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Survival: Chapter 4
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“How long did you put that popcorn in to cook for anyway?” Alice asked, following Dana into her living room and sitting down next to her on the couch. “You know it only needs like three minutes.”
“Yes, I realise that,” Dana replied. “It’s this damn microwave; every once in a while it decides to go into nuclear power mode.”
“I remember,” Alice said, grinning as she recalled her own past adventures with Dana’s microwave. “Why don’t you just replace it?”
“It’s supposed to be top of the line,” Dana said defensively. “Lara got it for me from a restaurant supply warehouse…” She trailed off suddenly as she realised she had accidentally touched on an awkward subject.
“It’s ok, Dana,” Alice said, trying to keep her voice light. “You can mention Lara’s name to me. Actually, that’s part of the reason I’m here. I feel bad about getting so upset with you the other day.”
“No, I understand,” Dana replied, feeling relieved that Alice finally wanted to discuss what had happened at The Planet. “I’m the one who should feel bad for not telling you that I spoke to Lara. I didn’t mean to keep it from you; I just didn’t want to ruin our evening together.”
“I know,” Alice replied, frowning a little. “I just feel bad that you think you can’t tell me that stuff. It seemed like it was a big secret or something; that’s why I got so angry. It brought back some bad memories.”
Dana bit her lip and nodded silently. “I really fucked all that up when we were together, didn’t I?” she said finally.
“I’m pretty sure I was active in the fuck-up department,” Alice replied with a slight grin. She was relieved to see Dana return her bemused look.
“Look, Al,” Dana began. “I need you to know that nothing is going to happen between Lara and I. I care about her, but things are different now between us.”
“You don’t have to promise me anything,” Alice said firmly. “You know what I realised tonight? None of that matters right now. You shouldn’t have to worry about my feelings on top of everything you’re going through. You need to focus on yourself and getting well again.” She paused, trying to figure out how to bring up what she had really come over to talk about. Finally, she decided the best approach was just to lay her cards on the table. “Look, I heard that you’re thinking about not going back on chemo,” she said, looking at Dana questioningly.
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I don’t know how I managed to miss the last couple of updates to this, but I apologize for it and I’m glad you posted this because it made me curious enough to go back and read the entire story again…and what can I say that will possibly do justice to your writing? I don’t think there could be anything good enough. I absolutely adore this story and the direction you’re taking it, and I can’t wait to see what happens. It’s truly addictive, and I mean that in only the best way. Superb job, and you make me more and more jealous with every post you make.
wow, this was absolutely excellent. You manage to get better with each chapter, blue. I can’t wait for another update!
Great update …. glad the girls have sorted themselves out, but they do need to talk!!
excellent. that was really good. i am glad they kind of worked things out.
Yeah they really do need to have that chat!! But loving the story.PPS
Hey! I was missing this story as well.. but it’s so good. I can’t wait for your next update! PPS
This was a good ending to a long day! I absolutely love the depth you’re giving Dana and Alice…and Shane–you’ve nailed them perfectly! You also nailed the problem with microwavable popcorn nicely too- I could practically smell that awful charred scent! As always, well done, and you’ve left me eagerly awaiting your next chapter! (And did I detect from your comment to Min that Lara might just have a love interest too??)
loved the update
Wow I hadnt read this story before so I just read the last few chapters and I love it! You’re a brilliant writer and I cant wait to read more! You’ve written Dana and Alice’s characters perfectly
omg wow sooooooooo good i enjoyed that very much can’t wait for the next one:)
Yay for your update! I really like how you place Shane in the midst of how Alice and Dana connect to communicate. She is indeed wise. And your unfolding of Alice and Dana’s deep bond of friendship is really delicious and thoughtful, via gentle words and gestures. Potential-rama! And of course I’m curious to see where you take our gal Lara, relative to how her inclusion moves the tale along. Please post soon, I’m such a fan-looking forward to the next installment;)
Great Update! Freaking Lara always gets in the way! PPS!
i’m glad they talked. of course i’d love to see them get back together but it’s better if they solve their issues first, at least as friends. i was kinda worried with the chemo but i hope the cancer won’t come back.thanks for the update :] i liked how shane helped them in order to talk.