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Sun Salutations: Chapter 8
Sungoddess: Ah Bette, you’re human like everyone else. Lighten up on yourself. I’m leaving for San Fran tomorrow night so I’ve gotta keep crackin’. I’ll give you a call when I can.
OnceBitten: Hold on a minute Sparky. How ’bout I bring you something to eat?
Sungoddess: I’m really not that hungry. I’m about to eat a peach.
OnceBitten: I see. What if the ‘something to eat’ is me? Delivered hot and fresh, right to your door. Still not hungry?
“Hope I wasn’t being too forward ” Bette said to herself. She was totally aware that she was playing with fire, but the past few days without Tina’s attention had been driving her to drink. Literally. She missed how Tina made her feel like she was the only person on earth. She knew what she had just typed was monumental for them both, and their relationship would never be the same after tonight.
OnceBitten: u still there?
Sungoddess: I um, wasn’t ready for that.
OnceBitten: Well, you better get ready. I’ll be at your studio door in 45 minutes. No excuses.
Sungoddess: *****.
OnceBitten: I hope you aren’t in your haven.
Sungoddess: =) LOL! I’m not.
OnceBitten: Are you ready to worship my body Tina?
Sungoddess: *****.
OnceBitten: see you in 43 minutes. Be ready.
“No. You be ready Ms. Porter.” Tina smiled deviously.
The studio was dimly lit with 2 large candles and a small row of track lighting illuminating the entrance. A bowl of lotion and massage oil waited patiently next to the fast food container of yoga mats. The air smelled clean and pure with a hint of fresh peaches. Birds of Paradise overflowed in a vase in the corner next to huge throw pillows that required both hands to move them. Tranquil music with syncopated tribal rhythms softly bellowed through countless tiny speakers. “Looks good” Tina thought. Not one to put all of her cards on the table, Tina had more than a few surprises up her sleeve.
Bette knocked on the studio door precisely when she told Tina she would appear. “Tina?” After waiting for a few seconds outside the door, Bette pressed down on the shiny brass handle and entered. She smiled as she saw the flickering light dancing around the room. A calming warmth immediately greeted her. She exhaled deeply.
Tina was roaming around naked in the studio darkness, planning her attack. She was a prowler in her own home clad in a toe ring and a tattoo of the sun above her left ankle. She smelled of peaches and held the one she was eating in her right hand. “Tina?” Bette called with uncertainty. Tina was dripping with anticipation, evident by a glistening trail inching down her bare thighs. Bette stood in the middle of the room uncertain. She was just where Tina wanted her.
TBC
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(25 votes, average: 4.76 out of 5)
Have now caught up with your chapters and i love your Tina she is so in control…watch out Bette the cat is going to pounce…prrrrr.
Love it, thank you for the long chapters to.
Oh damn…that was goooooood. Can I just say that peach is my fav fruit? *lol* j/k
Man..Tina is definitely a dr. Jekyl Mr.Hyde type of person huh? Bein all calm , warm, peaceful one point and dead-cold the next moment. I definitely wont wanna be on her bad side either..lawdy.*lol*
Oh and Im so happy that Tina likes bette’s rambles and tangents. was about damn time this was seen as a good thing..i feel so much better now! ;-) *haha*
LMAO@ Bette’s haven comment in their IM conversation..that was witty! hehe
I absolutely adore your flow with words…creates great mental images :-)
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oy, I’m 100% hooked now! Thanks for the highly addictive story greentea, and get crackin’ with proofing those other chapters!
Wow! My computer blew up, causing me to be away from fan fic for a whole week, yet what a fun and entertaining surprise was waiting for me upon my return!! I am enjoying this story very much! Thanks!! Oh, and if you know of a yoga instructor like Tina, who is somewhere around the LA area…let me know, cause I am looking for one!!
I just caught up with your story and I LOVE it!!! It’s so original. It definately makes me want to get back into doing pilates lol Can’t wait for more!
WOW I think the ice around my heart has melted cause I’m feeling a little warm for this tina??? I don’t know but if anyone asks you didn’t hear me say that!!! LOL
SO is anyone else noticing that tina is kinda like flipping a swicth?? She all granola and wholesome, but then you flip her and she’s the type to throw the brick in your cars window and then do some kind of praying for the health of your car??
Greentea, I won’t have enough time to comment on each chapter and most likly it will only be on weekends but I want you to know I’m reading this story.
I just read all 8 chapters, and i’m fucking hooked.. =D
Thank God something to get my mind off of Renewed Trust’s chapter 149…
*lol*
I love how these Bette and wait… here it’s more like Tina and Bette =P have this sort of chemistry. I don’t really believe in the term “power balance” when it comes to relationships, but I guess it applies in this case. Anyway, the so called “power balance” is totally different from other fics and it shifts well between one character and the other. They are both setting the pace of their relationship, which is great and very rare in Bette/Tina fanfiction world.
Oh, and don’t you just LOVE Carmen’s frequent interruptions? Whenever you see something other than “NC-17” in the rating area you just KNOW Carmen is going to pop up out of nowhere, like those inconvenient pop-up windows we get a lot on the internet… hehe
Tks for the chapter…again a saving grace for the night after miss chicki put it in the toilet…enough….I totally love the swing between these two, just when you have tina being alpha bang in comes bet. They show such strength and fear/uncertainty all in the same breath. It is a talent to write, your talented!!! Yes pls don’t make us wait, I’m hoping this story has, say, 150 chapters to it…it’s so easy to read what you write, I can’t imagine what your NC-17 stuff will be like…especially when you already have us totally into this story line…can’t say enough about it….patiently waiting…
OMG! This story is good! I am at the highest point of anticipation right now! Oh, please, hurry with the next chapter. I am just going crazy. Hopefully, when I wake up tomorrow, I will have a little present waiting for me. =) You’re doing a great job with this, btw!
This is good. You’ve got me.
its your first here =). dayum greeny. that was awesome. im breathless. im having hot flashes heehee. this was so needed after chicki drama. im sad my sunday yoga class was cancelled, do ya tink tee will let me come for private instruction rotflmao. i really love how you write b/t. if i didnt already do the yoga i certainly would after reading your story. thanks for the update, i loved it.
I am hooked on this story. But I have to admit that sometimes its hard for me to remember that B&T are soon to be T&B. lol
Just read Chicki’s Chapter 149. WTF? I’m going to try and post one more before going to kill Alice. If I don’t make it back, the next several chapters are already done and just need proofing!!!
greeny. thank you these is a good in heaven. you have more. YES!!!. can i say i love you. *wink wink* post away. ill edit.
tHIS WAS GREAT,gOING FISHING WILL BE BACK IN A FEW DAYS. LOVE THIS TINA.. THANKS
greentea let ay again just how much i love this story. i am now adding you on my favorite author list with the other 10 author which include chicki. chicki is a great writer but i needed to read some happy b&t this morning.
LOL You’re going to kill off Alice because of chicki LMAO!!
I’m looking forward to see what Tina’s got instore for Bette.
I’ve been away from my computer for a couple of days, but this story was a welcome surprise to come back to. I love the twist on the characters, yet still find that you’ve managed to keep their primary traits intact. I look forward to your next installment, and thank you for the great story.
excellent T i cant wait to read their first time together!! man i needed a happy story after i read chicki;s damn!! i luv this controlled Tina and Bette being the persued!! haha i luv tina;s unsettledness!! continue soon Tea!
love your story greentea. love this tina she is so much in control, except when it comes to bette. she just wants to give into her. love the B&T loving
NEWS FLASH!:Greentea is addictive.
Who knew?
WOOHOO! WHOA! I can’t wait to the next chapter I Love it Please continue ASAP LOL! Please Thanks.
oncew again you leave me hanging! I have to go to work girl what are you doing to me? I won’t be able to read your story again until Monday! I can’t wait that long! lol. help I need a Fanfic Anonymous program.
I am with willowr, some loving to get my mind of Renewed Trust. I am realy liking this story hope you can post another today.
Sorry I haven’t posted until now, but I love this story!! Can’t wait for more :)
Your name was mentioned over on one of the message boards as a story to read – So I read it – great stuff I’ll be coming back for more. I loved this line: Tina got insurmountable pussy thrown at her from beautiful women all the time. – sounds more like it was mountable pussy to me!
I always thought Tina had the potential to be stronger if not down right experimental – Is she into Tantric – will we get really L-O-N-G chapters?!
Ok so I’ve never been much of a ‘tea’ person but now, I look for a daily dose! Loving this…it’s helping to calm my somewhat frayed nerves from another story…we all know who I’m refering to.
Well continue as you have. I’d love to see a greater play by hel for bette’s affection. Not that I want them together but, I think it would make it more realistic. If Helena is woman enoguh to fight for what she wants, she should give tina a run for her money!
oh my god… reading on
Good chapter!