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Sun Salutations: Chapter 15
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Previously:
Bette wiped her runny nose and sadly looked at Tina. “Hey T. I left my portfolio at the gym so I’m going to run by there quickly and get it. Do you want me to get you some medicine or something to eat while I’m out? Tina wasn’t one for taking medicine for any ailment. She usually took the natural remedy route.” Leaning back against a soft cylindrical pillow, Tina said, “I think I’m good for now Bette. Take your time. I’ll probably take a shower in a few to relax. I’ll be fine. You go get some air.and your portfolio.”
Tina knew that Bette may have left her portfolio at the gym but she needed to escape the confines of her home in order to breathe. Painful memories left Bette void of the very thing that sustained her. How Tina’s heart painfully ached for her. She so wanted to help take her hurt away but realized this was something that Bette had to do all by herself. She had already come a long way but there was still a long, bumpy road ahead.
TBC.
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Chapter 15 – There’s No Place Like Home
Bette returned home to find Tina freshly showered and asleep in her bed. The soft beige cotton sheet barely graced her hips leaving very little to the imagination. Bette covered her sleeping beauty and watched Tina’s chest systematically rise and fall like clockwork before going to the kitchen to put up a few groceries. The phone shrilled loudly startling Bette. She looked at it while it rang expecting to see it vibrate or move. It was just that loud, or at least it seemed. She jumped upon hearing the unsettling noise and answered promptly after the second ring.
“Hello Bette, how are you?” the melodic voice happily sang.
“Hel, it’s so good to hear from you. I’m good. I should be asking how you are.”
“I’m doing pretty well actually. I was calling to tell you that I’ve decided not to take the job here in
“Well, that means you won’t be moving then right?” Bette said happily.
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OMG, you have got to be kidding me. I lost track of how many times Tina stopped, I was dying. See were still having these trust issues here. Also getting the sense that Tina may or may not go do something stupid just because. Time, Tina, it’ll take time. But the more your there when she comes home, when she wakes up, she’ll begin to realize your not going anywhere. If you go out and do a bit of your old routine it could ruin everything, so lets not. So glad I check for any updates before I left for the day.
Holy moly!!! I’m overcome with the sudden urge to go buy a bunch of fruit…yum! And I’ve now officially decided that ‘T’ stands for ‘tease’.
More hurt feelings and insecurity and drama…-sigh-… Please, oh pleeeease stick it out Tina. Have a little faith my bhakti blonde!
aaahhhhh, Green thanks for quenching my thirst for your NC-17. Always a pleasure.
Down to business. Tina retreating from Bette is just plain wrong. She knows that Bette needs to travel this road of healing. She should understand more than anyone. Bette, thinking that she should have lied is just plain crazy. Stick with the open and honest communication and they will go far. Well, learning that lesson may be a part of their journey together.
Shouldn’t the intensity of pleasure (physical, mental, emotional, spiritual) they experience with each other encourage them to stay focused and continue down the road of togethernes?
Wow that was realy Hot! Poor Bette all that teasing I think revange should be in order. I hope Bette can come to fuly trust Tina and I hope that Tina does’nt do anything to screw that up. I look forward to the next chapter. I don’t always leav a comment but I am always reading and totaly enjoying this fanfic.
hey,
my finger is okay. i don’t know the exact term, but it’s going to be on a metal thingie with bandages all over for a week =P
anyway, i had to read this chapter pretty fast because there’s a rainstorm outside and i gotta turn off the comp asap. oh, and on top of it all my mouse stopped working! so yeah, tell bette not to feel so bad about her day.
did i mention i also went out of hot water during my shower right after i broke my finger? *lol*
if bette is still feeling bad, well, welcome to the club.
though i’m not really feeling bad. i like it when it rains, specially at night.
so back to the chapter…
tina’s not used to all the emotional baggage, so it’s expected that she’d freak. she’s gotta learn how to deal though, if she ever expects to settle down. oh well, she’s just now learning what it means to ‘settle’. good luck learning that lesson!!
btw, wasn’t that part of what made her fall in love with bette from the beginning? she knew bette came with a past…
she’s right about the trust part though. but either way, it’s too soon to know. trust usually comes with time right? they jumped into something too intense too soon in their relationship.
not that that’s a bad thing, it’s just a fact. i don’t have much experience, but i guess from what i hear, actually mostly from what i read, that is something very common in the L universe =P
she just has to keep in mind that just because that’s how things are now, it doesn’t mean that’s how they’ll always be. they just have to give it a try.
they’re starting out a relationship, changes are bound to happen. they just have to make sure that, since they’re changing, growing up together now, they change for the best. cause when you’re put on the spot like tina was, you have to decide whether you’ll take a step forward or backward…
hmm… okay, forward or backward doesn’t really matter. what matters is that you don’t get stuck in a bad place! yep, that’s it.
raising walls against the person you love is definitely a bad place, so that’s a no-go! if she wants bette’s trust she has to make sure she gives no room for.. uh.. no-trust? untrust? mistrust? argh, whatever. sorry, it’s too much trouble checking an online dictionary without a mouse =P
the emotional walls are a sign that she doesn’t trust bette.
then again, it could work too. it could “shake some sense into her” or something…
when tina is worried that love may not be enough and blablabla, she just has to remind herself that they’re both freaking out for the same reason: they’re scared of losing each other.
so maybe the problem isn’t really bette not being able to trust tina. it’s bette finding it in herself to trust anyone at all. with tina’s help she will eventually get there.
hopefully…
damn green when is your book of lesbian erotica coming out? You have a serious gift with the nc-17 scenes! FOR REAL! anyway about the story I think Tina should realize that she was the one that told Bette that she would accept her as broken as she is. she also said that when B was no longer enough for her she would talk to B. so her withdrawing at this juncture is just plain wrong, bec B was just being honest with her feelings.
so as always, I’m loving where you are taking this, so keep going. I can’t wait to see what’s swirling around in that head of yours. wink
Great chapter – Tina should understand Bette’s fears. It’s not even a trust issue – no matter how good of a realtionship you have, you can’t say you don’t fear being without your other. You may have complete faith in your love, but that doesn’t mean you don’t have this fear.
“She used her other hand to gently pinch and circle Bette’s clit while they continued kissing. Speaking softly into Bette’s mouth, she said, “You feel so good baby. You make me so happy. Do you like this?”
And there’s still two whole pages to go…
If she circles the clit, you will submit For shizzle, my Tizzle!
Peaches are now my favorite fruit. I’m going out tomorrow to buy a truckload of them. Such a hot chapter that turned so serious and sad. These two certainly have alot of baggage and I love the way you have them carrying said baggage around. Hopefully they will be able to buy a new set together…one day. Love this story and your writing.
“Pressed closely against the woman she loved, Tina joined the slow, steady rhythm and lifted Bette’s plastered hair out of the way to kiss her neck. … Tina slid her hands down both of Bette’s outstretched arms. They locked hands & intertwined fingers.”
Polymorphous perversity at it’s best!
Don’t you just love women’s sexuality?
Ah, the infinite color and variety…
now im frustrated sweetness. you cant love like that and wonder if its worth it. you need to just work on it. and it is a pseudo armor. you cant turn off and on feelings like that. you have me slipping off my chair and then the next cursing my monitor. not playing nice greenie. and then to say ill post when i can. naughty naughty. if tina ever wants bette to trust her, doing something stupid is not the answer. bette camping out at tinas door, now thats an answer. the comfortable meaningful dialogue needs to continue for healing to begin. cuz we both know its already started. tina knows that bette has trust issues and its not about her. she got to say her fear well bette gets to say hers and they both win. its gonna take some time but its always worth it when its love like that. trust and communication. come now sweetness lets not go down a really shitty path. they are having enough drama. dont ya think. have a good weekend. first is the best.
Pushmepullyou
I have a question for luvs_the_l_word.
You wrote (and I quote): “as soon as i started reading this and the peach thing came in i started to crave a peach,”
Uh-huh…and then (following that logic) what did you crave after that? Ha!
The reader comments for this story are a world in and of themselves!
GT – in addition fo providing us one of the best stories on the site, you’re conducting a virtual seminar on fanfictious behavior!
If I couldn’t flow futuristic would ya
put your two lips on my [*], kiss it – could ya?
Can I get a CEU?
I was a little behind with your story but now I’m caught up and very satisfied.. mmmm I want a peach now, or do I want a Bette or Tina, I don’t know I can’t decide lol That was another amazing chapter. Drama is up the road and it might get ugly but I’ll be along for the ride. I know where Bette is coming from, with trusting people again, but I hope she can come to her senses and see that she is Tina’s one and only and that she won’t leave. Hopefully Tina won’t go back to her old ways to get her mind off Bette. Can’t wait to see what happens!
Greentea, it’s the differences that I enjoy the most about this story.
Thanks for another good read. Hopefully, both of these ladies can learn how to trust. If not, there is always Helena. :)
Please let them work thing out!
so hot tea…n then the walls…killin me smalls!! haha i luv it continue soon
Simply enchanting, you have a voice that is so tender and seductive, this story is so much more than superficial. A consummate pleasure, thank you so much.
Great chapter and so HOT!!!! Tinas got it real bad. Can’t wait for your posts!
GT, a breath of fresh air again. Your writing is really wonderful.
(from your author’s note)
snQQpy – LOL! I asked Bette about this and she said Porter-Kennard Airways is the carrier to Ecstasy Land. There are several flights daily. Tickets may be purchased online or in person. Let me know if you have an enjoyable trip! Btw, I think you let your Fuckodex out of your sight. It’s at Tina’s. Bette wants to know who the fuck it belongs to, babe.
ROFLMAO!! ^5 GT, ^5…This was a perfect answer…I enjoyed it!!
GT – As always, another NC-17 in which you left me panting and breathless….this was quite an “amazing” experience. -_- until next time………
Moving right along – I dont understand what it is about Tina that just annoys me throughout this story. Its as though she completely forgets that all of this is very new to B; and although T wants B to be open and honest with her, whats the point of it, when afterwards, T turns her back on B.
These 2 need to keep communication flowing. T needs understand that this is not just about her feelings, emotions and insecurities.
Post again soon GT
wow the love scene was awesome. your story reflects such a wide range of emotions in B&T . love it
Their ” fucking muscles”have to hurt by now lol!!!!! trust that takes time and they both have major issue they need to work out that have everything and nothing to with each other so they both will make plenty of mistakes to come.
Yes…I do :] Do you know how wonderful and amazing you are??? Your story makes me so happy I mmmmm I could read it for hours and hours and hours..mmmmmmmmm….You have a Beautiful Holiday…Beautiful
Bette does has some major issues about abandonment she needs to tackle this head on and talk to either Tina or someone else. I’m glad she was honest with Tina on telling her why she was in a blind panic when she awoke and Tina was not in bed beside her.
Why does Tina feel as if she has had an anvil thrown against her heart she know that she loves Bette but there is always a but.. in a sense this whole relationship is just as new to Tina as it is to Bette. What i loved about this chapter was the intensity of it.
Thank you for a great read and enjoy your holiday weekend, lucky you.
Great cahpter as always, I know that Bette has a long road ahead of her before she can truly fully trust Tina or anyone else, but she does realize that her comment hurt Tina and she should step up and try to make amends. She should have embrased Tina and said that she is trying to work on her abandament issue. How about some prid pro quo ( you know a little sometime, sometime in return), in other words make Tina SAY YOUR NAME. Yes, Tina needs patience, but Bette also needs to be more forth comming. How about she paint a picture for Tina?
Continues to sizzle chapter after chapter. You set a heck of a mood.
u drive me insane!
as soon as i started reading this and the peach thing came in i started to crave a peach, then i was really happy cos B&T were so happy and i needed that cos i just finished watching episode 1 of S2 and now tinas putting up a wall cos bette has trusting issues. and for once im not so speechless :) and im happy that helena is gone for the moment and i no she’ll be back lets just hope that B&T are good by then cos i really dont want a helena/bette thing. POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!
Please gove Tina hope, and Bette faith. Give them both strength. They need to rely on each other now, more than ever. Thanks, greentea!
W.O.W. so many interesting diversions to the eruption of their love. here is a line that can easily be disected to gain insight to both Tina’s and Bette’s intimacy issues that both of our lovely characters are experiencing.
“Through a forced, weak smile, Bette spoke. “Tina, yesterday you told me about your worst nightmare. Well, my worst nightmare is that you’ll leave me without any warning.”
it seems that these 2 have begun to self-disclose emotional and or the psychological underpinnings of their fears, angst and grave difficulty staying with a situation that raises difficult or romantic emotional and spiritual concerns.
While some might say . that Bette’s recurrent fear of abandonment may create a self-fulfilling scenario but she was being honest with tina about her fears – and that she did not want them to rule or ruin what she has. Tina on the other hand, shows eomtional weakness when she decides that she needs some time on her own – instead of simply staying and then having a discussion about their fears & about how scary it is to potentially meet the one person you believe ‘gets’ you. And in many instances, many people self=sabotage what they have long before it could of become more! But Tina is now truly showing her insecure & frightened side as witnessed by her needing to flee the situation and place some level of distant between her heart and bettes heart. I KNOW :-) this wll work out b/c so many of us have had to learn this lesson, that it’s just not okay to split when two people begin to share their inner most fears b/c that in my humble opinion is the true beginning of a relationship that can be hopefully sustained.
F*ck Greeny…you do know how to give your readers an NC-17…..holy smoky….now what the hell is this with Tina an Bette….those two better come to their senses and get back together. Do post soon…..