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Technology – Anything can really be done
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(Fuck! ok wait I need to catch my breath, I just started to vision that last paragraph and um…yea so if you see any misspelled words don’t count it against me, a girl can only handle so much at one time ;-)
*swallowing* *fanning myself*….ok now where was I…
Tina was now in the bedroom sitting by her laptop, it has been about 25 minutes and Bette should be calling any minute now. All of a sudden she hears someone knock at the door, she goes to open it and found a brunette standing there.
Meanwhile the same night at the Planet
Kit was going over the stock that was coming in early the next morning when she was interrupted by a blonde.
Alice: Boo!
Kit jumped knocking papers off the counter.
Kit: Damn it Alice! You scared the shit of me.
Alice was laughing hard at this point.
Alice: I’m sorry Kit I wasn’t trying to honestly.
Kit glared at Alice.
Kit: Oh really, well why the hell did you just jumped at me screaming boo, unless you just want an ass whopping.
Still laughing.
Alice: aw come on, you know you Porters are all bark and no bite.
In a glimpse Alice screamed.
Alice: OUCH!!! What the fuck…Did you just bite me Kit?
Kit mocking Alice voice.
Kit: I’m sorry Alice I wasn’t trying to honestly.
Alice was about to protest with the older Porter but decided against it, she got what she deserved and she knew it.
Alice: anyways I just came over to see have you heard from Bette, I been calling her all day and she hasn’t been answering.
Kit: yea I talk to her a few hours ago, she said something about go to see her new friend Tina at her studio.
Alice: wait the computer voice lady? How do you know about Tina?
Kit: who the fuck is the computer voice lady Alice?
Alice: it’s a long story, just know Scarlett Johansson is involved…anyways back to the question at hand, how do you know about Her?
Kit not understanding the joke in Alice statement.
Kit: Uh maybe it something to do with Bette being my sister and we tell each other everything.
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sorry you see so many posts, this website is really starting to irritate me with all the technical difficulties, anyways hope it’s all here for you to read you should see about nine pages.
LOVED IT! You are a great writer! Everything Pie_Fair said! By the way Pie_Fair why aren’t you posting on your stories? I know on a trip! Back to this wonderful story! I love me some Kit! I’m so happy that she and Bette are so close. I love Alice at times when she isn’t working my last damn nerve. I’m off today after working 12 days in a row. I can read all day if you can/want to post again. Its 5;23 am here. I should be asleep even to a muscle relaxer at 8;30 pm last night. Didn’t go to sleep until 12:30 am and was woke at 4:20 am. Anyways, please post again SOON on this amazing story! Please NO end soon just post again soon. PPS
omg cell we are in the same boat, I’m at work right now in dallas tx it’s 5:28 here, I get off at 7am and have to be back at 7pm yet I still can’t find sleep so I maybe posting again today then fall asleep at work…and thanks for not wanting it to end but there’s a end to everything my friend. I’m glad you like the story though, always a pleasure as you know!
yes priceless indeed I’m still laughing at it…thanks for commenting Pie!
deal
hold on which one of yours, not Find Our Way I hope
Wait both you please dont end these stories. I find some the writers here write good stories and than disappear. The other day one the writers replied that they were having writers block but couldnt finish the story (sigh). So unless your experiencing such an event which Im sure your not because the comments you recieving should be guiding you.
TN1,
I don’t know how you categorized your greatest writers but I am certain that I am not one of them coz my ATBNTG is only my first story while the other writers here have already written a lot of stories under their names but Thanks <3
I personally believe that AllyEmmerson and BenMac are the best but of course I also love BOP, Robyn, BEG, BAT, BlackBird and the latest would be Pie_Fair and the most Special would be you. Haha.
Anyway, no matter what we think about our selves. One thing is for sure. We are able to give a little entertainment to our readers and when they comment on our stories, we also feel a certain happiness.
Lastly, believe when I say that you may not be feeling like a real writer but you are a good storyteller.
Love,
Scribe
ok I can accept that, Storyteller sounds about right, and how dare you not include yourself Always the best Friend is awesoommee, with the exception of Mika being in there of course lol, just kidding, but thanks for the comment Scribe you always make my day ;-)
Loved the anticipation. Loved the “fuck off!” Loved, loved, LOVED Kate’s hat blowing off of her head.
Looking forward to the next chapter. PPS.
Lmao thank you for commenting and nice meeting you hope to see more of your comments
oh, I’ll be so sad if the end of this story. I really enjoy reading this.
I loved this chapter. You have given me what I wanted long ago: someone did that damn hat falls off Kate’s head. I laughed so hard! It was beautiful, Tina!
Alice never seems to change (yes she can be funny and entertaining, but in such cases, infuriating)
I loved the moment when Bette and Tina first saw each other.
I thank you for posting. I look forward to the next chapter.
I agree Alice work my last nerves sometimes, but when writing about someone annoying Bette is can only be her. Omg lipi I was laughing hard too when rereading it like I didn’t know it would happen, I bet she put it right back on too lol…thanks for always supporting me on here and Twitter ;-)
Hi, I did fall back to sleep after writing that comment. I woke at 8:15am! Called my Mom and talked to her, fast forward threw a couple of shows I had recorded and now I’m off to cook my Sunday dinner. I just pray I don’t burn it again! I did that last Saturday! Hell, I don’t cook often and I forgot that I was cooking. Anyway, I sure hope you get some sleep but I also hope and pray you post again today. I use to work 11pm til 7 am for 12 years I LOVED it. I know everything must come to an end but I’m sure you can extend this some more. PLEASE Pie_ Fair don’t end your stories to soon either. I do understand though! PPS
Hahahahah cellphone48 your day sounds like a story itself, wow you crack me up. And yes I love 11pm to 7am also, I called myself a vampire because I can’t do mornings at all, I’m a night owl for sure. What are you cooking maybe it can go in the story lol because that burnt line you said is Bette all the way hahaha
Wow! You are talking to little old me! I’m going to cook B’que chicken thighs, rolls, noodles and French style green beans with a Coke on the side. My sweet will be a Baby Ruth candy bar which I eat a 6 pack a day. I know not good for me but I love them. PPS
I can eat a kitkat everyday and I’m allergic to chocolate so I understand no judgement here celly
not because it’s over, I want to read more, you’re torturing me
I’m back! I didn’t have any French green beans so I had to cook bake beans instead! Oh well! I’m just waiting 30 more minutes before I eat. We all eat things that isn’t good for us but oh well. We only live once! PPS
I am sad to see this one end but I look forward to your next one. You are an excellent storyteller/writer. I enjoy all that you write.
Thanks gsilva, I appreciate it and hopefully I have another story in me
Loved Tina telling Kate off. Banter between Kit and Alice was great. Thanks
Lol, welcome
Now look TN you know my feelings on cliff-hangers!!!!!
Seriously really like this story – don’t finish it, do a sequel with them having, or attempting to have, a relationship and technology’s part in that relationship. Just a thought girl, come on now you can do it1!!
Can they meet soon, please?!?
Post soon – you too PF!
well don’t read next chapter then lol another cliff hanger im sorry so SG, but I love your comments you know that ;-)
Fuck off = Priceless. Please TB1 and Pie. Don’t end your stories. We love them. Csnt wait fgor your next posts.
yes please Pie don’t stop your story, but I’m sorry mines have to end, thanks for keeping up else73
Yea I notice that too Pie, and I’m happy I brought on more readers because you’re story is fantastic and it should be read by everyone :-)
Great banter with Kit and Alice. Great hat-trick for Tina. This story is so cute! Thanks TN1. The comments are entertaining too.
I’m here! Sorry for my silence but I’m back. I took vacation from work and get out of town, to my despair the internet didn’t work, I almost died!!
I got home today, I haven’t changed clothes the first thing I did was call my notbook and for my happiness has many stories to update my reading.
Let’s get down to what I consider you!!! TN1, I’m very suspect to talk, as I said several times that you are my source and light to the TiBette history, and one of my favorite writers, the fact that only one story (in progress) doesn’t deserve merit, on the contrary “Are short stories that are born great writers ” you will keep writing and will write great stories because I believe in his talent. I love it when you take a break in history to have a thought, and your comments are funny, don’t stop writing, okay!
I cherish when Tina slammed the door in the face of kety, lol, I washed my soul because I can’t stand this woman. Al as always priceless.
B & T for a first date (virtual) was very beautiful!
10 stars with all merits!!
CONGRATULATIONS!
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