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    Sun Salutations: Chapter 28

    Story written on January 2, 2006 by greentea.
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    What dreams may come.

     

    Bette began reading quietly “My Dearest Tina, It’s 3:29 AM. on the east coast, and thoughts of you won’t allow me to sleep.”

    As the heartfelt words flowed from Bette’s mouth to Tina’s ears, an indescribable, complicated feeling brought a slight discomfort to her chest. This was no ordinary chest pain.  Tina Kennard’s heart was growing.

     

    “You move me.  You move the heavy, awkward and unattractive parts of me that I hide from myself.  You lovingly show me to myself and kiss me deeply in front of me, so I can watch.  You embrace my mind, soothe my spirit and wreak havoc on my body.  Mercilessly. “

     

    As Tina sat in a love-drunk stupor, paralyzed by the lethal combination of Bette’s voice and her written words, the dumbfounded blonde realized she had to get up. It was imperative that she get as close as she could to the woman who had written such a deep and meaningful sentiment. Releasing her thirsty bath sheet to the floor, the graceful woman slowly walked over to the beautiful creation a short distance from her.

     

     ”All while caressing my heart and placing tender kisses along the depths of my restless soul. You still me as I quiver in anticipation of your touch.”  The aroused sun goddess climbed onto the bed, deliberately sprinkling multitudes of sweet, tiny kisses all over Bette’s back. Somehow in the process, a couple of flimsy, lacy items were deemed useless and removed from a svelte caramel body.  Inching up to her sweetheart’s ear, an excited torturer warmly whispered, “I love you Bette.”  Bette’s breath subsequently hitched and chill bumps magically appeared on caramel skin.  The sun kissed blonde continued down the path of the stunningly symmetrical body she adored.  When smooth, determined hands discovered Bette’s round ass, they slowly, gently, and lightly caressed undeniable perfection.  Bette quietly flinched and moaned in response.  The feel of Bette’s behind was without a doubt one of the best things in the world according to Tina.  Aside of course from Bette Porter the woman.  As each smooth, firm cheek quietly yet strongly rebounded from Tina’s determined touch, Tina ascended a little more into heaven.  As kisses followed the slope and curve of a perfectly shaped ass, glistening evidence of Tina’s loving efforts seeped out of the woman she loved.  Tina couldn’t help but smile at this.  “Keep reading baby.”

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    1. OK..did you know you were being talked about yesterday? Was hanging out with Jwet and some others and was talking about how much I love your writing and missed your story…and just missed you of course. So here your are and I am going to read this wonderful chapter…I all ready know it will be great! Love my greentea ; )

    3. i nearily cried at the sight of your name and the story…(cried in the sense that i screemed like a maniac, not that there were tears involved…well…there were a few but because when i screemed, my neighbors thought i was robbed and because they don’t really know me that well, they thought i was a robber and hit me over the head before i could explain…) anyway…at least when you leave for century, you come back with another masterpiece…just so nice to see that B&T are talking and trying to navigate through different issues and not just skip them…and the love letter and the last part was just perfect, babe…and here i am, drinking green tea and reading your story…perfection

    6. hey babe, I was just thinking of you and you story today, and just like that you appear. I hope you have a wonderful new year, and thanks again for your B and T, because from what I hear chaiken will kill us this season. I am glad Tina got to hear that amazing letter B wrote. Now how can they break up after that?!! I know, take it as it comes, right? well, from you sweetie, I’ll take it whichever way you’ll give it!

    8. on a second thought: i know all depends on B&T, they control your hand and your writing…i have a suggestion…to keep us (well, me) happy, we (well, I) need B&T together and happy, so when you write about them, just give them some sedatives or vodka or something, they’ll be like zombies and will do anything you (well, me) want them to do, which is to be happy and together…at least think about it…and btw, 56 stars for this chapter, babe…and to know the significance of 56, ask me ;)

    9. Greenie, I was just about to send you a happy and healthy new year greeting and look whose name appeared on the author list! So glad you posted, of course it was worth the wait. All the best in ’06 and post again as soon as you can.

    12. Outstanding! I have missed this story more than you will ever know. I’m so happy that you’re back and sharing this wonderful gift! I’m hoping that you have a spectacular New Year!

    13. Hey Greentea – I now have in writing that you will try to be gentle and that is all I’m asking :o))…..This was amazing and wonderful like all the other chapters…..more soon please :o))

    14. hey – welcome back! Happy New Year & all that stuff … i haven’t read yet – still working but just wanted to know – how did the marathon go!!!!!! later

    16. Well, I’m just recovering from the several “pings” I had from this story. These two have such a volatile relationship and they certainly run hot and cold. I like the hot part the best, lol. Wonderful to have you back Greenie!

    17. Well im again speechless… and its happening more often on this site the writting just keeps getting better…but yours just takes my breath away…tho you may not post as often as we would all like you sure as hell make up for it when you do!! “A beckoning call within the depths of the woman she loves” that blew me away until i read the love letter…was going to PM you but hey everyone should know..sometimes when authors post they include a poem or verse written by someone else but it has meaning to them or the story,i sometimes copy it out just for myself,stuff you read back on later on….well i find myself doing that with your writting i love keeping quotes & poems etc and hun im keeping yours,god im getting all mushy now.lol.anyway thankyou as always lovin it or had you guessed???lol

    18. I read the chapter this A.M., made myself late for work (no worries), didn’t have time to comment, but now I’m back.Earth shaking, as always, Greens. I loved the little bit of alliteration you threw in there. I would like to add to it, if I might…Tina’s talented tongue turned, twisted and tantalized Bette’s (insert word here). Oh, and where can I get some of that outstanding food that’s so healthy but tastes like it’s not?

    19. “…the words she had just spoken had indeed become her reality” … Well said my dear girl. I was starting to wonder about you. Had you not posted, I was going to have to track you down. Hope the training is going well – positive thoughts for all good karmic intervention. Hope to see you soon sweets.

    20. Greenie….just love a girl with a great vocabulary….vexatious, catalyze, Meanie Weenie! Learning about catalytic rxns in Organic chem was boring. I like your version better. You know sometimes ya just need to fight and make-up. Thanks again for your update. Excellent writing, as usual. Smiled when I saw your chapter….knew it would be good.

    21. Wow GT, I loved that Tina made Bette read the letter to her- delicious torture! I’m so happy to see you’re back- what a way to ring in the new year!

    22. Well, what d’ya know? I was hoping that you would post soon just yesterday. I came home after work today and after a little yoga session, what do I see? A new chapter of Sun Salutations! Wow. Glad to see that at least Tina is mindful enough to keep working on their issues while Bette wants to run away from her insecurities after that “motivation” conversation. And that just makes the making up part that much more incredible. I’m with mdgirl on the delicious torture. First, it was Bette making Tina write on her notebook (a few chapters back, I think) while loving her and now Tina is reciprocating by making Bette read while she’s fulfilling Bette’s words!! LOL. Loving how they’re both fulfilling the other’s dreams. Thanks for the great update and hope your training is going well.

    23. and another thought: greenie, you just called my story a gem in your comment…i think i sat and stared at that comment for 20 min, honestly…because i couldn’t believe my eyes *sniff, sniff*…let me repay a compliment: your story is a gem of all gems ;) you have your way with words and feelings, you have your way with visions in my head, and that’s unique and wonderful and feels like a breath of a fresh mountain air, mixed with emotions and speechless expressions

    24. What a beautiful love letter . . . “My breath quickens and halts momentarily. You revive me and I can breathe better.” That’s just how your story makes me feel. You are phonemenal. Phucking Phenomenal! Thanks Greentea!

    26. air..water..help me..I’ve been assified!! LOVE IT GT! Once again you have captured a perfect moment..are you sure I don’t know you???? ..and sleep with you every night..uhuh! Happy New Year Beautiful!

    27. That was as breathtaking as ever Greenie…..OMG. A perfect letter to a perfect story – you are so amazing and the way you have with words. I´m not drinking green tea as I read this story – I´m drinking a beer, sorry :o)

    29. I’m trying to say: Are we in the future looking back on what happened in the past of their relationship, or are we in live time, or both? Where does the soulful Tina end up as she mixes strains with a physically beautiful, but flawed but awakening lover? Bette seems to be reaching higher and deeper in response to Tina’s love. Did they achieve balance? Sic transit Oreos and nicotine. Loved the ‘Ode on a Porterine Ass’. …”When I turn it on, wind it up, blow it out GTO.”

    30. What can I say? Hot as always GT. BUt what stuck out for me in this chapter was whenever one of them says I love You, it feels like the very first time anyone has said it. It feels scary and thrilling at the same time. The emotions that you paint with each of your chapters is always quite beautiful. Graet update thank you. =)

    31. *clears throat* Ummm… thats all thats really comin out right now *tries to clear again* Okay, the way this story affects me…crazy. If you only knew (and i dont even mean in the ‘obvious’ way). I came here feeling somewhat down, then seeing u posted I cheeses like usual, then started reading and went through highs and lows reading this till you brought me to the upward spin with the last 2 pages!!! U need to stop this rollercoaster of emotions Greenie. *lol* I will comment more at another point but just so you know..lines like this one are what Im talking about:”The moist, stickiness of Bette’s arousal amplified throughout the room and Tina’s passion shot to immeasurable levels.”–You are a genius!!Period!:-D

    34. Wonderful ! Oh and I’m relieved that apparently I wasn’t the only one who screemed like a lunatic when I saw your update.I was just thinking about your story last night …what a coincidence! Well okay I admit I’ve been looking for an update for the last 22 days so maybe it wasn’t such a coincidence LOL.Anyway the beauty of your writing has left me kind of speechless so I will just quote what Tina told Bette : “your words have tremendous depth.” of course technically I’m quoting you…ah well, nevermind…see I wasn’t kidding when I said your words left me speechless :)I’ll just end this by wishing you a very happy and fullfilling newyear (and one where you’ll find lots of free time to write …LOL)Oh and before I forget, I’m so glad T decided not to read the letter by herself hehe…now that was absolute perfection !!! Anyway back to work now ..with a goofy smile on my face. Thank you Greentea and take care !

    36. I keep telling myself “Don’t read any of Greentea’s chapters while at work”…..But I thought I was safe because I saw that it was rated R….boy was I wrong…..LOL…..Anyway thanks for this lovely update and looking forward to the next one!

    38. Well, well, well, I was just going over some of your previous stories when what do you know a new update on this magnificent story. Can I just say I don’t know how I haven’t had some sort of corinary reading these stories. I mean “Are you throbbing for me right now Bette?” Tina asked sweetly.“Yes T.” Bette whispered :)THUD!!! Heart racing, eyes are blurry, sweating like it is the hottest day in July. Phew next thing you know I’m going to need an oxygen tank and I’m only 22. Keep up the good work ;)

    41. You are an absolutely incredible writer. The emotions that you convey in your story are so palpable… AmazingI think you are right – We an create our own version of S-3 here in fan fic and all live happily ever after ;o)

    42. Hey! Long time no see… I’m glad that you’re back. It is always a real pleasure for me to read how your delightfull story progress. I can’t wait for your next update. I also did miss you! Happy new year!

    43. A lyric within a letter within a picture within a story has me moving backward AND forward. Seeing, hearing, tasting, feeling thinking at once. Trompe l’oeil? Phantasmagoria?

    44. Btw..Im glad I crack you up rather than make you think Im a complete idiot. Then again *thinks quickly* one might result from the other. Hmmm…so what is it girlie? *raises eyebrow* lolI got stuck on the counterclockwise rotation cos occasionally I have visual imagination issues okay?? Thanks for callin me out on it. *lmao* j/pHmm..Ill have to tell you bout my bday later. It was interesting to say the least…;-)Oh and before I go…this quote u posted ““In dreams and in love there are no impossibilities.”—is one of the best quotes Ive read in long. If only it were true…*sighs* Oh well…very nice anyways. :-D you are quickly becoming my masteress of the quotes!! *lol* And I don’t hand out this title easily *hahaha*

    45. *sigh* What a rollercoaster of emotions! And what a variety of places and positions! ;-) Now seriously, thanks for the posting, I was already starting to show withdrawal symptoms. You got me veeery curious about where these two will head to. And what will happen to poor Hel??? (I do kinda like her…). Your creativity does not cease to amaze me. Any chance you might donate/sell some of your ideas to Ilene?? She sure could use some of them…;-) A fan from the Old Continent

    47. I’m trying very very hard to like Bette and Tina together as a couple, but for some reason I haven’t been able to root for them in the past few chapters. I keep waiting for Helena or Bette’s missing husband to show up.Thanks as always for the story, Greentea. Keep it up.

    48. Greentea, Hope all is well in your world. Enjoyed the chapter, as usual. I tell you, I read this chapter around 6 am the other day (during my morning workout). Let me tell you that was a mistake. I nearly fell off the eliptical machine (quite literally) when I arrived at the letter reading/love making portion of the chapter. I have learned a valuable lesson about staying fully engaged when performing certain activities (smile). As such, I am thanking you for that. Glad to see they are still talking. Is Tina going to tire of re-assuring Bette or will she finally get it? Where is Helena in all of this? And the bit about Fiddlesticks was funny.

    49. GreenTea,I have been a bit of a lurker recently but am driven by your wondrous and magnificent gift to join in the fray and celebrate your genius.I always feel that I have completed a series deep cleansing and relaxing Sun Salutations with you.It is a testament to your talent the plethora of plaudits and praise place at your fantastic feet.The rhythm of your writing is well measured and luxuriously released. You are leading all of your audience through a yoga session.Each position is beautifully demonstrate just like the gorgeous scenes and images that your talent poignantly paints.Each muscle is moved with delicacy and reverence just as each word and phrase are elegantly elected and edited.Each series allows the reader to experience the pain and pleasure of perfection just as each chapter conveys the complexity of loving yourself and those you share your life with; mountains may be surmounted and valleys traversed as you appreciate the spectrum of a life lived.Thank you so much as words seem so inadequate in a mere beginner’s hands when compared to the dexterity of the maestro.Your Loyal Fan.

    52. Damn…where did my comment go? I beginning to think it a plot..LOL. Greentea, great chapter as usual and I had read it awhile ago at work ..Another mistake I won’t do..LOL.. Disgust Greentea? Come on now..I have a very hectic schedule and don’t get alot of time to do other things, so I have read when I do :) I don’t do that often. The chapter was amazing with a beautiful love letter. Damn, I need one of those..please tell me where I may get one.. As far as you drink, the bar is open..what’s your drink of choice? Mine a screaming orgasm

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