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Surrender Everything – Chapter 1
Slowly, the burning feeling went away and then, when her body felt like it calmed down, she opened her eyes and saw her hands. They were like the skin of a human. Then, she noticed she was cold and looked down. She was naked. Dana handed her a blanket and lead her to a mirror inside her little house. Tina gasped when she saw her face. It had the same form as it always had, her eyes and hair still had the same color but her skin was so different, so light. Dana said that she would go outside while Tina inspected her now human body, she could ask questions later. Tina dropped the blanket and gasped. What was that hair doing on her armpits and between her legs?! At least it was only a centimeter long. She thought to herself that the next time she would morph, she would try to imagine it a little shorter. Maybe that worked. Everything was lighter, even her nipples were now pinkish instead of darker purple. She found it weird that the scar she had on her leg before the transformation was gone. When she was training for the special services, somebody hadn’t been careful with his knife and cut her. She looked at herself in total and found herself just as beautiful as before. Yes, she was one of those girls that were lucky enough to be happy with how they looked.
She took her blanket again and wrapped it around herself, just then, Dana entered. She had asked Dana if she could control the hair and Dana nodded. If she concentrated on it, then it could be controlled. The scar disappeared because when she was in this body, nothing had happened to it. Tina asked if she was now a human in every aspect. Dana answered no. Internally she was still a Vidarian. She still had the extra organ in her body where now her drawings were stored in. They would come back out when she would morph back. Also, she could still use her middle finger to impregnate someone. Dana told her that she could stay a human for 6 months, and then she had to morph back to a Vidarian for at least a week before she could morph back otherwise her Gensa, the organ that controlled her symbols, would explode. Then, she would die. Morphing back was just the same process.
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(45 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Please,this is cruel to stop here.Thank you for the update.
that’s where you stopped?? ahh! haha man, that’s what i get for asking that stupid can impregnate themselves question! I was just kidding GOD! lol PPS!!! (like…now!)
Thank you for writing something so very different! Unfortunately “sci-fi” doesn’t get you a lot of views (remember Kelika’s Daughter’s of Kirk and Spock?) but those who do read are loyal and appreciate the imagination and talent involved. Kelika’s story was truly one of the very best on the site, but she never got the view counts for that story than those received for a mediocre NC-17. This story has already hooked me. The character’s physical traits and the planets are all so very well thought out. I am looking forward the the next chapter!! Thanks!!
Awesome!..they are going to meet each other. ..I’m praying that..Tina would take Bette away before the so called “meeting of the men.”
Such a meanie for stopping there
Oh no, you didn’t stop there!
this good, don’t stop we need to know what will happen next ;D
hey PPS you cant just stop there pleasee
Read both your updates on this story. love it. thank you. can’t wait to read more.
WOOHOO Finally Bette and Tina meet!