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Sun Salutations: Chapter 32
Bette sat on the edge of Tinas cluttered desk while Tina stood a few feet away looking directly at her girlfriend but saying nothing. The stack of boxes on the other side of the room demanded Bettes attention and somehow, she felt the need to comply. Since Bette wasnt talking, Tina began removing items from her bookshelf and returned to the business of packing. An exhausted Tina released a huge puff of air and her body deflated with the exhalation. Her shoulders sagged and her legs felt tremendously heavy. She couldnt bear the weight of the day coupled with the intensity of Bettes presence. It was too much to deal with and she willed herself not to scream.
After several minutes passed, Bette finally found the voice that had exited Tinas office earlier when she did. Tina slowly turned to face her girlfriend while languidly abandoning her busywork. Bette sat uncomfortably while shifting miniscule pieces of paper from one hand to the other.
A dainty attempt at clearing a narrowing throat was unsuccessful, so a second, stronger effort succeeded. Tina, I umI dont want to be a liar and I dont want you to be one either. she smiled weakly.
Tina watched as Bette toyed with the torn tiny shreds and realized how nervous her girlfriend must have been. Bette Porter wasnt one to play with objects while she talked. Her hands were normally her companions. They complimented her words and enhanced conversations. Very seldom were they a distraction like they were now.
A few weeks ago during one of my sessions, I was asked if I could contact the husband who abandoned me, would I. I immediately said, Of course I wouldI want to know the reason why that asshole left me.
I still want to know why. Its just that . Bettes voice softened and then cracked. Its just that, if I contacted Ziggy, whatever explanation he offered wouldnt be good enough. And thats assuming hed even speak to me. No matter what he said Tina, it wouldnt make sense to me and I wouldnt understand his reasoning. Bette surveyed a pretty but concerned face before continuing. The sun goddess was still with her. Hanging onto every word. Totally focused and aware. As always.
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Forever at a loss for words with your beautiful story,and while it has come to its natural end…im obviously sad that i wont have it to look forward to…but its always a pleasure to go back and read it all over again..lol…It`ll be like going back to a favorute book,that you never tire of,Thanks,its been an experience ive enjoyed and even learnt a little from….hope you`ll write again sometime soon….cya
Damn Greenie, this was such a wonderful, delightful journey. Thanks for sharing your story with us, it definitely is one of the best I’ve ever read. Hope to see another one of your stories soon.
Great chappy! I am sad to see this go but I can always re-read it again! Thanks for sharing your writings and talent!
First, Thankyou, this was a beautiful wonderful journey you took us on. It saddens me that it’s over, I could go on reading about your B/T for a long time to come, and then still wouldn’t have enough. But at least I can start at the beginning and go right thru to the end without any waiting…again and again. Pls don’t let this be your only fanfic, although quite a way to go, pls get some rest and we’ll be waiting here for something new…did I say thankyou??
This story was absolute perfection and I just want to say thank you! I look forward to the day another tale enters your wonderful mind and you return to us.
THE END????? How soon b4 u write something else B & T???? Started reading then stared salivating then that stopped and was replaced by a HUGE DAMN, only to be replaced by salivating once again and a LORD HA MERCY!!!!!!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE B & T STORIES BY U…SO DON’T DISAPPOINT!!!!!!!
Absolutely and totally OUTSTANDING! My goodness…thank you for writing one of the most incredible stories and for sharing this gift with us.
Suddenly, I’m interested in aviation.
Thank you Greens for writing the hottest and ultimately the most heart warming story of all. You have a style that is unique and special. I am taking a deep breath in gratitude that you shared this story with us. I also need to get my head onto to thoughts other than Bette’s ass. I have a meeting to attend. : )
Standing ovation Greenie…This has been more than a story it has been a performance (with words). I ran out of praise about 10 chapters ago but I never left or will I ever forget this story; a story that I was initially reluctant to read. ‘This’ becomes you and it’s beautiful. I only hope that you might, in the future, tantalize my senses and provoke my mind again. Thanks ~NR~
I’m still sorry that this wonderful story has come to an end, but glad that you’re at least willing to “consider” writing again in the future. I’ll keep an eye out for your next story–you know, sometimes anticipation is ‘almost’ as fun as the event itself!
Do you know???..did you know all along what a wonderful story this would be? Thanks Tea, if anything you have inspired me to get into yoga and meditation and I really appreciate your positive attitude throughout the story. Take Care Beautiful…V
You’re a phenomenal writer. I can’t give you enough accolades. It is very difficult to write NC-17 stories w/o them being totally crude and salacious or trite and repetitive. Your stories are erotic, sexy and romantic and never boring : ) And I agree with B, I definitely learned from you. Just a great read! Pls write again. Your fans will be waiting.
another confession: i went to the end just to see if it’s really the end…and it was and i have to calm myself for an hour before reading…so i’ll be back
*sniff* I’m SO sad that this story has come to an end! Thanks for the journey, and for sharing your enormous talent with us. I hope we’ll see you around here again soon!
beautiful, just beautiful.x.x.
Absolutely outstanding. You deserve every award available for this wonderful story.
Extraordinary! I’ve read & reread all the chapter several times and every. Finally able to comment on your story, just letting you know I’ve enjoy this story immensely. Please continue to grace us with your gift of writing. Thank you!
okay…i’m calm and breathing now…or maybe it’s just post-green tea-glorious chapter-nirvana…i don’t know..what can i say that wasn’t said before about your story and your writing? nothing…nothing comes to mind…even now, after i read it 2 times my mind is blank…i think i’m gonna read it again, maybe the blankness will go away…let’s see
It was an outstanding story and I’m sad to see it go. It had everything, it was wonderful, and, well, thank you for sharing it.
GT it’s such a joy to read your story. In addition to creating a wonderful, exciting, addictive tale- I loved how you blended in Yoga! Yours was a unique take on the B/T saga and I can’t express how much I look forward to your future postings. Namaste my friend
still blank…sorry…all i have left in my mind are the words: it’s the end and then welling of eyes comes…i guess i have to learn to live with that, or without it…see, i’m still confused…i might be back
Sweet and wonderful. I can’t wait till you post your next story :)
OMG!!!! GREENIE, you know I have been reading fanfic for abt 1 1/2 years, and this hands down has been my absolute FAVORITE STORY! You are an amazing writer and I hope you know that you have inspired me. I hate to see this story end though. Can you maybe give us another story at some point? You know, whenever you are up to it. I am even thinking of taking up yoga because how beautifully you describe it in your story. take care babe.
Thanks for many hours of luscious entertainment and characters that beyond their lusciousness, struggled and ultimately grew … into happiness. :)
Thank you Greentea for teaching me how to breathe in a story, capturing all it’s beauty and expanse. Your talent is a treasure. Thank you for continuing to write for us, even if you weren’t inspired to do so…and for the gift of never letting us know the difference. Don’t stay away long…you have way too much to give. Peace. Oh, and thank you for sharing with us your love of yoga…what a treat that was throughout the story.
*Sigh* Greentea, although I’m so sad that this story has ended, I am so thankful that you put it in writing. When I know words won’t convey what I’m thinking/feeling, it’s best that I keep the message simple with a “thank you.” I hope life treats you well and allows you time to write.
Greenie…..you’re so incredible. Thank you for a remarkable journey.
clarity didn’t come so i just wanted to say that i have plenty of green tea saved for you, so you better come and visit…maybe we can do yoga…well, you can do yoga and i will chew celery sticks (which i do like btw)…this story was incredible, never boring, never confusing, always perfect, always beautiful and always will remain in my chakra #4
tea u no we can never get enuff of u!!
Greentea, I really like the quote you¡¦ve placed in these last 2 chapters by Winston Churchill: “This is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end. But it is, perhaps, the end of the beginning.” And so, Sun Salutations has come to an end with Bette & Tina having conquered their fears/insecurities and wrapping up the beginning of their relationship. With this solidification of their relationship, it is time to move on to the next phase. This has been an amazing and oh so beautiful story. Thank you for such delightful writing. I guess I will no longer have to pleasure of looking forward to a chapter of Sun Salutations until you come back with another story¡Kperhaps a sequel to Sun Salutations? Since you¡¦ve so aptly quoted Winston Churchill, this is just the end of the beginning phase of Bette and Tina¡¦s relationship. What about the next phase? I like robbeedee¡¦s suggestion. ;-) Don¡¦t stay away for too long. Namaste
ohhh damn baby – you are not seriously ending the story – you have to come back with another one…please. The journey has been a blast Greenie and I so hope you will come back and take us on another one. Wonderful story with lots of amazing moments. Post soon again
“Her words were an accusation and an acknowledgement, muttered with pure adoration and infinite attitude” – the way you have with words. Thank you for taking the time to write this wonderful story. I’ll have more to say, but for now…just my humble thanks.
Hey Greenie – thank you for this wonderful and amazing story and I’m glad that it’s not only us readers that got something out of this journey between our favorite girls. But you can’t lose faith just because Ilene has, so yes you can write more happy B&T stuff….I know you can and if necessary I’ll use LOL@begging :o))) I know I said I would read anything you write, but NOT Jenny please!!!!! It has been a privilege to read your work, you’re so talented. Take care and happy yoga :o))
Ms Tea – I just finished the read, after being away for a couple of months. Thanks for the entertainment, and the wet daydreams. Best to you.
Wow that was amazing and hot, love it. Thanks for this wonderful story and hope to see you soon, thanks!
Thank you for the beautiful story. You are a siblimely talented writer. Enjoy your time off from writing, get inspired by some of the other great writers on this site, get those creative juices flowing, and come back to us with another fabulous greentea story :) Thank you.
Hey Baby Doll, Words seem such an inadequate a way of communicating the joy and pleasure you have given with this magnificent and magical melodrama. I can hoently say that this has been a joy to read and follow. I hope that you continue writing on this site and gives me an insight into the wonders and treasures that the Bette and Tina relationship holds. I would like to see Helena come back into the fray and try to rebuild the bridges so needlessly destroyed. There has been no resolution for the Ziggy thread. Maybe he will return and cause concern for both Bette and Tina. As you so aptly put it ‘this is the beginning’ may I please have the middle next. Yours is a unique voice and I will miss it. I have thoroughly enjoy and been entertained by your words. The love radiates from each and every page. Thank you so, so much for your hard work, tears, toil and effort. Your Loyal Fan.
I wish that in season 4 Bette gets to this place about Tina(insert Tina where Ziggy is):“It’s just that, if I contacted Ziggy, whatever explanation he offered wouldn’t be good enough. “And in the grand scheme of things, it wouldn’t matter.” What a wonderful story you created of two people falling in love. The names might have been Bette and Tina but you gave them different personalities in many ways and made us fall in love with them all over again. Thanks for capturing the ups and downs of their relationship and letting us see that true love can change your life forever. Come back to us soon with another story!
WOW. That was a great ending to an amazing story. Thank you so much for writing this, Love how you took a chance taking characters we all love and created a completely different storyline. Thanks and I hope you write something again soon.
the end !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you do want to kill me!!!!!!!! that was hotttttttttttttt
Green Tea, Green Tea, Green Tea….please brew another pot because this one was delicious, comforting, healing, and sizzling hot.Thank you for crafting an intelligent and creative storyline that often elevated and sometimes completely stopped our breathing all together. This is an instant classic. I have already re-read it three times from start to finish. Please brew again soon.
Great story and a very nice ending GT. You can of through me there with Ziggy’s phone number. I had imagined that he would have shown up a Tina’s new studio for classes her not knowing who he was ans she not knowing who she was until Bette appeared. Thanks again for such a wonderful story and please come visit us with another wonderful B&T tale :o)
Foreve a pleasure Greenie…you breathed life into this story and it was a great gift, so I humbly thank you. That was an incredible journey where at moments I held my breath, but at last learn to breathe myself. I look forward to the next journey. Again, thank you for sharing.
What a joy it was to read your story, it was beautiful one of the very best that has graced this site of FF, sorry that it has come to an end but you ended it perfectly. Thank you.
Thank you.
just so you know i did read it. now gonna read our other chappy. i do have a bone to pick with you girl. where the hell have you been???? so much has been happening and i wanted to share it with you. get in touch with me please. thanks.
Wow just happen to stumble over your story.. it was beautifully written…wish there was more..i think I may take up Yoga…lol…great story love anything BnT.. especially anything different from the norm…thank you so much hope you come back and write more…I did wish there was a confederation with Ziggy..I really think Bette needs that…the why will always be there…but great story so much love but was hard getting there..