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    Survival: Chapter 6

    Story written on May 15, 2007 by bluemini.
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    An old friend shows up at The Planet; Ellie reveals a secret to Alice; and Alice forgets to do something.

    “Hey, we might not have talked much over the past year, but I’m pretty sure that’s not exactly the whole story,” Ellie said, giving Alice a knowing look.  “You and Dana were having problems before Lara showed up, right?”

    “I guess,” Alice admitted reluctantly.  “I was starting to go into my usual psycho-possessive mode, and it was pushing Dana away.  But, Lara took advantage of the situation and broke us up.”

    “I doubt she did it purposely, Al,” Ellie replied.  “Besides, she seemed… sweet,” she added after some thought.

    “She is sweet; that’s the problem,” Alice said angrily.  “If she was selfish or mean, things would be a lot simpler.  But, unlike me, she’s always been really good for Dana.”

    “Yeah, but didn’t Lara leave while Dana was sick?” Ellie asked.  “It seemed like Jenny and a few of the others weren’t too impressed about that.”

    “I know, but they’re wrong if they think Lara only left because it was easier for her,” Alice explained.  “Dana worked really hard to push Lara away; she was pretty awful to her.  And, I spoke to Lara on the phone right before she left for Paris.  She was ripped up about what happened.”

    “So, you and Lara were friends?” Ellie asked in confusion, as she tried to fit this piece of news in with everything else she knew about Alice and Lara’s relationship.

    “Well, I wouldn’t say ‘friends’ exactly,” Alice explained.  “But, we helped each other when Dana was first diagnosed with cancer.  I started to realise that she’s not the devil incarnate.  But, that doesn’t help me now, since she’s obviously back in order to try to make things work with Dana again.”

    “You don’t think Dana wants to get back together with her, do you?” Ellie asked.  

    Alice shrugged helplessly.  “I don’t know,” she answered sadly.  “I don’t think so; but, if she does, there’s not much I can do about it.”

    “Al, you’re so stubborn,” Ellie said, throwing her hands up in exasperation.  “I saw you and Dana together for a total of fifteen minutes before we went to the concert, and it took me about 30 seconds to realise she is completely in love with you.  Why can’t you see that?”

    “You think she’s in love with me?” Alice asked, her face brightening considerably from its gloomy thoughts.

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    3. Well, you were right…that was pretty sappy, but wonderfully so. I actually said “awww” out loud there at the end. Ellie and Lara would totally be cute…is it weird that I can picture them together in my head, having no idea what Ellie looks like? Oh well. This was fantastic, as they always are.

    4. what a nice surprise to find such a quick update this evening! And, it’s totally sweet that you give me credit for spurring you to bring a sister into the mix. (though I have to say you’ve one upped me with the whole notion of Lara still being with a Pieszecki—just thank you for not bringing Lenore into the picture! Again, I loved the way you capture the inner turmoil of all the characters. And the way they work through it in relationship to the other characters (not only Alice and Dana, but also the whole gang with Lara, and Ellie with Alice and Lara with Dana and…well, you get the picture….I’m totally loving where this story is going!) I do think you’ve managed to nail the ‘living’ with cancer issue…as opposed to ‘dying’ with cancer, and I for one think that’s fantastic. Good luck with real life, and I’ll be waiting patiently for your return! :)

    5. so cute. i knew the ellie and lara thing was coming. though i didn’t know ellie was completely gay. go figure, right? well super update. thanks for being so quick. love it.

    6. wow!!! my god you have no idea how much i enjoy reading your story its written so well and danish is so cute in this im glad dana will not be dying can’t wait for the next one keep up the good work :)

    7. I’ve been out of town so was so glad to catch up on your updates-wow, this chapter really moved things along. I heart this fic and how you are shaping things. The “debriefing” was totally sisterly–nice touch. And thank you for keeping my girl Lara in the mix, yay! Can’t wait to see what is in store for her (but I like what you’re getting at…) and Danish too. Please post soon, I’ll be leaping with joy!

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