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Sun Salutations: Chapter 7
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"*****." Bette loudly replied.
Tina had had it. "Are you deaf Bette?" "Get off of me." Bette didn’t know what to expect but she promptly removed herself from her straddled position on top. Tina immediately dropped to her knees in front of Bette and forcefully parted her legs. Bette grabbed Tina’s head to steady herself. The welcomed fragrance of Bette’s arousal surrounded her. Tina’s eyebrows perked up sensing the wonderful aroma her nose just encountered. She was approaching utopia. She inhaled deeply, pressing her face into Bette as far as she could go.
Just then the doorbell rang accompanied by loud, insistent knocking. Tina exhaled and moaned upon releasing the deep breath. "Please excuse me Bette; I’m going to see who this is." On Tina’s way to answer the door she said, "And before I forget, You smell divine."
"Thanks. It’s just soap" Bette replied.
"That’s not the smell I was referring to." Tina retorted.
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Who is it? Tina asked as she went to the door.
"Carmen" the voice urgently answered.
Tina closed her eyes for a couple of seconds, composed herself and opened the door smiling. "Hey There. What’s the matter?" Tina could see Carmen’s face was streaked with tears. Mild sobs began filling the space in the doorway. "Please come in Carmen" Tina said blocking Carmen from entering too far.
"I had this terrible dream last night. you told me that we were over because you had fallen in love. Tina, is this true?" Carmen asked sobbing loudly.
"Hey, come on now" Tina said. "It’s too early in the morning for all of this. I think we should talk about it and anything else that’s bothering youbut not now. Why don’t we meet after my 2:00 class today?"
"I want to talk about it now Tina!" Carmen refuted. Bette could hear everything as she put her clothes from last night back on. Her first session wasn’t until 11 but she had some other work to do. Plus she really wanted to try to talk to Helena.
"Now isn’t a good time Carmen for a couple of reasons. One. I have company and two. I’ve got to get to work."
"Please meet me after my class so we can talk." Tina requested.
Carmen starts yelling, "Is Bette Porter over here? Huh? Is that ***** over here?" "*****," Bette thought. "How did I get in this?"
Bette nearly panicked when she wondered if Carmen had seen her car. She relaxed when she remembered that she had walked the short distance to Tina’s last night.
"Whoa, now Carmen. There’s no need for that" Tina said firmly. Her voice instantly turned cold and uncaring "Since you’re having a little trouble understanding what I’m saying, let me rephrase it. Get your ***** out of my house and I will see you after my ***** class Carmen."
TBC…
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How good is this story?
This story is so good…
Louis Armstrong came back from the dead to comment on it!
That’s how good it is!
What a wonderful world…
ROFLMAO! I guess its quite alright to use foul language throughout the rest of the house.
Please continue
that was hot…
great chapter! sometimes even the ‘sun goddess’ cannot get her breathing right!lol! really enjoying the story..
Loving this story, Tina might not be able to let Bette go in a couple of months. Tina is the Player in this .but she just might open a can of worms with Bette. It a beautiful world out there . Tina needs to be very careful. thanks
GREENTEA YOU HAVE ONE SLAMMIN STORY GOING ON.
This is sooooo good….very, very good….
Hey I’m still catching up WHOA! very good your doing a Great job writing this Story I Love it Please continue post soon.
Bette/Helena! Helena would be soooo much better for Bette than this Tina, even if I really love the personality you’ve given her.
Excellent story. I am all caught up and can’t wait for the next chapter.
By the way Tina is realy hot is this story, I like it!
Tina’s the Playa ha!I worder if she’ll be the one to get Played. Love this story. Thanks!
tell us what you really think tina
First time commentin but you’ve got me hooked for this story. Great..just great. I luv this Tina!! “No cursing in my haven”–funny.
Keep the greatness up..cant wait for more.:-D
I am impressed. First fanfic author who’s story telling style made me hot! Keep it up.
Still loving your story. I actually adore the new, free spirited Tina, who is much more in control than the one we normally see. Besides that her being the teacher, taking the initiative is kind og nice. I love to see a more insecure Bette so keep up the good work and please post soon.
Now I rarely ever comment but this is good a little bit of everything. Well written….
great chapter. i love this tina. she is so in control. the B&T loving was amazing.
That last part was soooo funny to me. And I love how Tina can just turn on and off the cursing just by entering her bedroom. Im hooked to this story.
I really like it! Especially the new Tina’s personnality. It is different and refreshing to see her with control and confidence. I also like your choice of secondary character, you know Carmen and Tina, these to together never come my mind. Good work and post again soon!
Awesome story! This Tina is great..and i like this insecure kinda fragile Bette. Hah Helena wont like this at all. I cant wait for more!.
I just want to say that this story is so amazing!! We are used to a different kind of character development, but I agree with everyone else… the new Bette and Tina are so exciting… Please keep us happy and post soon!!
this is my new favorite story.
it is amazingly good.
i love the way u put tina as the dominant one and bette as the one who is less dominant one. i hope u aren’t making bette one of tina’s conquest.
Love it. Love it. LOVE IT!!!!!
I am so loving this story….please continue!
Girl, you are prolific…it took me this long to catch up with all you’ve written so far. I always like the different takes on potential BT beginnings. Love that they are both fitness nuts…and your story makes me want to seek out a yoga class today instead of just popping in the Rodney Yee Power Yoga DVD, which is what I normally do on a Saturday. Given your history, I expect a couple more chapters by the next time I check!
Shakti, Shakti, Shakti!
I hate it when I do that!
Shit! (sorry, Tina…)
“I don’t know Bette. This is so weird for me. I feel so good when I’m around you and I know we haven’t known each other for long. You have the most wonderful energy”
Ah yes, the mindf*ck before the real f***ing commences!
“Shit,” Bette thought. “How did I get in this?”
I’m glad Tina is the ethereal one in this. I love Bette’s down-to-earthiness! Although, girlfriend is gonna have to get a handle on her mouth if she is going to reach Tina’s ‘Nirvana’! Ha!
The integration of the secondary characters, Carmen and Helena, Alice, is going along seamlessly. I don’t even think of how they are in the original TV series. Great!
Where is Ziggy? The fly in this ointment is that Bette still loves him. What will happen if he returns?
Tina is so cool and detached. The pimp?
Woman is the creator of the universe,
the universe is her form;
woman is the foundation of the world,
she is the true form of the body.
In woman is the form of all things,
of all that lives and moves in the world.
There is no jewel rarer than woman,
no condition superior to that of a woman.
Or is she perhaps, Shaki?
Wow, there is just so much to comment on and take in. First Great Story, others have done tina different, but not to this degree. Frankly I’m liking it, especially because your giving this playa some substance. I can totally believe that this is going his quickly due to Tina’s connected nature and her not beating around the bush so to speak..I really like the push/pull of this story line, Pls keep it up. Oh and you can post as often as you like, I’m sure I’m not the only one waiting for the next installment. Thankyou for not making us wait tooo terribly long…go girl!!!!
well im kinda speechless. that was excellent. tina falling. since shes so in tune one would hope that she can be honorable even while being undone by her intense feelings for bette. carmen and tina. something i havent thought of but interesting. bettes first instinct, to call hel. that i dont see helping a great deal. your writing is intense. love the stuff bout yoga. im so looking forward to class tomorrow. you can post as often as you want for me. thanks.
dam this is good… tina should punish bette every time she curses…
Good chapter. Tina is so funny about her haven room!