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Sun Salutations: Chapter 32
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Tina’s mind continued spinning without her permission and she desperately needed it to stop. An incessant nagging was under construction in her very being and it was imperative that she deal with it. Grabbing her backpack & travel mug of morning tea, she decidedly made her way to the back of the bus. Tina lightly touched the tops of heads of her dozing crew as she gracefully whizzed by. Once situated in the very last row, the sun goddess reluctantly pulled a small piece of paper from her jeans pocket and squinted at the number. The steam from her insulated cup escaped from the small opening at the top while Tina assumed a lotus position & took a few sips of her Moroccan morning blend. As the hot liquid effortlessly slid down her throat, the unsettled woman hesitantly flipped her phone open and began dialing.
A rich, melodious voice answered on the first ring and Tina’s heart sank to the pit of her stomach.
“Hello
A pregnant pause traveled to the nervous woman’s ear.
“Actually I don’t. I’m in the middle of a meeting Tina.”
“On a Saturday morning?” Tina queried. “When will be a good time to call you back then?” Both women were thinking ‘never’, but neither stated it.
“I’ll be done in thirty minutes. Is this important Tina? I don’t have time for” Tina interrupted her.
“Okay. I’ll call back then. Thanks, and yes this is important.”
A loud silence indicated the call had been disconnected. Tina carefully closed her phone as well as her eyes while reclining into the plush seat behind her. She let her mind take her away; but not too far. When 35 minutes passed, Tina hit redial and waited for the call to connect. After waiting for what seemed to be an eternity, she prepared to leave a message. The call was finally answered.
“What is it that you need Tina?”
The short, direct tone caused an unsettled stomach to do flip-flops. “Well, I umI wanted to apologize to you Helena for all of the hurtful things I’ve said and done over the years. We’ve never gotten along and I don’t know if we ever will but I just want you to know how sorry I am for my past behavior.” Images of rude conversations and ugly confrontations from days gone by zoomed through Tina’s mind. A larger than life picture of
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I just know that when you`ve finished this amazeing story, ill be returning to it…reading it again like you would a favorite book…Though i barely got past Tinas description of loving Bette….Sigh!!! i loved that Tina took the high road with Helena…Let it go babe!! looking forward to the next post…even though i dont really want this to end….
Greenie….thanks for a lovely journey with this story.
Your back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you and IC r ttrying to kill me lol I love that life is not in of your posting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just in case my comments got lost I’ll post some more. : ) Greens, I have enjoyed this story so and I’m sorry to see it go but I understand it’s time for it to end. I have a little faith that backbone Bette will appear on Sunday I’m just not sure it’ll be enough to last me through the off season. Keep Hope Alive!
okay babe, i’m back again…well, i really enjoyed this story, especially the part when tina was talking about ‘some mores’…just perfect, i as speechless for sometime as well…but now, bath was great, tea was delicious and celery ended in the garbage but now i can concentrate at least….okay, my demands: B&T together forever, in love and NC-17 to finish this story with the fireworks…new story soon with B&T holding hands in front of the TV while Bette is reading phone book and each chapter is NC-17 of course (and nobody else in that story, call it B&T spin-off)…hmm..what else? B&T together, safe and in love…and did i say B&T together? that’s all do far…i’ll think of something else after getting more tea……..oh, i remembered one more: B&T together
What are we going to do without this story. I look forward to every post. Promise that you will come back to us with a new one. take care…
Don’t have the bus crash on the way back, or any heroic sacrificial lifesaving on Tina’s part, okay? My mind and heart just couldn’t deal with it right now. …I don’t mean to be pushy and demanding, but even a Techie has limits. …Do as you wish, I trust you implicitly. …
You’re just an amazing writer. Your spirit comes through in Bette and Tina. They way and manner in which they relate to each is so engaging and on point that it is an utter delight to read your work. When I open up the fanfic site and see your name, my heart truly does flutter and then I quietly mouth an “Oh, yeah!” to myself. I read your story as one would eat an Oreo cookie…delightfully…. slowly and licking the white filling, savoring every morsel and thoroughly enjoying each word. Making it last…admiring the phrasing and imagery that your words conjure up. Greenie, you’re the best!
As much as I crave your writing, you might want to leave off posting your final chapter until after Sunday, April 26th. …We’ll need you over on the Left Hand of the Goddess to balance that *&#$*@ out. …I’m just sayin’…
Love, love, love this story. They have become so cute with eachother. -grin- Okay, who’s the other phone number Tina keeps staring at? Curiousity…
I’ve been a silent reader… I guess now’s the time to tell you that I’ve enjoyed your story immensely. I couldn’t believe how hot it was. :) I love that you’ve taken that heat and built on it… you allowed each of the characters to grow, through long slow stretches and the odd rapid set, all in the glorious light of the morning sun… each into a unique being. I’m delighted that they finally appear to have settled into some harmony together.
one more thing: 500 bright and shiny stars for this chapter and story to celebrate the beauty and perfection that is your words…i will miss this story greatly and would have to read it every night as my favorite bedtime story after it’s finished
Good chapter. Alice is crazy, and funny about Tina and her flowers!
Guess who? Just don’t faint, okay? LOL@Tina, her flowers and her thought process. So, the first priority is to get the UPS chicks sexy uniforms? Hilarious. On another note…â€There’s something about the combination of breath and sound and feeling and passion and surrender and your love for me that’s unlike anything else in the world.†My thoughts exactly. You move me.
The harmony the they both are working for is so enviable. This whole chapter was like Bette’s bath warm, soothing and tantilizing to the nose. Thanks
Green, as we wind down in this journey, let me share my thoughts. I love the relationship that Bette and Tina have built in this story. Through the trials and tribulations they have grown with each other, what a rarity. On the show, I guess they have out grown each other this season. If you decide to write another story (that does not have a Bette and Tina pairing) I hope you do not make Bette this hopelessly lost, barely functioning character that is still pining for Tina. Anyway, I won’t get on my soap box about how Bette is portrayed on the show and in fanficland. I have told you before and I will share it again now, I have thoroughly enjoyed our time together. I, quite simply, loved this story. One more post to go for you and one more comment to make from me. Let’s have fun and enjoy this.
hey greenie! i was just thinking about your story and just like that, there you are! these 2 are just so sweet and considerate of one another. keep doing that thing you do, baby.
love Tina’s train of thought…get the ups girlies some new sexy outfits….LOL!!!!!!!! It seems Tina has one thing on her mind for when she gets home…..sex and lots of it!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOPE U GOT MY SUBTLE HINT!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!
I totally agree with Jwet about them working on their harmony. With Bette going to theraphy and Tina getting past her feelings towards Helena, everything is looking good. And YES Van I am sure that Tina is looking foward to getting to use her purple gift with Bette when she returns. Please continue :o)
So amazing how B & T are working hard at gaining peace of mind. They are working their minds as hard as their bodies to gain synchronization with the universe…jeez, sounds like something Tina would say. LOL. Love how Tina got upset with the UPS delivery’s lack of care for her blossoms. ;-) Really enjoyed how much fun Bette seemed to have opening her gifts. Like a child in a candy store. LOL. They are both working at being better for themselves and one another…and that is important in any relationship. You become part of a union, but within that union are two individual parts that must also be independent;otherwise, the union collapses. Thanks for another amazing update…please continue.
i haven’t rad it yet but i know i will like it (judging by the end LOL)…i’ll be back of course
GreenTea, Another awesome and astounding chapter in what has become a firm favorite of mine. This terrific tale just gets better and better. And I know you know that any comments on for positive feedback purposes only. So nothing to forgive re lack of segue. Onto the chapter, again an education in how to extract the emotional wollop of a couple in love. I am never in doubt throughout this masterpiece of how both Tina and Bette feel for one another. In fact this love radiates from every pore and nuance. Tina’s good spirit shows us all how we can make a difference and give something back to those less fortunate. Her attention to both her teenager charges and Bette is admirable and demonstrates how the little things can often make all the difference in the world. Being there consistently and listening to her youngsters is all it takes. Remembering Bette and arranging the selection of gifts was splendid. I can’t wait to read the “For Me…” episode.Of course all of this is down to you and your eloquent and evocative writing style. Thanks for every word, phrase, sentence, paragraph and chapter as they bring joy and happiness into my world. Your “Cute” Loyal Fan.Glad to see my comments are still hitting the X. Just no parrot to relay the location.
As soon as I finish typing this comment I’m going to find a mountain top, okay probably the hill next to the local elementary school, and shout out huge thanks for this chapter and the one to follow. It’s situation critical in L Word land which makes your phenomenal writing all the more necessary. I’ve decided to reside in Denialville and although the weather here is fucking fantastic your writing would make it stupendous. This is the part where I beg you to start a new story VERY soon…um, that was me begging. Did it do anything for you? Should you decide not to start another story anytime soon, let me thank you for taking time out of your life to write a great story for us readers to enjoy. I’m off to start my countdown to the caca that is S3 Sundays
I am not, by nature, a whiner, but I am feeling a little whiney about this being the next to the last chapter of this story. I know, I know, all good things must come to an end, but do promise us that you will considering a new story sometime in the “not too distant” future! And, thanks again for this story.
I have been so lacking with my comments(sorry)S3 has just sucked the life force out of me but we won’t go into that, I have also joined that train heading out to Denialville, if politicians can do it so can I. Now to your story, I have loved it from the start and I know all good things must come to an end, I hope that you will come back when time permits you to with another wonderful and enchanting story, your B&T have been a pleasure to read. Thank you.
Charming and sensual – your writing really does soothe me. I love the dynamics you have in play, one can see others and ourselves in the shape and shade of your descriptions. Thank you, for your time and talent.
Hello,I started reading your story and couple of weeks ago. I must say this story is a favorite and one I will definelty re-read again. The make-up sex between Bette/Tina against that tree..was FIRE! That was like a *thud*, sweat, panting, need a release, then a cold shower moment! Damn! As a matter of fact all of the NC-17’s are like that, you got skillz girl! Anyway thoroughly enjoying this story and hope you continue to write more. Thanks!
okay, i read it really quick (btw rad in my previous post means read LOL)…anyway, i loved it, but i feel a little unsettled because tina called to helena to make amends and she’s calling someone else (carmen?, ziggy?)…i hope nothing will happen to her and to B&T…i have more to say but no time…when i get home from work, get my warm bath, green tea and some celery sticks, i’ll have more thoughts…for now i just want to enjoy the feeling of harmony and happiness
As always, The Mailwoman delivers!! I wish your Tina was the tv Tina and not the Alien T from cock world.. Don’t get me started on the show. Your wonderful story is an escape and I believe I speak for all of your adoring fans when I say Thank You naughty girl for your fantastic story!! …give your gf a kiss..and an ass grab too ;]
Hey Greenie – I’m still speechless, your writing does that to me….I’m ready to use LOL@begging, if that is what it takes to get a new B&T story from you :o)) Just know I will read as long you’re posting, but please don’t let us wait that long again, I’m addicted. Take care :o))
Glad to see you´re back Greenie – the story is soo amazing and powerfull. The harmony in it is so perfect – glad to see you still writing on it because I was a little afraid that you were going to end this perfect story :o) – post very soon we all want you to.