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The Aftermath. Pt 4.
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Tina drove off feeling sad and alone as she made her way up Madison Avenue.
It was not having the other child. She told herself Everything started to go wrong when the baby didnt come.
She turned up the volume on the radio to drown out all the voices in her head.
She pulled up in front of the house, not really wanting to leave the confines of the car. The car seemed to represent a sort of timeless state of being between things.
She looked up at the house, standing there just had it had done before she left for the dinner. The imposing, two storey building spread out before her, as though the last few weeks of here life had really happened and Ellie was in fact asleep upstairs in her room. As though all that time since leaving Bette had really passed.
She opened the door and leapt from the car, slamming it shut behind her and raced towards the house.
It was unusually quiet as she entered the hallway, and she wondered where Samantha was. She walked in to the kitchen, where she found her, her head laid across the table using her arms as a pillow.
Samantha lifted her head from the table on hearing Tina enter the kitchen.
Hi Tina your back. She yawned.
Yeah, Samantha, Im back early, I didnt feel too well. She lied, reaching in to her purse and paying her.
Samantha picked up her stuff and they said their goodbyes.
Tina went straight up to Ellies room. When she saw her laying there it was as if she half expected her, not to be. As if Bettes presence would have some how removed Ellie from her. Ellie lay there spread, eagled on top of the bed, covers on the floor. Her curly brown hair stuck to her forehead with sweat, her mouth slightly open. She looks just like Bette Tina thought to herself as she closed the door behind her.
Hi sweetie. Said Helena, bounding into the living room, a little inebriated from the alcohol at the dinner.
Tina grinned at her and got up to hug her.
Bette Porter asked after you. Helena said.
Oh yeah. Tina said trying to sound nonchalant.
Yeah, I told her, you had to leave because you were feeling sick.
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This is a great story!!! Very different but great. So please continue, I look forward to your next post.
Interesting turn. I’m not quite certain yet how Tina feels for Helena, or for Bette. I look forward to learning more.
Yuech Helena is so sweet I want to throw up. Who is Rachel – why is Bette with her? Is Ellie Bettes? Questions questions. This story is creasing me up – too sureal. I love it!
It sounds as if Tina and Helena were already drifting apart. Bette’s presence may be the catylst for a change. Helena seems to be at least still fond of Tina and she seems decent enough as a person. What happened – 10 year itch???
I think you should show Helena and Tina being intimate or what occurs when they attempt to be. I need to understand what happened to dull their marriage. Or, is it just dull in Tina’s mind.
And what does Ellie think about all this? Does she even know Bette, or know about her???
Thanks for posting another chapter of this intriguing story.
WOW that was great…
OMG what have you done to Helena??
Bette has a smoker as a girlfriend yuck.
Wow – did you actually give helena a heart…great story…love the different track. Can’t wait to see how it works…
Quite intriguing. I guess I’ll have to trust where you’re taking us.
damm good – thank you !!!!!!!!!!!
This is getting interesting…
Hunty I have to say it is so refreshing to have Helena portrayed as a real person rather than a one dimensional villan, so thank you. I find the story really intriguing and your dialogue is awesome.
Damn good story and can’t stop read it. Post soon, thanks!