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The 8th Mile
Tina: “oh….for lunch we’ll be having turkey and cheese club sandwiches with diet sodas” she says as she raises each item in the air to be revealed to Josh
Josh: (rubs his stomach) “yummy” he chuckles. “boy I sure can’t wait to taste it”
Tina: “if your hungry your welcomed to eat right now”
Josh: “no I could wait. What’s the rush we have all day” he smiled and tended back to the sand castle he was building.
Tina: “Josh…”
Josh: “yeah Tina?”
Tina: “I’m sorry I told you we could spend the whole day together, but actually I’m meeting up with my friends later on. We’re having this minature get together for Dana. You do remember who Dana is right?” she was curious as to whether he had been paying attention to her or her body. Even though they hadn’t slept together yet it still entitled them both to get to know one another better. That was her purpose of being with Josh
Josh: (thinking) “ahh…is she the one with the blond hair?” he asked being totally clueless of what Tina had already told him. Instead of just admitting that he didn’t know, he rathered made a fool out of himself.
Tina: “no” she wasn’t happy by his response. “no try again” she said as she placed the baby back in her car seat. She strapped her in
Josh: (thinking) “ahh…I got it. She’s the skinny one that looks like a man right?” his face flushed
Tina: (annoyed) “no…my god how could you forget after I’ve told you over and over? Hello she’s the one with cancer. I thought you were paying attention, but I guess not” she stood up and grabbed the basket and the baby’s car seat. She was upset and at the moment she was ready to go
Josh: (surprised) “whoa!…what’s the rush Tina?” he was curious about where she was going. For one the day was still young and his stomach was growling like mad. He couldn’t wait to taste those turkey clubs
Tina: (frustrated) “I’m going home Josh. I knew this was a bad idea” she said as she turned away. She was right about Josh all he wanted was to be inbetween her legs.
Josh: “Tina…would you wait a minute” he jumped to his feet and jogged after her. Tina stopped and gazed at him. “I’m sorry okay. I didn’t mean to upset you boss lady, but you tell me alot of things and I’m not robot. I’m not programmed to remember everything that you recite out of your mouth.”
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(40 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
I like it so far. Please continue.
pls continue!!
I’m sorry but Tina is not Bette’s child she can only change what is in her power to change. So I don’t see the reason for her to have this attitude with another adult or her partner; key word partner not child.
Really like the start of this. I hope you continue it soon, seems like they may be making making the turn in the right direction.
Hey, why the cliffy? Come Back!
Loving it so far but why so cruel with the cliff-hanger?? Josh is such an arsehole I was hoping he’d get washed out to sea or something! Glad you’re still writing but don’t give up on the other one. Can’t wait for more (of either story). Thanks for writing.
Bette needs to let Tina know that enough is enough, That she is tired of cleaning up from 2 yrs ago and if Tina didnt want her fine, she would start looking else where. Neither Josh nor Tina seems to think that one has a family. thanks
I kind of like this Tina, she at least is thinking of Bette, told her that she missed her and referred to her as her wife, heck she even hugged her and took in her scent. They have a chance here. Bette is setting expectations, Tina will have a chance to do the same, not at all uncommon in adult relationships (love, business, etc.). This is the take control Bette that Tina knows, she won’t belittle Tina, but she’ll be clear and resolute on making them work, if Tina wants the same. That’s fair, reasonable and loving. On with the next chapter.
I like it and I hope you continue with both stories. I hope Bette just lays it all out to Tina…
I really like your style of writing, thanks and go on with it.
Tell Josh to “Step off B**ch” and talk to Bette.
turn the damn phone off and talk…they need to talk
This is good!