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That One Moment: Chapter 3
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"Tina! Come over here, meet the new ladies in my life!"
Shit, shit, shit. I guess I can’t leave now…damn it. Well, I mean, I could leave. What’s the worst that would happen? Could he fire me for not coming over to him? I do good work, I don’t think he would fire me just for leaving him hanging with them. I mean it’s his wife, that’s what he got himself into. He’s going to have to get used to this. But Tina caught Richard’s eyes again. They begged her to come over. Oh shit. I guess I have to go over there.
She smiled at him and made her way over.
“Hi Richard, thanks for inviting me. The wedding was great and this reception is something else.”
“No. Thank you. Really, thank you. Umm this is my wife, Lenore, her daughter Alice, and Alice’s friend Bette. Ladies, I’d like you to meet Tina Kennard.”
Lenore pulled Tina in and gave her a kiss on each cheek. “Oh, so very nice to meet you dear. Now do you work at Alphaville?”
Tina was a bit taken back by this show of affection. “Umm, yes ma’am. I’ve been there about a month.”
Lenore looked at Tina in horror. For a second, Tina panicked, unsure of what she had done wrong. Lenore inhaled a deep breath of disbelief as she brought her right hand, palm opened and fingers splayed outward, to her chest.
“Ma’am? What do I look like, an old geezer? I am not a ma’am!”
“Oh sorry…uhhh…”
“Please dear, call me Lenore.”
“Okay…Lenore.” Tina shifted her weight awkwardly. Lenore certainly was a character.
“So you work with my dear Richard here?” Lenore questioned.
“Well we’ve worked on a couple projects together, but I’m actually in development, so we don’t work directly with each other.”
“Oh good, I wouldn’t want to think that my Richard is being tempted by such a beautiful woman all day long,” Lenore said grabbing Tina’s chin and turning Tina’s face toward the light as to size up her competition.
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now thats a meeting..I really enjoyed Tina questioning her feelings, an entire conversation rambling going on in her head.. PPS
Well . . . that was a well written intro for Bette and Tina and it surely captured my interest. I look forward to more of this story.
Absolutely NO going back. I hope you get to post soon.
B&T meeting at Lenore’s wedding… will one of them steal that bouquet?… ;-)
oh please oh please Jen don’t stop, your writing is excellent and captivating. I very much hope you continue with this great story and PPS :)
Wow, the fireworks have gone off and now hopefully the beginning of a long relationship between Bette and Tina.
yes this is a tbc story!!!!! a definite 5 star!!
yes, please continue
Wow – great update. Tina is sure lost for Bette. Please post soon, can’t wait how it goes next.
Fantastic start and exchange between these two…I confess to hoping that Tina decides to stay at the reception a little longer offering the two of them a chance to get to know one another better…
Love at first sight! There’s no going back now! PPS
love it!!!!!! what a meeting!!!!
Both are goner.
Happy you have your power back. That was the most amazing way to describe a woman. Tina and Bette are so gone for each other. Thank you PPS
Why ask the rhetorical question? Great start, carry on please.
don’t stop your writing is great, look forward to more