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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 36
Mike…
First off all… I didn’t have to make you an idiot because clearly, you allready are…
Second off all… It’s because of guys like you that there are women like me…
I saw his jaw almost hit the floor as I softly kissed Bette’s lips before I pulled her away from him and to her car… She too looked stunned as I pushed her into the car and I felt a smile appear on my face
What?
I heard myself ask innocently before I burst out in laughter and tenderly stroked her forearm…
Don’t worry Bette… I am not attracted to you because of anything a guy could do… I just… it jus sort of came out of my mouth like that… Did you see his face?
I laughed again but she looked still ashtonished… We were now in the car and before buckling up I gently cupped her face in my hands
Hey…
I looked straight into her eyes… into her soul
I’m totally in love with you… With YOU, Bette… Now if that makes me a “Fucking dyke” I don’t care… I don’t… I love you…
The fear in her eyes faded and instead came the sparkles I was so fond off…
Really?
Really Bette…
And I reinforced my words with a soft and tender deep kiss…
Bette:
Mike…
First off all… I didn’t have to make you an idiot because clearly, you allready are…
Second off all… It’s because of guys like you that there are women like me…
*Wow*
My initial reaction was a smile but then what she said hit me… Was she into me because of what Eric had done to her? Was this just a I-am-sick-of-guys-so-lets-try-a-woman-now kind of a deal…
I felt… Ful of doubt… I didn’t want to believe that but how many stories hadn’t I heard about straight woman going back to man as soon as they found out that being with a woman isn’t as easy as they think it is…
She kissed me right there… In front of him which reassured my fear… Was she just doing this to teach the guy a lesson?
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waooo you make my day better! thanks! if this is your short chatper i can’t imagine the long one! this was a lovely chapter congrats every day is better! was incredible! thanks thanks :D
damn man… where’ve ya been?outstanding as always and worth the wait.x.x.
well the porter charm nevah fails now ..am glad you like JLBT and i loved the way you turned it to jennifer lauren betty tina ….yet another magnificient chapter .bows
wow, now I can feel all that tension building again….and something tells me it’s going to be another 10 or 20 chps til we have any jumping into bed…I love you stringing me along…love it….:):)
Yay! You have made my day. It’s beautiful written and I’m totally in love with your BnT, they are so right for each other. man… more please! can’t wait.
Brilliant, just fucking brilliant!!!! A couople of chapters back you said to me, that you hoped you could live up to my expectations and OMG girl you do so much more than that. This is amazing, fantastic, beautiful, sweet and sooooo wonderful. My face is sore after reading your posts, because I’m smiling so much :o)) Thank you…
The couch scene has become my favorite love scene among all the stories I’ve read so far, even if I don’t like the description for the next chapter (what I don’t think so) or if they don’t finish what they started it still will be my favorite scene.
Once again a great chapter :)Funny as hell and incredable beautiful at the same time! Can hardly wait for more just ;)
So sweet… i like the way things are going… thanks for another amazing post!!!! See you tomorrow…
Love it that you take so much time to find the right words to describe these girls’ utter bliss. They sure are taking their tiime and that is a good thing. Thanks for your sweet story – but I am still biting my nails in anticipation of the upcoming drama ;). don’t disappoint me!
Amazing…hier wordt ik heel stil van. Doet me aan mijn eerste keer met een vrouw denken. Bedankt.
What´s not to forgive? You write the most brilliant amazing chapters… Keep them coming… :)
Your slowly take me off life supportwhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo man if this is short the 2 page post are mini’s loner just cause u miss me saying it
So they have finally come together as a couple (well almost). They are so cute together and I can not wait till they become one. I love what Tina said both times to Mike. To bad it made Bette feel like she was getting used. I am so happy that Tina told her that, that was not the case. I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall when they got home. Can’t wait for Rosy to see her favorite aunt and hero. Loved the chapter and am trying desperately to hold my breath for the next post. Am I turning red and blue yet?
sweet and tender and sexy and hot…wonderful…keep going
Porter-charm ? God, yes, we all know how powerful it is ! By the way, the JustloveB+T’s charm works allright too ! (*wink & smile*) — Your story is a pure gem, you know. A so engaging mix of delicacy, sensitivity and acurate details… A touching journey through tenderness, love and passion – all built on the deep and essential basis of a beautiful friendship. — I simply love your story and loved it from the very first chapter… Yes, it kept and keeps me under a powerful but sweet charm and I truly have no desire to escape ! Thank you for that, from the bottom of my incurably romantic heart. — P.S.: “Could someone be arrested for driving while in love?” Aww… lovely ! ^_^
I came home from a long miserable day at work and logged on to the site. As soon as I saw that you had posted I started smiling and after reading this wonderful loving chapter all the stress of the day has just left me. Thank you! I love this story and the way you tell it is perfect.
The Porter Charm is the magic word. She loves Tina so she will go slow. That was awesome. thanks
Alright this is what we want to see and love it, the Porter Charm is awesome and sweet, they are hot and cute together. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Wow! Have just discovered your story and read all your chapters in a row. I love it! It is so wonderfully written. I particularly appreciate the slow pace and the tenderness with which you write. You are obviously as much of a hopeless romantic as I am! It is just beautiful. Oh and I love Rosy too – she’s wonderful, I miss working with kids like her. Well I can’t wait till you update this one – the sweet torture of waiting for them to realise the other one’s true feelings is over and I am going to relish reading their journey towards further intimacy. Just wonderful. Thank you so very much for writing and giving me hours of bliss.
hey just im good thnxs yes i liked this chapter catch you in the chat room
Fantastic. Amazingly written to the best I acknowledged. Uh-hum. Please continue. I love this story. It warms my heart when I read it. I love smiling and you make me smile. Please post another one today, if not, then tomorrow. I’ll be waiting for sure. Bye now…P.S. You’ve made my day.:)
W-O-W… I’m predicting that u’ll be burning down a lot of PCs when u write NC-17… Man, this is just.. what? PG-13? And it feels like …. MORE?!? hahaha… Oh no… this kind of loving and make out scenes will never ever be too much ;) ‘I just loved every little piece of her…’ and I just loveeeee every little piece of your… story ;) haha.. how can u manage to write this well? Imagination? Real life experience? care to share? Gosh.. how come they always eat my comment to u… this is my third attempt.. AGAIN!!
WoW!!!! Just fantastic keep it going you are doing great. You made my day with you post today. Thank You
*Sigh*– i love happy and in-love bette and tina! i like the playful element that you have in this story, too. I think that if IC would add a more playful aspect to B/T it would do a lot for their new upcoming soon to be reunited relationship!! great chapter! can’t wait for the next!
I know what I like and this I like.Keep it coming Hun, and I’ll keep mine coming =)
porter charm… it happens all of the time… and i like it that bette is going to go slow with her… love your story… please continue
What a delightful tale. You capture the sweetness and delight of true love. I love it.
Good thing I decided to check the site before bed; what a happy way to go to bed, with B&T on the mind. As always, you offer such wonderful insight into the minds of these two women, and, as always, present their love and passion with such aplomb. Thanks for the great read, as always!
Of course the kiss from the last chapter was fine! Actually it was more than fine. Stupid Muck. God what a fuckhead. You actually scared me a bit because I thought they would hop into bed at end of the chapter. I was like “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” I know some people would probably say, “Geez, Lament! It’s not like they’re only 13 years old!” I guess I just don’t liken the initial “I love you” to a down payment on a car. With a down payment you can get the car that day after papers and crap are signed, but “I love you” doesn’t have to lead right to sex. I knew Bette would want to go slow (as if they weren’t already slower than snails…no motility much? =p), but Tina could’ve been all, “Hell yeah let’s go for a big hot juicy messy FUCK!” even though she’s pretty clueless in that department. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. =D