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Temptation 4
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"Shall we sit down?" Jodi asked.
"Sounds good to me" Tina led the way to a vacant table.
The women sat down and Bette found herself sat between Jodi and Tina. Alice was already blabbering on about some gossip that she’d found out about some apparently high profile couple that Bette couldn’t care less about, which gave her the chance to sit back and think.
She watched the women either side of her engage in conversation and tried to work out how she felt. Sure, Jodi was a good looking woman. She was confident, intelligent (not that you could tell from the type of conversations she regularly engaged in with Alice) and driven, all qualities that Bette found attractive in a woman. But then there was Tina. She was undeniably gorgeous, and even now the sight of her was still enough to cause a fluttering in Bette’s stomach. Her new found confidence was a definite turn on, and Bette loved to hear how she expressed her opinions. Unlike Jodi, Tina didn’t brag about her intelligence or her job, or anything for that matter. She was self-assured without being arrogant. And then there was the other side to Tina. The gentle, tender side. The loving side. The part of her that made you feel all warm inside, like you knew she would always take care of you. And that’s what Bette had been missing. She saw how Tina had grown as a person, and her independence just made her even more attractive. Now she embodied everything that Bette could ever want in a woman.
Bette was interrupted from her thoughts by the feeling of a hand grazing her knee. She looked over to Tina and smiled, trying to look like she was involved in the conversation. Jodi appeared immediately jealous at the exchange between the former lovers, and took Bette’s hand in hers. Bette smiled at her girlfriend weakly, unsure as to whether she’d noticed that something was up.
"So, Al, I hear your website’s hit count is on the up?" Bette tried to act interested.
"It sure is! I mean it seems like just the other day when I set it up, and now, well it’s like I can’t update it quick enough!" Alice proceeded to rave about her website, which was the effect that Bette had been aiming for.
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ho go tina!! jodi i hate jodi shes so full of herself she doesnt wanna see that bette isnt and will never be in love with her. loveeee the fact that u post 2 chapters in 1 day
wow Tina is really turning up the heat. I love the direction of your story. I must admit though I was happy when Bette and Tina kissed that night in the club, I was a little disappointed that yet again Bette will be vilified for cheating again. Tina is no saint as she also cheating on Helena (bette) and Bette (henry). Yet Bette is the bad one. anyway, I do appreciate authors on this site like yourself that can give us so many variations on the original story. sorry for the rant, that was not really directed to you. I just get passionate about the depiction of these characters on the show sometimes. So please continue soon…..hmmm will Bette go with Tina?
I’m addicted to your story! Wow, this is so good, the angst, the tension, the love. I’m waiting with bated breath to see what happens next!
I love the way you write this story! It’s brilliant! Thanks! I can’t wait for the next part!
Now how could Bette say No to that offer!!I love this story so PPS
Great story!!!talk about sexual tension… WOW!
I’d say when are you leaving. Jodi is oblivious, trust me I would notice if Bette was gone, or Tina. Love the teasing, these two are gonna kill each other.
Say yes please say yes! PPS
they are two hot, seeing it on the screen and even reading the words. PPS
Woooow !! My !My ! Please say “Yes” ! Great writing ! PPS ;-)
Oh my, Bette had better say YES. She doesn’t want Jodi, she doesn’t even want Jodi to touch her. She wants Tina. She needs to tell Jodi goodbye forever. Tina and Bette can work this out. Please let them. Thanks for posting twice today. PPS
WOW!!! Way to go Tina!!! I hope Bette tells her no, but tells her that she is going to break up with Jodi and will see her maybe later or the next day. Thanks PPVS Great Story!!!
Hahaha…I know what Bette should say! I like the way Tina is going after Bette without actually making Bette’s decision for her. It shows that Tina really wanted Bette, that she really recognized that Bette was the love of her life. Looking forward to the next update!
Nice one Tina! Say YES Bette! :) I love this story. PPS :)
Love this…the tension, the desperation, the stolen glances…wow. You certainly have me hooked!
I would say go for it.
Go Tina, Go Tina, Go Tina! I am so looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Hey BB, Say “YES!”. Bette please say “yes”. That was so full of potential: Bette and Tina just can’t keep away from either other. They just complete each other like the last piece of a jigsaw suddenly the whole is there to enjoy and find pleaseure in. It is very telling that Jodi is oblivious to all that is going on. i am sure the rush of bathroom breaks would be a dead giveaway. Just can’t wait to find out where this adventure leads to next so please post soon. Muany, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
where is the next post…we need more of this. pps
great story…this is the kind of temptation i don’t mind Bette having
Oh Tina, you go girl!