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SWEET MEMORIES – Chapter 2
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Angelica heard a door close out in the living room. She thought about what Cathy said and figured she had nothing to lose by telling Bette that the last 8 months Bette had been dating Kristen have been the worst of her life.
Boo: Back, I think the leach is gone, I heard the front door close.
Kitty: Are you going to be in trouble for being up so late? If you talk to her now she might be mad you’re up.
Boo: I don’t care, they’re been together so long they’re practically married Cat!
Kitty: Awwww…do it then, talk to her and I’ll hang out here for when you get done in case you need me.
Boo: You’re the best Cat, thanks!
Angelica opened her bedroom door and looked at the time. The clock read just after midnight. She went into Bette’s room since the house was silent, thinking she had laid down for the night. However, Bette wasn’t there so Angelica ventured out into the kitchen. She saw the pool lights reflecting off the dark of night. Bette was leaning up against the side of the pool, her back to the house. Her hair was wet, she looked like she had just finished a swim and was relaxing after a long day.
Angelica went back into her room and slipped on her flip-flops so her feet wouldn’t get wet. She made her way out to the patio preparing her speech for her mother. She wanted to make sure she threw in there how her and Tina were meant to be together, but to phrase it in a manner where it wasn’t obvious what she wanted. She approached the pool but stopped when she heard Bette make a noise. She walked further into the backyard opening her mouth to get Bette’s attention when she heard a moan. This time, she stopped to look at her mother wondering what was wrong. Bette threw her head back and moaned out Kristen’s name.
“Oh God, right there Kristen!”
Angelica froze, she had just walked in on her mother having sex in the pool. She blinked, unable to move her feet from the place she was standing, her heart beating fast, her mouth agape. It went from bad to worse quickly as Bette hoisted herself out of the pool naked, sitting on the side with her legs spread open. Kristen still stood in the pool with her face between Bette’s legs. She watched in horror as Bette placed her hands on the top of Kristen’s wet hair, smiling as she looked down at her.
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ahahahahha…..i beat chicki…..im goin to read now…….lmao
wow gumby, your back, and keeping us posted fast. great to read your stories again
Wildie you F*cking B*tch!!!!!! FOUL…I had to log out of Gumby’s account to LOG in as Chicki in order to comment. NO FAIR. You are gonna be in so much trouble on that Vegas trip….>GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.*ahem*…Anyway, on to the wonderful Author. Okay Gumby….*pulling up a chair and straddling it*….now, you know exactly how I feel about Angelica finding Bette and Kristen in such a compromising way……it….it’s just….GRRRRR…its WRONG WRONG WRONG…..God I am so lucky I have not been in a situation where a girlfriends child has come in on us….I would be soooo mortified. AND…ANDDDDDDDD….it doesn’t say much for Kristen, because I feel, that she shouldn’t be encouraging ANY sex at Bette’s house in a place outside the bedroom. Come on!!! Let’s face it, whether or not Angie was suppose to be in bed or not, the pool area, or any other place in the house that is considered a “Common Area” should not be places that Bette and Kristen engage in a sexual escapade with her home. It’s JUST WRONG!!!!!!!!!Okay….so you totally know how I felt about all that, but…..other than that part, I LOVE the storyline totally. I too sense there is alot of true, intimate, deep feelings that Bette and Tina have for one another…..I believe. *Hugs and Kisses*
wooohooo….ok……this is gonna get realll good and reall quick…the remembering will hopefully bring those 3 together..and gelica….dang….i hate that she has to deal with all of the ‘otherness’……it happens everyday unfortunately…let’s hope it makes her stronger, and doesnt bring her down….great update gumbo……
WOW!! I got to read these 2 chappies one after the other, and I am ready to keep reading :-S But there are no more chapters yet. :( I feel bad for Angelica. It is always hard when decisions out of our control effect us, and at 13, Angie really doesn’t have the know how, of how to handle bigots and horrible people. Tina was funny. All I could think of was Tina getting drunk on the floor while waiting for Angelica to open it. We are disney buddies. Thanks for the comment. I was glad to make the shout outs just in time. Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter. Post soon. Ness
uh oh…..its the “otherness” rearing its ugly head. Its bad enough to be a child of divorce but I think Angie percieves that being the child of divorced lesbians has her totally alone. Bette and Tina will have to show a united front to help her maintain…..and maybe find their way back to each other!
Liking it very much. Also, pleased to see your return. I think Angelica need to let it “SLIP” some kind of way to let Bette and Tina know that she caught her having SEX. I would love to read Tina’s reaction. PLEASE!!!!! pps
Gumby I’m your loyal fan forever. Can wait to join along on this journey! YEAH BABY YEAH! LOL Happy Holidays to you as well!
I just commented on the last chapter…by the time I was done there was already a new chapter! I’m really liking this story. I haven’t been this excited about a new story in a while. I’m hoping Angelica will tell Bette how she feels about that stupid girlfriend and that we’ll see what Tina has been up to. Great job!
yay gumby!! here we go let memory lane begin
OMG! How fucking embarrassing to see that! That brought back my own memories of when I heard my parents. Atleast Angie could run away. My young parents decided to the deed while sleeping in the same bed with me! We were on vacation I was around 9 or 10 and sleeping when my mother comes in and is like ” honey, turn your head this way” She turns my head and then a few mintues later I hear the moaning! Needless to say I was awake for like 10 mins before I drifted off to sleep! I could not turn my head because she kept pressing it! lol Other times included passing thier bedroom door, at which time I hummed very loudly in my head and walked real fast! lol I am glad Angie decided to talk to her parents. More, more! I will be sure to be safe as I travel through this amusement ride! Post soon!
Oh man. =/ I know when I was little I walked into my parents’ bedroom while they were having sex at least once, but I never actually saw anything (it was dark, thank God LOL). Bette needs to dump Kristen’s ass anyway and she and Tina need to get back together. =p Maybe this trip down memory lane will reunite them. But I’m sure Angelica doesn’t want to see them having sex either. lol!
Awwwwwww such good memories of their meeting. Do you think that you can bring back that magic to them? Tina is already looking at Bette with different eyes. I believe she wants her back. Now if only Bette will go back to her. Bette will be the one to help Angie the most but you can not count out Tina either.
G….This story is turning out great. You have such a good “ear” for their dialogue and interaction w/one another. I think that you’ve portrayed Angie in an authentic way. Her fears are real and her words are accurate for a bright 13 year old girl. Some authors made Angie as a 3 year old sound like Albert Einstein. Way too mature and sophisticated but you seem to be right on point. At least, IMO. Keep posting b/c this has become one of my favorite, look forward to reading stories. And the Chickster better keep writing b/c her fans are anxiously awaiting. It must be difficult to write the mother of all NC-17s. I know Tina will be screaming Bette’s name that us folks here in AZ will hear it w/o reading the story. Oh, I think I’m hearing some moaning now……
great writing and superb storyline…so glad to be reading your updates again. Agree with ninety9percentsure that Angelica should let it “slip” what she saw. It should be a reminder to her moms that inappropriate behavior should not be tolerated in the presence of a child.
Loving the story…am glad to see some parents monitor 13 year olds computer time…maybe someone will check her IM message log and find out about the pool dive.And everyone needs to stop talking to chicki so she can get to posting!!!
Hey wass up Gumby! nice chapter there lol I never caught my parents doing it but i sure heard the noises they were doing..lol only you to make me remember this :P I can see that Tina is very still into Bette but what about B?? is she really into Kristen or just having fun??. Post soon!.
I am still scarred from seeing my parents go at it like rabbits. It’s something you don’t wanna discuss like who ate the last slice of pie. *burp* wasn’t me…I am in love with this story Gumby and it’s only chapter 2. I don’t like Bette’s girlfriend. She must go far far away. If Angelica has to go thru this stuff the least she can have is her parents together.
BRING ON MEMORY LANE…LOTSA R’S AND NC17’S GOING DOWN THAT LANE!!!!
God! I feel bad for Angelica having to witness her mother getting it on with some chick…Bette should have known better and if it comes out, I don’t think Tina will be to happy. Next chapter pleassssse.
oh great a stroll down memory lane….and I roared with laughter at Angie’s mortification of finding her mom with the gf…and I loved every scene with B and T… great, great, great PPS
the story of B&T first meeting would be good not only for angelica to hear but also for B&T themselves, to help them to remember why they fell in love and why they need to be back together
When you have children in the house,and they are HOME.Then sex should be in the bedroom behind locked doors, Bette knows better and Kristen well she will find out when Bette dropss her like a hot potatoe. If Bette knew that anglie had seen her she would die. Tina would be very angry. Plus the stuff she was going through in school,that is so uncall for, The need to get this straighten out with Angie and the school. thanks
Im Already loving this story.Keep it comming!
WHOA….Chicki….what’s on your mind? LOL! You gotta love Chicki’s passion for telling you what she didn’t LIKE about your story…she is HILARIOUS! I do agree that witnessing your **ahem***parents have sex, is going to leave a mark. You will want to rip your eyes right out of your head…Hell…you might as well get your check book out and start making payments to your therapist, Now! LOL! And if your the PARENT and you find out your kid saw you….UGH…I don’t even want to GO THERE! My mother use to say the same mantra as Melvin. Little children, Little problems, Big children, BIG PROBLEMS. And damn it, if she wasn’t right… PPS, I love this story.
Just caught you are amazing! yah I walked in on parents once. Thank gof the lights were off, but trust it is worse when you live in your basement…. Sound travels through vents my friends… *barf…. Yes it is scaring lol. Well PSS and keep up the amazin material!!!
I love this story of yours Gumby.Great to have you back.
More!
great story! please keep going! i hav finals coming up soon but i’m addicted to ur story!
Gumby welcome back!(happy dance) this story is so good i can expect less from you, i hope read soon the next chapter!
Ok, I think this trip down memory lane could open up some memories and feelings that could lead to possibilities for B&T… did that make sense? Well, it did to me. Anyway, I’m glad Angie is at least going to listen… and I do like to see B&T getting along… so it’s all good!
(Clarity rubbing her eyes) Gumby, is it really you? Virtual high-5 for writing another outstanding piece of fanfic! As for this chapter, memo to Angelica: Please file that pool scene under the letter C for Curl Up and Die Moments. Go with me on this, Gumby – I’m pretty sure if Kristen had eaten more dinner at The Planet she wouldn’t have needed to snack on Bette…thus sparing Angelica the pain of her retina’s being on fire as she watched that scene unfold…uh, so to speak. I’m definitely looking forward to subsequent chapters Gumby. Welcome Back like Kotter!
Greta start to another great story, hope Tina & Bette Get together soon, as they obviosly love each other loads still
sooooooooooooooooooooo the whole pages was a set up just to give me less grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..tina lover what i said i like her lets not go over board now bette is the alpha.. now listen kid you r about to hear how much of the alpha you mom is longer
OH YES! I want to hear Tina’s version of this ‘love at first sight’ story! Add Bette’s comments and then Angie’s ‘If its mom that made ou gay, why arent you together anymore’ and we have the mix! ;) OMG walking in on your mother when your 13 must be traumatizing O.o
Gumby this chapter was just great!!! Yes I have a son who will be 14 soon and it is very hard sometimes too get him to understand somethings but with time and understanding he gets the picture. I so love your story. Thank you
Damn this is so good!