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    Sun Salutations: Chapter 19

    Story written on September 21, 2005 by greentea.
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    That thing you do.

    Previously:

     

    “May I speak to you for a minute?  We need to reach an understanding.”  Upon hearing these words, Tina closed her eyes briefly, tried to collect and compose herself, quietly recited a mantra for calmness and walked over to Bette.  Her heart was in the pit of her stomach.  Bette held Tina’s stare for a few minutes before speaking.  “Tina, if I happen to give you flowers, will you promise to let them enter your home and not donate them to a good cause?”

    “Of course Bette.” Tina sighed.

    “Good.  Thank you.”  Bette replied through a crooked grin and headed for the shower.

    “T?”  Bette turned around again to face the woman who was now at her wit’s end.

    “Yeah babe?”  Tina asked, wondering when this would end. 

    “It seems that you’re a little tense.  Why don’t you just relax for a little while.  Would you like me to get you something to drink?   I think we have cranberry juice.”  Bette laughed and skedaddled to the shower.

    Tina shook her head and chuckled softly to herself.  “God, I love that woman.” she said aloud, to no one.

      

    TBC  

     

    Chapter 19 – That thing you do.  

    My tongue is smiling.  – Abigail Trillin  

    Bette sat comfortably on the soft oversized couch cautiously dunking oreos in milk.  She giggled to herself while watching the pure white liquid become contaminated with small dark dots.  One leg was draped over the armrest as she bounced her foot up and down enjoying the rhythmic tap caused by the motion.  She was relaxed and happy, basking in the warmth of Tina’s love.  Like the sun, Tina was bright and powerful – emanating light, energy and heat to all within her extensive reach.  However, she could be just as damaging and hazardous as the sun if exposure to her intensity was during peak hours and for prolonged periods of time.  Just as conditions at the sun’s core were extreme, the same applied to Tina.  And like those that worship the mighty source of light and warmth, Bette bathed in Tina – fully exposed and often without protection to guard herself from potentially harmful rays.  Bette had never met anyone as intense yet relaxed in all her life.  It was like Tina was a walking oxymoron – but in a good way.  And if it were up to science, there was probably no reasonable explanation how her existence could even be.  Tina had unshakable belief in her girlfriend which sustained Bette in ways she thought no one could.  The previously married & abandoned woman found herself starting to depend on Tina’s love and support, and although this dependence was still rather unsettling to Bette, being around Tina made her very happy.  In Bette Porter’s eyes, Tina Kennard was no less than a miracle.

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    1. I typically do not comment often but WOW, I had to say that was amazing and well written. I could seriously see it in my mind and I can safely say it was ood for me too :)

    2. Good gawd greentea – i would have to say that was like winning the superbowl (to extend the football references *grin*). Great….no fucking fabulous chapter. I should not have read this at work. Whew!

    3. Green, simply INCREDIBLE!! I am a willing and eager passenger on your journey through Bette and Tina’s time and space.

      Another breathtaking installment (wiping beads of sweat from my brow).

    4. Back to back great chapters…again spoiling us….You mix just a hint of angst with a lot more lov’n..and thank you for that..there are some really great stories being written, but heavey as well…this is a ray of sunshine in the storm…thankyou..

    5. I usually do not comment on your story but I follow it faithfully. This my dear is no doubt in my mind NC17. I almost fell off my chair reading this. I had to pick my mouth off of the floor for the last 2 pages because it wouldn’t stay closed. My god that even got me turned on just reading and I am straight. You definately have a way with words honey and don’t stop.

    6. uh, wow! i just recently read your entire story and am enjoying it immensly. love the spin that you have put on the two characters and hope that you stay with it for a while.

      PS- loved your comments in the beginning about how it was that you got through your run. very nice. i have to admit, i do some of my best thinking when i am out exercising. it’s not just the body that gets a workout after all…

    7. *THUDDDDDDDDDDDDDD*….Ummm..yea umm..well I tried not to pass out…lol and i managed to hold myself till there:
      “Bette lightly licked the rim of Tina’s ear before delving her tongue inside. She kissed and licked an erotic trail up and down Tina’s neck while continuing to drive her fingers into Tina’s heated center.”–that was my end! *LOL*
      Seriously..Im gonna let this process a lil so I be back to comment later. But just so you know. HOLY FUCKIN SH*T…the things you do (write) to me woman! ;-)

    8. Well, well … You do shine brightly don’t you. A pleasure to read such a well written scene, detail in such an act can become perfunctory, you manage with class, and a wicked sense of ironic gentle humour to avoid this, and make the enactment of love …. Lovely. Thank you …. Appropriately I am off to Yoga now, … the Martial Artist needs to lower her guard, and the woman … let go.
      Thank you again.

    9. That was a GREAT chapter! I was laughing picturing bette dunking oreos in her milk, while flipping channels and looking at a magazine. . .something I TOTALLY do! Please post again soon!

    11. Holy cow greenie…….that was…OMG…I don´t know what to say…
      First I see a post from you and then you make me smile big time and speechless….love the update so do keep going.

    12. ~Wipes milk and oreo cookie crumbs from mouth~ ~Clears throat~ Much better than smoking a cigarette. Greenie, have I told you that I am addicted to Oreo cookies…just like Bette? Why oh why did I read this chapter at work? Between “may I please eat you now T?” and “When you come, may I swallow it?” I just about lost it. Thank goodness I have an office with a door…that locks!

    13. That was blanking HOT – oh my God!
      You must be a great lover to be writing this stuff – I loved it! I feel like Betee and Tina are coming together more and more.

    14. OK something that should’ve taken two mins to read ran on for like two hours! Tina’s leg cramped? My whole thing is cramped and twitching. I had to start then stop. Start again, then stop again. I’m throbbing and I can’t get the images out of my mind!!! If I had a ciggy I’d start smoking. Gosh gurl, you got my undies tied up in a bunch!

    15. OMG, are you trying to kill us. First off I’m trying to read this at work, mistake, huge, big. I had to stop I don’t know how many times just to breath, and then I have employees asking me questions like I can answer. I don’t even know what I said. Your amazing. You have us laughing, drooling, spinning, breathless, dizzy, and a few other emotions that at this moment in time I can’t even begin to comment on. This story has been awesome from the begining and it just keeps getting better. I’m not sure how much more reassurance Ms. Bette needs that Tina really loves her, but hey I’m convinced. So glad we can help you with your running, how many miles? Thank God no one tries it after one of your chapters cos I don’t think we would have enough oxygen left. My hat is off to you.

    17. Green, also wanted to say that I love the growing familiarity and connection between them. It’s like Tina knows what Bette is doing/thinking and vice versa.

      You think your slick don’t you, Green? Slipping in Bette’s emotional progress ever so gently having her possibly believe in Tina and their relationship (even if for a second). Smile.

    19. Oh my golly, I just look so forward to your posts… I really can’t deny what a turn on this story is, Tina and Bette’s luscious character and your writing are…gulp. I too find my jaw unhinged and on the floor, while my lungs flutter atop Everest as I struggle, oh so happily to read and reread your awesome tale of all things L..thanks so very much

    21. GOOD GOD ALMIGHTY!!!! i read it once. fucking speachless. i could not form a coherent thought. so i went and did other stuff, to try and find some calm. yeah right. like that was happening anytime soon. teehee came back to try and say anything of value to you. so here i am after reading it again, that im still so undone that i hope i make sense.

      the visuals you envoke. the oreos. the panty clad bette. tee writing in her journal. the thoughts of them just being settled. did my heart good. they find such comfort in each other. and my love, drama whatever, it’ll come i get it. but ifs its too nasty, im tying your shoelaces together and hiding your yoga mat honey. *sloppy kiss*

      there is NO ONE who can take bette anywhere close to where tina takes her. and vice versa. what/why the fuck would either want anyone, let alone HELLNO, to even put her grubby hands on her. like a taste test or something. yikes. its like settling for, i dont know, a million and oneth place. you have me on a one way ride to a “full body throb” i entered the greentea zone long ago and dammit im not leaving. =P sweetie, im so unsettled that i dont think any amount of breathing or lifting is gonna help this time. im done.

    22. You are a MACHINE! A POWERHOUSE..Did you know? Have you been told? It’s funny, I identify so much with many of the details of your story…this one hit home only too closely “Bette had become superb in the bedroom so unbelievable quickly. She displayed too much confidence for Tina’s dubious ego to handle. Although Tina loved the fact that Bette was an extraordinary lover, it was she who held the title.” Sometimes I think you’re my lover writing these sweet stories for us, but I asked you the other night and you said no ;p So I have no idea who you are GreenTea, but I DO know you are Beautiful! Thank you :)

    24. Greentea,
      Loved your excerpt from your journal. (Was anyone doing to you what Bette was doing to Tina while she was writing in hers? Ha!Ha!) You must know that you literally keep me going with your story. I am constantly switching my mind over to it every chance I get. How could I not, when you write things like this:

      “With too many blinding white teeth displayed to count and one eyebrow raised for emphasis, Tina slowly and softly purred “Tell me Bette, will you melt in my mouth and not in my hands?”
      Bette retorted with a soft and sexy chuckle. “Hmmm, let’s see T. I could do both, depending on your preference…or mine” she smiled coyly.”

      How alluring is that? (And still having to remember to breathe!) Please keep Tina in Bette’s heart and vice versa. The way you delineate their love is so very soothing. And when they are stressed out, I feel angst. And yes, your writing is that powerful – it flows right off the pages and into my life!

    26. This story is just amazing!!! I don’t think i have read anyone else who can write as beautifully and as descriptive as you keep up the great work can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

    29. and the winner of the cold shower award is…….Greentea for Sun Salutations!!!
      All I can say after that chapter is shitdamnmotherfucker! You have definitely taken the nc-17 to a new level. damn girl, and you were the shit before this one.
      I love how Bette and Tina are so competitive in bed, but in a good way. I like that Tina had to show Bette who the champ was. Damn green you spoil me. I can read this over and over and still get a…ahem..reaction LOL!

      thanks for your comments in your author’s note. It warms me to know that our comments inspire to do well. I am glad you have become ‘unblocked’. You are so bad! bring it on baby!

    31. once again. just stunningly brilliant . the way in which u map your words is almost unfathomable . who R U? so many lines are hilarious, touching, stimulating, mindblowing, but this one just made me roll on the friggin floor: “Just like the temperature in some places and unemployment in others” … your wit and intelligence is very much noticed. once again, holding my breath for your next installment.

    32. oops – 1 more thing: “Your comment”: Oooh, I’m shivering…eeek! I’m actually scared to view the upcoming season. How bout if we just play in our little ffic world until forever?” Sounds good to me and sometimes I wonder how our ffic community has spread like wildfire. I never knew anything like this ever existed . oh well . nite

    33. I know Im late..but I have a reason. Even after 4 days and reading the chappy more than twice..I really am out of words to say or even parts to pick out of the chapter to highlight any possible thought swirling round in my head. This chapter truly left me speechless and fuckin inable to form any sensible comment.And that..is as fars as i remember..a very first. So congrats Miss Greenie.
      However..i wanted to say that eevn after several days all i can say to your last chapter was that your writing definitely hovered in another sphere. As much as Bette and Tina have their outta body /out of sphere experience in their lovemaking..reading this last chapter had a spherical touch to me. It was just too outrageously good to be tangible. Absolutely breathtakingly awesome. THANK YOU missy! :-D
      Oh and before you comment..i did not just compare love to writing. LOL ;-) But the power of words and the ability to use words so freely and flowingly and intelligently like you do is a beautiful thing.:-D
      Oh and i wanna know..whatever did you mean when you told me ‘you are alright. Do you know that?’ HUH? I dont know..so enlighten me.;-)
      Waiting for more and also for the drama…it keeps gettin better and better. Yesssss!!!*smiles BIG*

    38. …Tina’s…’unwavering precision’…I love that, and so many other words you employ.

      A finely turned phrase has the power to arouse that most erotic of all pleasure centers, the brain. It’s a pleasure that endures.

      Thank you.

    39. “The question that I was going to ask you Miss Smarty Pants is… may I please eat you now T?” and “When you come, may I swallow it?” Im done…..That was freaking HOT….The lift off and then the landing….WOW….Its time for a shower….Great fucking update!

    40. I almost missed the posting of this chapter. How could that be? Bette and I have to part ways on the oreos and milk. Doesn’t she know that milk is nothing but a secret cup of health? ;) As for the rest of the chapter, umm, I enjoyed the read. I’m looking forward to their trip to New Yawk. Thanks for sharing a bit from your personal journal. Good luck with your marathon. You’re running 12 miles by choice?

    42. Thanks for sharing your journal entry.

      So, we inspired you to go that extra two miles? Impressive! It’s nice to know that you remained composed! I want to thank you.

      Conversely, your writing inspires me to reach over from my desk and put in a yoga tape…and that’s as far as a computer-bound techie is willing to commit for now. Consider Rodney Yee droning in the background as a homage to your wonderful skills, babe.

      Let me go now, and write in my journal…

    44. Wow.
      Sorry for not commenting on the last chapter; and a HUGE thanks for continuing your great story.
      After being out of the states for 2 weeks and then having to evacuate Houston the day of my return (stupid hurricane), these last two immensely happy and hot posts were just what I needed. :) (…not that I don’t love the drama you write, but the smooth-sailing vibe was great after a tumultuous time.)

    45. Just read the whole story from the start, thanks to being signed off work! And I have to say I’m glad the doctor prescribed an inhaler for my heaving chest!!!

      I think I’d be confident in saying that this story is “Award Winning” but to be honest it covers so many categories that I’m sure it will sweep the board! Fantastic stuff.

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