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Technology – More texts and A Meeting
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Customer Representative: Here you go ma’am, let me just set this up for you and you will be on your way.
Bette: Thank you so much.
Tina walked over and both women stood there standing in line, waiting. After a few seconds Tina finally looked at the brunette and was mesmerize by how beautiful she was, she then wondered how did Bette look?…Bette felt eyes on her and turn around and look at the the blonde and smile graciously. After about five minutes the representative was done, Bette was going through her purse looking for money to pay, at this time Tina had started to wander around looking at the new phones, she got tired of standing in one spot, but more importantly she was felt weird because all she could do was stare at the brunette and she didn’t know why, but that was one hot ass woman she thought. The customer representative handed Bette a receipt.
Bette: Thank you for all you help.
Customer Representative: No problem, that’s what I’m here for.
Bette: Well you were very helpful, thanks!
With that last sentence Bette turned to walk out, unfortunately Tina didn’t hear her because she was now walking back over to the counter after seeing the beautiful brunette getting ready to walk out. Both women looked at each other for a split second and smiled, Tina then turn to the representative and started her request.
Tina: Hi are you? I’m here to buy a new phone.
Customer Representative: Sure I can help you, what kind of phone are you looking to get?
Tina: Well I need an IPhone 7, I broke mines today.
Customer Representative: Wow this the day of IPhone 7’s huh?
Tina: What do you mean?
Customer Representative: Oh nothing it’s just that lady before you needed the same phone, somehow hers got broken to.
Tina: Oh
Tina then though once more about the beautiful brunette, after a few seconds she was pulled from her thoughts….
Customer Representative: Excuse me, ma’am did you hear me.
Tina: I apologize what did you say.
Customer Representative: I said give me a few minutes and I will have that right out for you.
Tina: Sure no problem.
The customer representative went to the back again and Tina leaned against the counter thinking….I wonder what Bette is doing right now…she probably think I’m avoiding texting her after that slip up yesterday….shit he’s need to hurry up!…..
Stay tuned for more Technology….
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Riiiighttttt!!! Now you know I’m not a lover of hanging from cliffs!! Whilst this is not strictly a cliff-hanger it’s pretty close! Soooo can we have an update fairly quickly to move this fascinating story of technology along, please? Enjoying it – thanks.
Yes SG, and I just went and edited a little bit because this site has been messing up lately so the punctuation and inserts was off but it should be fixed now. Thanks for liking it everyone has been telling me what they want to happen and it kind of throw me off from my original storyline, but hey trying to give you guys what you want…always a pleasure Sassy aka SG lol
Thanks for posting! Looking forward to reading more :)
Sarah1706 thank you for taking the time out to read it, I will ps
TN1,
Another superb chapter from you friend. How I wish that you’ll be able to write more pages..
Please post again tomorrow. Haha! Joke! No pressure friend. Take your time. I know how difficult it is to make a 1 page so you deserve all the time in the world. Just sit back, read and comment on your fave stories then get back to writing ASAP.
I’ll be waiting :)
XOXO
Scribe
Hey Scribe thanks pal, but you avoiding my last comment towards you, you need to get rid of Mika lol jk it’s your story I’m.going to stick with you no matter what ;-) thanks for reading
Very clever. I am really enjoying your story!
Thanks
Great update, TN1! Like two ships passing in the night. I love their messages back and forth. Can’t wait until they realize they were in the same spot together!
It’s funny because I honestly can’t wait for them to realize it also, just got to write it. Thanks for reading trece
almost wow, I want them to be girlfriends, just wait.
Haha me too, maybe they will gotta wait and see…stick with me, love the username by the way…neat
CTV thank you, in real life piki is my nickname.
And it’s cute I like it
Gracias , que amable
thanks, you’re friendly
Nice story! PPS!
Thanks, I see you are sticking with the story thanks
Oh man, you are a tease: )
Expensive story, i hope for them they can behave themself, 600,00 bucks is a lot of money to spend.
Love the story!
$600 yes it sure is, but what can you expect it’s Tina and Bette only the best for them…and thanks on the compliment
Help! Where are pages 3-5? Error, page not found?
You have to keep clicking the story, I don’t know but the website is having technical problems I’m sorry, I hope you find the pages I would for you to read the story
Now its working.
Great story :)
Thank you murmeli
Girl! You are too damn good! I can’t wait for them to realize they were looking at each other. That is going to be amazing! I love this story! Can you please update again TONIGHT! Yes, only the best for Bette and Tina! They do have great jobs and can afford those phone. PPS
Lol thanks cell, yea when they realize it that is going to be crazy, I’m pretty sure they will be shock as hell
Wow! Ships passing in the night. They were close enough to touch. Technology brings us close but can also keep us apart. Please post again soon.
Majicspider60 that is soon true never thought of it that way, but yes they are passing ships and don’t even know it
So irritated! I was going to be 1st this morning and it wouldn’t let me stay logged in and comment! Then, I had to go to work and all yall got ahead of me! Not fair! I’m still going to claim it. 1st!!!
Ok, now that my temper tantrum is over…
Great job T! I love this story! Can NEVER possibly get enough B&T drama free sexy in love stories and I know you love them as much as I do. ;) I think you are brilliant with this storyline. So relevant to today’s society and how we communicate and even date! Thank you for taking the time to share this one with us. I’m lovin it!!!
Hahahahahahahahahhahahaha wow Robbie that crack me up, listen I feel your pain it was doing the same thing to me this morning it took forever to post this story, and yes very relevant to today’s society. Keep reading I will be most grateful
your story makes me smile!
You taking the time out to read, makes me smile :-)…thanks
I’m your fan TN1 !! My heart nearly stopped.
When Bette saw Tina arrive at the store, I said no no no! it is not
the time to meet, it was a close call. Only you have that
fabulous idea of them going at the same store. was tantastico!
I loved the thoughts of both would be like the appearance of
Bette and how would tina.E is funny because we are part
Also this technology, how would TN1, Benmac
Phacey, scribe robbierob, pie_fair, robyntibetter, littlepeculiar, grindright
and etc … and even though we did not know we share the same passion,
TLW (I TiBette, of course).
CONGRATULATIONS !! 10 stars!
Mscully I’m very flattered, I’m starting to follow you now lol I see you reading tibette as much as me. 10 stars wow thanks for that lol. Those are some extraordinary authors you just name in that list I’m not sure I belong there but thanks anyway
Well I prefer T-Mobile but hey it’s not me it’s Tibette, and loving your story Finding Our Way I’m still hanging in there even though Tina is a asshole lol jk…thanks Pie
Bravo… Great chapter, my stomach feeling the butterflies now… I thought they will get to say hi with each other in the phone shop. Please speed up… Thank you
Pinky3001 hey you guys ask for meeting not for them to speak lol..but I will try to get it up the speed lol