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Survival: Chapter 3
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“I just remembered that I’ve got to get to work,” she explained weakly, giving everyone at the table a parting wave. “I’ll see you guys later.”
As Alice made her way to the exit, Dana jumped up from the table and followed her outside to her car, leaving the group behind staring after them.
“Those two have a boatload of baggage to work out,” Carmen said after the women were out of earshot.
“Yeah, and I think Lara is bringing about three boatloads of baggage back to L.A. with her,” Shane agreed with a frown.
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“Al, wait!” Dana called out as she caught up with the blonde in the parking lot. Alice turned back to face her, trying unsuccessfully to keep her wild emotions under control.
“What?” she asked, focusing all her anger and sadness into the utterance of that one word.
“Look, I know you’re pissed–” Dana began.
“Yeah, I am,” Alice agreed angrily. “I’m pissed that you didn’t have the guts to tell me that you spoke to Lara, especially when we spent all of last night together. You didn’t say one word about it.”
“Ok, look; yes – Lara called me and we spoke on the phone,” Dana began, trying to figure out how to make Alice understand what was going on. “And, yes, she said she wants to come back to L.A. But, I made it clear that I don’t want to pick up where we left off. Things are so over with her, Al. You have to believe that.”
Alice laughed humourlessly at Dana’s words. “I believed that before, and look what happened.”
Dana flinched at Alice’s words like they were a slap in the face. “Al, how can you say that? I thought things were different now between us.”
“I thought so, too,” Alice admitted. “But, how am I supposed to feel when I find out – at The Planet with all our friends around, no less – that you’ve spoken to Lara without telling me?” She cringed as she heard the jealous rage in her voice. This was a part of herself that she truly loathed, but she couldn’t just ignore the way she felt. Softening her tone, she added, “I hate that you felt like you had to hide that from me.”
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A&D think too much, they need to as Shane put it get over thier stubborness…This is good…PPS
this was such a could chapter we had Dana and Alice kissing and then we had drama.
These two need their heads knocking together – everyone knows they belong together except themselves. PPS
Yay for updates! I was wondering whether/hoping that Miss Lara would come into the picture somehow-you know how I ‘heart’ her as a character, with Dana OR with Alice, so the interaction with her and Danish will take some getting used to for me, even though I know everyone and their dog loves Danish;) So, I was glad to see how you’re weaving Lara in. I feel so bad for her, really. But I like how you have Dana remaining steadfast about expectations–very believable. (Hmmm, Lara just needs to have her world rocked by someone else, no?) All said, I look forward to seeing how you continue developing the story and I’m digging the way you are unravelling Danish. It’s such a refreshing change to the end of S3/all of S4, haha. Aww, you’re sweet, I’m doing well, and some day somewhere down the long road I may get enough time and confidence to write something on my own, we’ll see…you and Gold are tough acts to follow;) Looking forward to the next update!
Love this story. Always wished someone would write a storyline picking up from S3 (minus the dana-dying, of course). Thank you for doing it justice. PPS!!
argh – communication has always been such a problem with these two and you obviously captured that perfectly. but what a great chapter. i like the jenny with a thick skin comment. oh how true! post soon.
This 3rd chapter was a great way to spend part of my lunch hour! Now you’ve got the right mix going….nothing like a little added drama with Lara’s return…I was wondering if she’d some into the picture at some point. I loved that Dana wanted a danish by the way! You’re very good at building the tension between two characters by the way- I was very sad when the kissing scene come to an end. Also, had to laugh aloud when Jenny mentioned she had thick skin and could handle negative reviews! Good stuff again, blue! have a good weekend…
what!!!! nooooo… ahhh. my little heart is breaking with dana’s.i love your story, please post soon. it’s beyond amazing to read such a riveting ‘update’ on dana and alice… um, since… yeah. that whole, .. dead thing. and then the.. ghost… thing. what the fuck. okay. yes. i just want you to know i love this and appreciate it so so much, you fucking rule.
oh, ps.. cute on the planet ‘danishes’ and jenny’s ‘thick skin’ notes
i really love this story. so much so that i was late to class b/c i didnt want to stop reading it! you write the characters so well, can’t wait for more.
ouch. poor dana :S hope lara’s comeback makes danish realise what they have. i agree, you know how to build the tension between them. keep the writing :]
hey i read this a while ago but didn’t comment..i really like this story and loving the drama please continue and soon lol :)