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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 25
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Previously on The Beginning Of A Friendship :
Tina:
Could you help me up?
I didnt say anything. Just wrapped my arms around her, just below her arms, and I moaned as I pulled her up and her breasts were pressed against mine.
I blushed, hoping she would blame my moan and red face on the effort of lifting her.
Did you hurt your leg when you…?
I whispered, still holding her close so she could find her balance…
*Right, like that was the only reason why I held her…*
Yeah… My knee… Just a bit though… Dont worry
Our faces were just inches apart… My heart pounded… My breathing was so fast it made me dizzy… Her smell made me dizzy… My knees buckled and we were even closer when…
Are you girls coming?
Steve asked, his head put through the small space of the door hed just opened.
We were still extremely close and I was startled (I guess we both were because Bette stepped back, what apparently caused a lot of pain judging to her facial expression).
But Steve smiled at me reassuringly and waited with opening the door entirely untill we were on-friendly-distance.
Dinner is served
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Chapter 25
Bette:
Being surrounded by family was not something I was used to, and hearing the reassuring buzz of everybody talking and catching up was touching. It made me smile… Rosy sat next to me, she had insisted that I would help her with the diner and I was happy to. Cutting her meat in tiny pieces I glaced over at Tina who was sitting opposite of me. My knee felt much less hurtfull when I stretched it. But when I did just that, my ankle brushed against her leg, causing sparks of electricity to wave through my body.
Are you cold, Bette?
Steve looked at me with concern in his eyes… Everyone at the table tried to catch my eye… It was so sweet, the way they were all treating me like I was the most important person on the table.
Im fine Steve… Thank you
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yay 1st again, i hope Bette doesn’t take it back when they speak next, great chapter once again, i can not wait for another
omg finally ive been waiting for a post to atleast one of your 2 stories i like them boh that much so no pref as to which one it is pls domt keep us waiting to long for the nexdt post either story preferably both btw great again keep posting :)
Oh, bummer now I have to wait to see how Tina reacted to the I Love You from Bette. I like Steve and I hope that him and Bette could become friends. I also hope that Tina’s family does not give her grief over Bette. I believe that Alex may have already figured it out that Tina may like Ms. Bette. Hopefully, we will see a lot more of Rosy also. As far as the straight and taken mantra, I guess that I thought I was safe (parents and religion) but in the long run I wasn’t, and I keep getting my heart broken. Now, I just hang out reading FF and watching General Hospital (daytime soap opera). Oh and going to work. Thanks for the kind words and I like how you have developed the characters of your story.
So I waited what? Two days for a chapter and YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!! *gives you several playful thumb jabs in the side* So I was right about Steve huh? That makes about 3 times in fanfiction where my gaydar has been spot on. Now why doesn’t it work like that in real life?! And why can’t it work better for me for women!!!!? lol Please don’t leave us with this cliffhanger for too long. By the way Bette’s mini-monologue was spot on. I hope Tina’s mom has gotten over Bette being gay because she was so nice. Everyone besides her, Steve, and Rosy can fuck a duck.
i was right about steve… and i’m hope they talk on the way home… i’m sure they will… love this story…please continue soon… and my son is NOT going to be a surgeon… hes more into the natural way of healing… doesn’t like all of the meds on the market… take one med… and it could do something to other parts of the body… what are you studing…
another great, brilliant chapter from you…like all the others, i am hooked and addicted to this story..,Can´t hardly wait for the next one…please post soon…
Please post soon!
thank you.. yet another great chapter.just adoring this story and the pace is superb. glad that my “prediction” about steve was correct(ha ha). looking forward to more.x.x.
Hey there, medical student, try to heal me, you’re breaking my heart with this story. Eigenlijk vind ik het ook erg leuk om te weten dat jij nederlandstalig bent en je toch zo ontzettend goed kan uitdrukken in het engels. Ik vind je echt één van de betere auteurs en dat zeg ik niet om jou te paaien, ik meen dat echt. Ik hoop echt dat je nog lang verhalen blijft posten. Misschien tot morgen?.
Ahhhhhh…I like how we get to see both pov’s as they happen…pls another chapter…
Oh man! *Goodbye T… I do love you…* Now you are killing me again! Sobs… and you making me like a crybaby. You are so bad! But I love it. lol.. Keep it coming please.
Gosh, I teared up too. The romantic tension is perfect.
oh my goodness, it was so intense…i didn’t expect tina’s family to be su judgemental but i think they will come around, they have to deal with steve and soon with tina…but those two have to talk about their feelings, it’s killing them both
WoW!!! I so love this story. What will Tina do now? Thank you Post when you can soon I hope
This was absolutely fabulous!!! Loved every word of it! Thanks!
WHAT NO YYYYYYY!!!!!!! OH YYYYYYY!!!!!! slow burn eh, hmmm how slow of a burn do u intend????? Let T go check on her and maybe even take her to the doctors, and get a kiss in some way or another…huh, huh????
yeah, agree with van. I think Tina so go and see Bette tonight. :)hurry up post soon ok, i can’t wait..
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr tina cowboy the fuck up and go get bette!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am mad now lol
I just caught up with your brilliant story. This is a great B&T beginning. I just love it. Please post another chapter soon.
Ok….this slow burn is killing me. Tina needs to go to Bette’s house tonight, take care of Bette’s knee and confess her love for Bette. Great story. Please post soon!!!
Damn you make me cry my friend and this is sad. Hope Tina will come to Bette and take care of her. OK post soon please, thanks!
hi! this was a hard-hitting dinner, i didn’t think tha they was that way but They will have that use to cause Tina has a little surprise for they too. I like the ” i love you” it was shocking!in my country first we have to study for 6 years to graduate in general practitioner (i don’t know how you called in your country) and in the next september i will start to study to graduate me in radiology. well i hope you understand me. take care
love is in the air..and no one can stop it…!!! Please post very, very soon…I want to know what happens next.
thanks for the update i hope tina tell eric to go how and run to bette post soon
I feel like riding a roller coaster when reading ur story… my heart swell and ache for Bette. This is just so hard when both of 2 ppl are in the period of ‘guessing’, it’ll definitely make me insane to have hope at one time then being smashed to the reality ground at the very next second. Hopefully B&T could make it out before they have to guess each other for the rest of their life… *sigh* And since Tina’s mom can read her so well, I guess she’d known and just staying in the world of denial…
you really make us feel that we are in the room with these people experiencing everything they are….that is quite a gift..can’t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Steve is so sweet,Boy is Tina family messed up.Her sister should be horse whipped. Rosey Steve and Tina seems to be the only normal ones is that family.At least they know how to love. Thanks