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The Affair 15
"You’ve lost all the power baby…you have no control over how hard your clit gets…how wet you get…all that power lies with me"
Bette gulped. It was true and she knew it. It was her own body, but the blonde had complete control of it.
"Because if I do this" Tina sped up the circles on both the brunettes nipple and clit "it makes your hips go faster"
The brunette moaned, knowing full well that the speed at which her hips were rising off the lounger had indeed increased.
"And if I play with your pussy" breathed the blonde, her fingers working down to stroke the spot just above the brunettes entrance "I know you’ll get wetter for me"
Immediately the comination of Tina’s words and actions sent a flood of wetness through the brunette. She slid down slightly, letting her legs fall off the sides of the lounger so that her feet were on the floor.
"Mmm you’ve spread youself so wide for me babe"
The brunette was helpless. She was completely vulnerable, but yet she felt safe. Safe and unbelievably turned on. Add the danger element of the fact they were in her backyard in daylight to the way in which the blonde was playing her body like an instrument, and Bette was a woman on the edge.
"And if I do this" Tina drawled in the brunette’s ear, pressing down on her clit and rubbing firmly "I know I can make you come"
Bette tried desperately to fight it, attempting to regain an ounce of control, but her attempts were futile. The second the blondes words rang in her ear, she was gone. Her hips rose, the lower half of her body completely leaving the lounger as her face contorted in a silent scream. Tina held onto her upper body tightly with one arm while her fingers continued to rub the brunettes clit, drawing out the orgasm.
Eventually the brunettes body came back down from her high and she slumped back against Tina. The blonde wrapped her arms around Bette’s torso, her nose rubbing against her cheek.
"So was that enough proof for you?" Tina smirked.
"Huh?"
"That I can take complete and utter control of your body"
"T…I don’t think there was ever any doubt about that"
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(26 votes, average: 4.85 out of 5)
Like them talking about their emotion at shebar. And of course the bette giving up control to tina sex scene was very sensual. Can’t wait your next update! And I still curious about when and how will other folks find out?
Love the way Tina was in control and Bette relinquished to her commands. Very reminiscent of the “TURN AROUND” scence in the series. Keep’em coming! (pun intented)
I love Alpha Tina almost as much as I love Alpha Bette, and that is something to say! Thanks for posting :)
I’m sittting in front of my laptop, drooling at Tina’s total control of Bette. DAYUMN, Bealsbaby! When a request is made, you do not dissappoint. LOL! I always felt the Shebar kiss was total jealousy over the fact that Tina had sex with Brenda on the first date. Tina’s slow exploration of Bette’s body on that lounge chair was just sheer erotic bliss. Brilliant!
i love it when Tina takes control..so hot
Excellent update. Loved that they talked about what happened at the SheBar and the rest of course was hot damn! :)
Perfect update!
Great post – These characters have such an amazing chemistry, that even when they were not together, they managed to find each other – so glad they did!!!! It’s great to see Bette give control to Tina, in every aspect of their relationship…her vulnerability shows, which in turn allows Tina to show her strenght. Thanks for the update!!!
Seriously,… you are going to kill me! Soo damn HOT!! I have a work bbq in a few hours and now I am going to go there all hot and bothered. How can I make polite converstation with my boss when I have visions of T & B having hot, sweaty sex poolside?
Fuck! Another hot one! Yay! But I definitely learnt my lesson and I’ m not reading alone. Keep them coming girl. Thank you for the post.
Wow what an update for the weekend, glad they are talking about what has happened previously.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Love when Tina is at the top of her game and I know Bette does too. Alpha Tina is my girl. Good that they talked about what happened at SheBar. I would personally like to talk to JB about what happened in that scene, I’ve heard Laurel’s account of what happened. The chemistry between the two of them in person is just as hot as the chemistry between the loving characters. Thanks so much for posting.
Nice start to the weekend! Creates lots of ideas to try out on our own! Good conversation about the events leading them back together again. Hats off to you as always!
Hey BealsBaby, I have just caught up with this masterpiece followint the Christmas vacation and extreme weaterh. And Wow!!! It is superb. I am totally loving the explanation and developments of this story line compared to the show. I always felt Bette would have ended things with Jodi quicker and more decisively. The heat that you have created between them has steam up my screen several time. Just awesome. I can’t wait to read more. Many thanks frmo Your Loyal Fan.
Great update.Looking forward to the next chapter.
I’ve just caught up with your story. Wow! Great to see them so open and honest with each other. Hope you will continue to have them explore new territory in their relationship. Thanks for posting!
Loved the update its nice to see the side of bette and tina where they actually talk about their feelings and what is going on with one another. It shows they have grown and now deserve to be with one another ppvs.
Damn thats hot!