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Morning
The alarm goes off …with only 45 minutes of sleep…Tina is laying her bed with the cover pull up over her naked body; she reaches out and realizes Kate is nowhere to be found. She gets up and immediately search the bathroom, no Kate…then the kitchen, again no Kate…she goes to the living room window and looks out and realize Kate’s car is no longer parked in her driveway.
Tina: “Fucking Bitch!”…so stupid…so stupid…Tina hits herself on the forehead…”What the fuck was I thinking.”
Tina then goes in the bathroom to shower and rinse Kate’s poison off of her… (I just had to add that in hahaha)…all the while her phone is blinking, signaling a text message.
Hi, sorry to bother you, you called me last night, and well, I was just wondering if you ever found who you was looking for – From 310-565-2230
Tina quickly dries herself off and get dressed for work, if she wants to go to her favorite café for coffee and still make it to work on time, then she better hurry…Tina never opens her phone she just grabs it and hurries out the door.
On the other side of town…… and before the text message was sent…
Bette was sitting up in her bed…not having much luck with sleeping, she been up for the last hour just thinking about the mystery lady Tina Kennard who called her twice last night looking for a woman named Kate…Bette didn’t understand why she felt comfortable talking to this stranger…but she did.
…What’s wrong with me why am I thinking of her? Obvious that lady is a crazy psycho calling on people phone at 12:30 am looking for a woman just to tell her to Fuck off…Bette thought to herself…(chuckling) when you think about it, it is kind of funny…Bette thought again
“Ok let me get up before I’m late for work”…Bette was walking to the kitchen and before she could enter she yelled when she saw someone far off in the kitchen taken her by complete surprise…
Bette: “Alice, what the hell?”
Alice: “What I told you we were going to do an intervention, remember last night on the phone?”
Alice is sitting at the table with her hands folded, glasses on her face, obviously waiting patiently for Bette to wake and enter the kitchen.
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Special Thanks to BenMac , Phacey, Scribe, and Blackbird I truly admire you guys and the work that you write, and know I told you guys this already but I can’t help it I’m obsessed with your writing, it meant a lot that you took the time out so thanks….Second, to mscully and SassyGran thanks for following the stories I read, like I really feel we are all one person, I mean we read the same stories at the same time somebody has to be stalking the other, lol jk…..last but definitely not least thanks to BAT2012, azmama, wkm, didi1956, Aiyahnah, lipitora, ut, Pie_Fair, RobbieRob, pikiangelica, els73, pinky3001, cellphone48, Dee22 for commenting and enjoying the stories I really appreciate it. Anyone I miss im sorry my brain doesn’t always function normally but thank you very much lol!
TN1,
I want u to know that you made me smile when I saw that you have posted an update on your story but after reading your page 1.. you had me laughing all by my self. So lucky that I am alone here in our apartment or else my friends will give me that questioning look again whenever I burst out laughing due to the fanfics here in LesFan.
Gosh! Ur commentary at the end of ur page 1 is so funny. LOL!
Anyway, thanks for this update. Looking forward for Tee’s reply.
Love,
SCRIBE
I bet they look at you bursting out laughing and wonder…do that person have to torex syndrome hahahaha (wait did I spell it right)..anyways that’s funny I’m glad you enjoy my humor. I’m honor to put a smile on your face
OMG! I think that this is my first time to comment twice in a row in an update but I couldn’t help but react with your Author’s Notes.
About the way you hate Kate’s hat.. Ha Ha Ha! It’s her trademark like. When I see Kate’s name in fanfics, her image with that Hat or Cap replays in my mind. But it is still much better than when I think about Shane, I always remember that Black Vest? That she us wearing in Season 1 when she saw B and T sitting in front of their house. It was fucking hilarious :)
Omg she looked so hot and not in a sexy way, but like the sun shining hot lol
Cute story! I love the banter between Bette and Alice. Totally can picture the events you describe. Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next!
Thanks glad you like it
I was looking forward to the sequel!
I loved the writer notice, I burst out laughing (still good that I didn’t read it at work) :D
Alice is a crazy (but she always has been)
Please posting soon, because I love this story.
Thanks lipitora, and I agree Alice is a little throwed but only.Alice can get away with crazy comments. A banter without Bette and Alice, well that’s no fun. I hope you keep reading lipitora thank you
Pie_Fair I agree she brings that extra spice in stories lol you never know what’s gonna come out her mouth. In like I said in my notes I will be getting rid of her soon lol ..thanks for taking the time to read…I soo love where your story Find Our Way is going, awesome
TN1, I had to laugh out loud at your 1st page commentary. I was thinking, OH NO!!! Don’t want to read a sex scene with Tina and Kate. I love your stories and glad you made an update to this one. I’m enjoying it and hope Bette gets to her cell phone soon!
Thanks trecelovinit, this is our first time communicating so welcome and glad you had a good laugh, I achieve my goal then lol. And I agree Tibette and these damn cellphones argh I’m ready for them to talk, hopefully soon
Hi tib1!
First of all I admit it I’m the stalker!!!! Blackbird started me with a couple of authors to look for and then I noticed you were commenting and my obsession with Tibette meant I was drawn by your ‘handle’ and the rest as they say is history!!!
Second the laughing out loud – yes I admit to that also and thank God I’m no longer working as I might be considered to be ‘odd’. Who am I kidding I am already consider ‘eccentric’ by my peers! Perhaps that’s why I like Alice so much.
Thirdly – leave the best till last, liked your first attempt, loved your second!!! So can we have Part 2 fairly quickly please!
BTW glad Kate’s not going to be around much longer – apart from Jodie I disliked her most!
Hey SassyGran I’m with you 100% with the exception of Henry those two are who I hate the most . And I guess we both are stalkers because soon as I see your name I click on the story to see what it is about then I read ithahahahaha. I’m going to try and post sooner for next chapter thanks for.keeping up with story
Hi tibettenation1,
i didn’t comment on your first chapter, shame on me.
I would like you to know that i admire your courage to begin a story.
You do a wonderful job, it’s funny to read and give the rainy days a glimp off shunshine.
Thank you for that.
I try to post a comment, but the site makes it very difficult at the moment.
Wanted to let you know i love your story, it’s making me laugh aloud.
Thanks for having the courage to begin a New B&T story.
Thanks BIbi28 it’s ok that you didn’t comment the first time, you’re here now so I appreciate it very much. I know the site has been crazy lately but I’m glad that I am bringing such laughter for you, I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks
So glad you continued with the story. Love the banter and the whole situation. Thanks so much.
It’s a pleasure wkm hope you continue to enjoy
Love your story….. yes I don’t like Kate orJodi, o please no kj in this story…:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) thx for your post. Just LOVE bette and tina
Oh don’t worry no matter what Jodi won’t be in my story, ugh lol, glad you like it.
Just registered so I can comment…keep writing, gal. I like this type of B and T “meeting” story.
Welcome to the site as a commenter I should say, thanks for liking the story and I love the username by the way :-)..hope you come back to read next chapter
Thanks for post again! I love this so far! Can’t wait for you to off Kate! Bette and Tina just needs to meet now. Like in the Planet by mistake! Just hearing each other voice should do it. PPS
I am so happy to see you continue your story sooo soon.. Ya, please get rid of Kate.
Next one shall be more conversation between our B&T. Gambateh ! Jia Yo !
Thank you ..PPS
Oh thank God you couldn’t bring yourself to write out the Kate/Tina no no scene! I wouldn’t have been able to read it! YUCK!!! Kate needs to fall off a cliff never to be heard from again. That girl annoys me almost as much as Jenny.
Such a great job with this story girl. I can’t wait to read more! Bring it on!!!
TiBette, I posted my comment on your story, and do not know
esplicar what happened to my comment! .I’m with
dificuidade with the site since August 22, whenever I try
read the next few pages of “error” .Has two days which gave a
improved but still shows “Error” And today when I saw your new
update, and I saw my name, back story posted on 25th
and realized that my comment was not there, hey life!
But I’ll repeat my comment: I’m loving the way you
condus this story, I love this air of mystery and curiosity,
not knowing “Who is the person on the other end of the line?” I said with
you are a genius for creating this differently if they know them
via telephone.
You already posted another chapter to read but I’ll leave tomorrow for I will be
this September vacation in my work.
You can be sure I’ll post my comment.
Congratulations!
(I will take this month to take classes online English)
Note: For now goes excusing my English which is
horroso! Sincerely !!
I for one would have enjoyed the details of a Kate/Tina love scene. But I also think Annabella Sciorra is smoking hot! (I got a thing for dark swarthy women! haha! LH is the one exception, of course.)
Anyway, fun chapter. I went back and reread the first chapter because it had been so long. Now I see you have a bunch of stories and chapters posted!!! What the heck, woman! How the hell are you able to turn out stuff so quickly?
I want to finish this story first and then after I’ve caught up with some of the other writers I’ll be back. This one is fun and I’ll let you know what I think when I’ve finished up.