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The Aftermath. Pt 6.
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Tina had finally managed to fall asleep around Four Thirty and didnt wake up until Ten, when she went downstairs she found the house empty. Ellie having made her own way to school. She found the bowl that Bette must have eaten from, still on the table, the spoon laying by it, with just the same pool of milk that she use to leave all those years ago.
She went up in to the guest room, the bed was ruffled and she bent down and smelt the sheets, and it all came back to her. The way Bette use to watch her as they made love, as if she was recording every moment of her desire, every frown, every gasp, every smile, every moan, as though someone was going to come along and snatch Tina away from her and tell her she wasnt hers to have in the first place.
She smoothed out the creased sheets, and thought she could make out the outline of Bette laying on them. She lay down on the bed and looked up at the ceiling.
She wished shed never met Bette.
As she lay on the bed, the bed where Bette and her girlfriend had been laying hours before, one hand played with her necklace, the one Bette had given her after a trip to New York.
It was strange just how strong the smell of Bette was. The smell of people never changes over the years, just as their voices always stay the same.
She swung her legs round on to the floor and noticed a laptop sticking out from under the bed. She leant down and retrieved it, from its hiding place.
She sat on the bed for quite sometime, thinking what she was going to do, she eventually picked up the phone, and called directory of enquiries for the galleries number.
She dialled the number and a womans voice answered. Tina said.
I have a message for Bette Porter.
I wont be a moment, shes in her office, who shall I say is calling?
A cold shiver ran down Tinas bare back.
Tell her, its Tina Kennard. She said her voice faltering.
Hello. Bette said after a brief hesitancy. Her voice was just the same. Tina thought it was curious to hear it after all this time. So you never changed your name?
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awww that’s so cute..I just luv Ellie. She is like a mini bette!
I really like this story…but, it is heartbreaking. It’s a good pain though, and that’s because of your writing. Thanks.
I really like this story. I hope Bette gets to be apart of Ellie’s life, and Tina’s.
OK you have 45 minutes to post again. LOL… It was wonderful. Thanks.
Aw, shut the fuck up TK, LOL. just cos you get to watch it, i have to wait while june. ( yes i am cryng)
man, tina you can’t avoid her forever now your daughter wants to be just like her, haha. great update!
That’s crying, i can’t see through my tears.
Great. the way Tina “ran” away from waiting for Bette, I hope you’re gonna lead them back to each other,there’s such chemistry there, and I can’t wait for your juicy details.
Just read the last few chapters and all i can say is, i agree with every comment above… you have written them all so well.
Hey I’m with you Hunty having to wait until June – sadly I haven’t been able to stay away from the series so I won’t ne surpised by the “fridge scence”. Anyho this was great but have I gotten the wrong end of the stick with that last sentence from Ellie? “But I’m never going to get married and have a child.†DUH! C’mon c’mon has Bette gone and done it with somebody else. Post at once!
Ellie is a sweetheart, and I’m sure will be the catalyst for B&T
I am all caught up now, I’m a dork I commented on the other chapters too. I love the story and I love how you’re pacing Tina’s denial and pain over Bette. Plus you’ve made Ellie and Helena into truly interesting characters as well. Thanks
Great chapter. Love Ellie.
Tina you need to stop running away and talk to Bette.
Ellie is a smart 10 year old, i hope she is the catalyst that brings B&T back together.
Thank you.
Good chapter. I really like Eleii and she just like Bette. Ok so how long Tina is going to keep avoid Bette, it’s 10 years and now it’s time to face it and talk about it. Post soon, thanks!