or even worse. *shrugs*
At least Tina is giving Carmen an “out”. Telling her to walk away and move on. She doesn’t keep Carmen hanging, you know.
Uh… now that I think of it, maybe honda90 is right… Then this other person I know is way beyond psycho =P
Great story – but I feel kinda bad for Helena and Carmen – maybe they should get together – maybe not. It would be nice for them to experience true love also.
Carmen needs to accept the fact that Tina is with Bette now. Hopefully there won’t be problems with B&T down the line. At the rate they’re having sex it makes you wonder if it’s all a little too rushed. Like what Helena said “She is going to fuck you until you’re blue in the face and then leave”.. I guess time will tell. Can’t wait for more!
The moment they went into the room with the AV equipment, I was dreading something humiliating…like their voices being blasted over some speaker through a mic that was ‘accidentally’ left on… WHEW!
Man, so many possibilities…how exciting! And I honestly don’t think the world would end if there were a HelBette scene…as long as it worked in well with the story…and as long as AlphaBette and the Letter T end up together…
Yay, greentea!
“Whose pussy is this Tina?” YEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!
I was anxiously awaiting for this to get flipped back on Tina!!!
“So, Bette Porter is now the proud owner of your pussy?”
“Hi Carmen, as a matter of fact I am. Thanks for asking.
As I let out another……OHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!! Claim what’s yours Bette!!
Now, about Bette settleling down? Isnt that what she’s been doing since Ziggy walked out of her life. She wasnt involved with anyone, and even she said that she missed the togetherness/ the feelings.
Not that I am asking for it, but I think a Hel/Bet scene would be kinda kinky.
I dont think Tina is being fair to Carmen. Granted that Tina was a “free spirit” when they first hooked up, and granted Carmen said she could “handle it.” Let me guess, Carmen probably did handle it well BEFORE her feelings got involved. I think Tina is treating Carmen’s feelings/heart waaaaaaaaaay to nonchalantly.
Great chapter, I totally disagree with those that say that Tina is psycho. Tina told Carmen the deal straight-up when they first started dating. While Carmen told Tina she understood, she was inernally ignoring what Tina was saying, or believing that she would later get her to change her mind. That is why I don’t feel sorry for Carmen–If you can’t stand the heat, then stay out of the kitchen!! The way that Helena acted towards Bette, I don’t see how they can remain roommates. Helena only wants things and people on her own terms, that was the problem with her and Darby, and while she will not have a forfilling long term relationship. It takes committment and compermise. Helena really does not do well with compermising. I love how Bette is staking her claim. Please continue.
I’m on the first page, second paragraph. Helena is about to get it, right between the eyes! Contrary to most on this site, I did not mind Helena too much, particularly when she was walking away…did someone say ‘bum-y-licious’?
Back to the massacre…
well you’ve done it again. another great chapter. they were drinking green tea? lol. cute. I love how you had Helena say the same lines that B said to T on the show….”that woman is a dragon! she likes to fuck with people for sport. clever green.
well it is obvious that these 2 must discuss some things and I am sure they will. I know you said the characters write for themselves, but u definitely have a gift for storytelling. keep up the good work.
haven’t read your post, since I’ll be on a 20-hrs plane ride, i did copy and paste your post onto my laptop. but i’ll just drop by a comment here… Tina and Carmen? Bette and Helena? Surely a fantasy huh… Interesting though…
I am just completely playing past your Hel-Bette comments, whatever they were. Denial. Nope, did not happen…
Joseph Campbell is on my TV right now, saying all of existence is the dream of Vishnu. Does Vishnu know you what you are doing with his dream?
Whose dream is this?
Way-oh…Way-oh…
im glad u liked the fact that i was speechless cuz yet again i am. very good chapter please post soon!!!!!!!!!!
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i love this story! tina’s not the crazy one, imho, but she is the one that’s gonna get blindsided in this one.. kinda like carmen did! Watch out tina!I think bette is the one who’s gonna “fuck you until you’re blue in the face and then leave” …just don’t think bette can handle the type of relationship that tina is looking for right now..and i think the player is gonna get played! bette has the upper hand right and lots of control/ power/ attention from tina right now..wow greentea, her (bette’s) dialect is smokin’…but i’m hoping that maybe “the sun goddess” will sense some disharmony in this relationship and please, get back in the game…
Hey greentea! New fan here! *Waves* I LOVE your story! There’s simply nothing like it on this site. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I can’t wait to read more!
:D another n00b here. this story is grrrrreat. :P i dunno wat the real characters r like tho cuz the l word duznt screen in my country yet. *sob* so sad… keep up the gud work tho nd plz post again soon!
I only feel bad for Helena because I want her to have Bette. Great read.
Damn B&T is so hot and love it. Maybe Carmen and Helena can be a couple!
No,No,No stalking. Tina was honest.with Carmen. Let it go Carmen
Great story just read it from the begining and really enjoyed it please post soon!!!!
fav line: “Bette bit her own arm to keep from screaming.” been there done that..i just love u… who took the air from your room..shall I bring you some oxygen my dear??? you know something funny, I was out with a client today who mentioned she had the most deliciaous drink at starbucks the other day, a green tree frappucino..I sucked in some air and said “was it delicious??” she said it was :P
Hay there, I have just read all your chapters in one delightful swoop. Your gift is great indeed, such light from your words, a very positive energy indeed. As martial arts fanatic (from a very young age), I adore the concepts of the mind combined with the body, your story … indeed your words, offer that Eastern holistic wonder I am so fascinated by. Thank you, just simply fantastic, an absolute pleasure to read. ( A deep bow )
Feel sorry for Carmen and Helena they want Tina and Bette respectively but the cant have them or will they?
Your writing just gets better and hotter on each chapter…I wonder if the sale of Greentea at Starbucks or any of the other Coffee establishments has increased in the last week or two..lol…
Your Tina and Bette together = “Hot Tottie”
GT keep it up and thank you.
I´m still here…breathing in and out…heartmonitor on..people checking up on me, just kidding…WOW what an amazing story you have going on here…where the hell does it all come from…other than experience I guess….
Maybe I shoud try some green tea if it makes me write like this. Can´t wait for you next post. You always make me smile and wanting more
BRING ON BETTE AND HELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Give me a heads up when it’s coming pun intended so i can have some snacks ready.
I called tina on her psycho ass like in chapter 2. That chick is crazy. She would make a good stalker. Bette better have her nikes on and start jogging now cause when the time comes she might need to run like hell.
I had the green tea frapp at starbucks today. fucking good!! so my question for miss greentea is what do you taste like. LMAO
OK it’s the weekend so I can run my mouth so bring on the chapters!!!
B&H togther not!!!!!!!! but don’t let helena turn evil maybe carmen beat it!!!!!!!!!!