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The Alphas (2)
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Tina blinked her way into consciousness, everything still a blur. With a loud thud that could even be heard over the loud heavy metal music, the van made its way over another small bump in the road, and Tina’s back felt the worse of it. Trying to hold in her groan, she looked around to see Bette laying in a similar fashion behind her. As she turned, she caught the less than thrilled expression on the brunette’s face.
Still fearful for her life, Tina was cautious, and slowly shifted over toward her rival. Whispering, she inquired to the woman. "What’s happening? Who are they?"
"Not that it’s my responsibility to fill you in … but … Jenny and Jodi," Bette said, shifting more thoroughly onto her side as they both listened in on another running argument between the two felons. Turning back to Tina to take advantage of their chance at conversation, she continued. "Who else would do something this fucking ridiculous?"
Tina winced as they travelled over another bump, her side and back already in pain. "Jesus, did they beat me or something?"
"We’ve been travelling for some time, and the surface of this van is rough. I’m in pain too."
Tina rolled her eyes, slowly looking down toward the end of the van. She looked up to Bette to see that their eyes had travelled to the same thing. "Are you thinking what I’m thinking?"
Jenny and Jodi were growing angrier and angrier in the front.
"Turn it down," Jodi groaned, reaching for the dials as she took one hand from the wheel.
Slapping the hand away, Jenny shot an angry look her way and turned it up even louder. "You can’t even hear! What are you complaining about?!"
"I can feel the whole van vibrating!" Jodi explained, tapping her hands on the car door and shaking her head in disapproval. "We need to be ALERT."
No sooner had she spoken the words, did the back doors come flying out. Jodi looked with worry over to Jenny who whipped her head back to see that Bette and Tina were still tied, but at the edge of the van, obviously discussing their best attempt at escaping.
Jenny immediately put her hand on Jodi’s knee, pushing down to force her to accelerate.
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keep writing, would you?
Always interested to see a post from you – even a short one! I’m very curious where you are going with this story, so hope you have the time to post soon. Thanks for writing.
Jenny was always strange but this is truly strange. Bette and Tina enemies. Very definitely interested in this one, different as it is. Please post more soon.
Hey GrindRight, That was so intense and scary. Amazing that even in this predicament, Bette is trying to protect her sworn emeny. I think the enemy routine would be best left for work as Bette is deifinitely carrying a big torch for Tina.The horror of Jodi and Jenny’s antics haven’t hit home yet.I am sure they will be revealed as this awesome adventure continues.It is different and yet so enticing.More please.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
You certainly know how to conquer each and every genre of writing out there. This suspense/thriller you are weaving is no different. I always enjoy stories from you GR. Thanks so much!
great start cant wait for me b and t action in the office. having helena as a boss is comical
This is a strange one, but interesting as well.
Excellent update. Great story. Thank you.
Seriously intrigued! :o) looking forward to seeing it all develop, thanks :o)
I never did like that Jenny. What a sick fuck. Goodness sakes, Grinder, what are you up to?
This is good and crazy!