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Survival: Chapter 5
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But, almost as soon as their kiss began, both women jumped apart as a loud knock at the door shattered the moment between them. They looked at each other questioningly as a woman’s voice came floating through the door.
“Al?” the voice yelled. “I know you’re home! I can see the light under the door.”
Alice’s face registered shock and confusion as she recognised the voice she’d heard. “What the fuck?” she said under her breath as she straightened her clothes and moved toward the door.
“Who is it?” Dana asked in a stage whisper.
Alice shot her an apologetic look before walking down the hallway and opening the door. Suddenly, she was thrown backwards as a tall, pretty woman nearly tackled her to the floor.
“Alice!” the woman cried excitedly, wrapping her arms tightly around her waist. Once she had regained her balance, Alice laughed and pulled the woman toward her happily.
"What are you doing here?” Alice exclaimed as she embraced the other woman firmly.
“I’m here to see you, silly!” the stranger replied excitedly.
As Dana watched the scene unfold in front of her, she felt her stomach tighten into one giant knot. As much as she wanted to stop herself from jumping to hasty conclusions, she couldn’t ignore the fact that this woman and Alice were obviously more than just friends. Her frown deepened as she tried to think up a way to make a hasty exit.
“Uh, look, I should probably get going, Al,” Dana said, once the women had finally pulled apart.
“What?” Alice asked, her face registering confusion as Dana started to make her way toward the door.
“Yeah, I’ll leave you to catch up with your… friend,” Dana said, feeling more and more embarrassed as she tried to find a graceful way to leave quickly.
Suddenly, Alice’s face brightened as she clued into what Dana was thinking. “No, no, no,” she said, moving quickly to grab Dana’s hand and pull her toward the new arrival. “Dana, this is my sister Ellie.”
Dana’s face suddenly broke into an overjoyed smile as her fears were immediately put to rest. “Oh, it’s so nice to finally meet you!” she said, her voice rising with new enthusiasm as she stepped forward to shake Ellie’s hand.
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Okay, blue…one question….what exactly about this chapter weren’t you pleased with? ‘Cause it flowed well, it built ever so much more delicious tension between Alice and Dana…and it gave us a teensy window into Alice that we might not otherwise have without Ellie….who I love, by the way! I laughed at ‘Al’ and ‘El’! On a more serious note, I thought that you captured the angst that anyone who goes through chemo experiences in a very realistic way. And, I love the way Alice is there to back up Dana! (And the kiss wasn’t bad either!) And so, I’ll stick a bag of popcorn in the microwave and look forward to the next chapter!
YAY!!!! I like where this is going!!!! Pirates Are Awesome!!!
Great update – thanks
If this is an example of writing you’re not pleased with, I know I’ll hate my own meager capabilities more than I currently do when you post something you’re proud of. I absolutely loved this! Too cute. And yay, confirmation that those two crazy kids still love each other. Seriously, I adore this story.
so cute. i loved it. i wasn’t expecting that judging from your description. but it was awesome. post soon.
i just found it too. How is that?? anyway– i love it. i have never understood how The L Word passed up on the opportunity to tell THIS story.
I totally love this story and this chapter was just to cute!
so so good i enoyed that very much..i hope dana will be fine :S
So I just found this story and it is developing wonderfully. I love the interaction and tension. I especially appreciate the flow and pace of the story. Well done!