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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 42
Come on lovebirds
She said, laughing
I think you owe us all a story… Don’t forget the details…
The smile on her face had turnid into a Piezecki-grin and I couldn’t help but laugh with her as we followed her into the livingroom
Tina:
*Completely, totally and fully in love…*
Her words just kept resounding in my head… The look in her eyes, her beautifull looking-right-through-me eyes… The feelings that were tumbling to my body were still aloverwhelming, as if they were growing by the nanosecond… The muscles in my lower abdomen hurted from the tension that was building up… I felt dizzy and shaky, but at the same time I felt more safe that I had ever felt with my hand covered by hers as she lead me back to the livingroom…
She never let go of my hand and she must have felt the quivering of it because she looked at me shyly and brought her lips to my ear
Are you ok T?
The feeling of her breath against my earlobe was pure torture and flames of desire rushed through me as I smiled and reassured her with a nod…
*My god Bette Porter… What you do to me…*
So…
Shanes husky voice was raised, as was her beer and she smiled at us
Here’s to you two then…
She winked and took a swig and we all followed her example… The relieve that had made my heart jump up in the kitchen about Alice acceptence now really began to sink in and I sighed deeply
Alice coughed as some beer went down her windpipe before she managed to utter:
Ok… Story… Details… Now…
Dana hit the blond on the back in order to make her feel better and I couldn’t help but notice her hand stayed and carresed her somewhat longer than neccesary
I smiled shyly at Alice, not sure what she wanted to know
Come on TK, don’t look at me like that… Tell me how Porter convinced you to change teams eh?
I smiled at the thought of our first meeting, about how I had thourght I had the flu… About the dizzyness and the socalled fever… and I laughed out loud…
I think you could say she convinced me just by existing Alice…
I said as I wrapped my arm around the marvelous woman next to me… and pulled her closer, feeling the way we fitted together… And as I saw the dissapointment in Alices eyes I laughed again and looked into those chaocolatebrown ones that were holding the soul I craved for… And I saw curiosity even in those, I knew I had to tell my story… The story on how my life truely began…
———————————– TBC ——————————————-
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(26 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
As always another great chapter!
Hey yourself! I’m just enjoying my Memorial Day, catching up on all my favorite fanfics. This one is at the top. Methinks Alice is jealous of Tina. Can’t wait for the next chappy!
That was amazing I had goosebumps reading it
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, jumping around right now in my room!!! Can’t help it, so sweet! That and the dextro energy and red bulls :D Yeah.. my story. Kind of out of it, but I will try to write a chapter thursday night before I have to go to the airport. I have to be there like 2:30 a.m. or something, so it’s not like I’ll be getting any sleep. Might be too sleep deprived, though, so don’t hate me if I don’t manage to get it done :PAnd now I want a chappy of like a fairytale! Me, demanding and ungrateful? Whatever gave you that idea? ;-)
Ohhh love the chapter – I belive it is just marvelous and soooooo beautiful the emotion you find between these fine ladies. Can’t wait for next post. Just brilliant and do continue. Post soon
Love the story. Can hardly wait to see what she says about how her life truly began. Please post soon. Bettesexual, I still love that phrase, really says alot. Thanks.
hey just your rite i am great and i loved this chapter to lets hope for some b/t loving in the next one post soon mate
Incredibly insecure with this chapter? Just, don’t you worry about that, it’s a brilliant chapter and you still rock mate! LOL… thanks and please continue as soon as you can :)
As always…you know when to post…I really needed this dose of “the gang”. Did some small (not mirror…bad english) operation on my knee today..so now am linking around, but the knee should be fine in a couple of weeks…sooo…I will be waiting for more post :)
waooo! i was spechless when Tina told Alice how she feel about Bette! and is good that Bette listened that. Alice is such a good friend and she wants to protect Bette. I thin you had made a new term in this web: Bette-sexual! I hope after read all this comments you have less doubts and insecurities about your writing, cause this is amazing, i love it. take care
So damn cute… :P
I’ve just catched up with your story and I must say thankz this is great. Such a HUGE tease but great :D. Post soon please.
Can’t think of a better way to end my day; reading your story is a must for me. Loved the chapter and I can’t wait for the next.
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute and sweet, love them. OK post soon please, thanks!
Hey justlove-I don’t know why you think this chapter isn’t good b/c i just loved it. If I’m Bette I don’t think i’m forgiving Alice as easily as she did for interigatig Tina the way she did. I guess Bette knows it came frm a good place so she is cutting her some slack. Pls. post soon. Ande Bettesexual-that’s classic! Can i be a bettesexual too…LOL!
I loved this. Alice has a thing for Bette,but Alice had her true love right next to her. thanks
Great update! I love the way Tina answered Alice. “Bette-sexuality” rules. I can’t wait for the next post. Please update soon!
so f***ing cute ;)
They’re just too cute together and thats why we love them. Can’t wait for Tina’s story, about how she fell and became Bettesexual. Can we join?
Start the Bette-sexual thread then pal! Ok, so Tina finally told the gang, too bad that there are no dirty details yet so I hope they can finish what they started like one month ago and you haven’t let them!!! LOL Loved the sheepish Bette, so cute!
Thank god you posted, I was about to book a detox….ahhhhhhhh
Love the chapter B+T..Damn I wish I could be Bette-sexual…Oh well Lezbiman better then nothing =)BTW start the Bette-sexual Fan Club =)
Thanks for the chappy :DYou’re doing a great job!! this story is so well written… and we all we’re waiting for the dirty details LOL… I don’t know how we can be in chp42 already!!!!PD: Where I can apply to be member of the Bette-sexual Fan Club??? ;)
Cool! I beat Lamentamini on this comment ;), It´s always a pleasure to my eyes to read your history. You´re doing a great job :). I haven´t been able to post mine because I´ve been very sick, but I´m planning to make it up for you this weekend. See yoo soon :).
bettesexual is the new word i am in love with….jlbt i love this new post tender loving warm i lourve it when they get all mushy like this and tht was so fuckin amazing when tina took a stand abt her feelings for her woman…:) wooot wooot you made my day
This won’t be quite on par with my other comments as it’s very late, I’m very tired, and very in need of going out job hunting tomorrow, but I just wanted to drop by and let you know I loved it, as always, and, also as always, can’t wait for more!
5 pages whoooooooooooooo you have not tried to kill me lately lol thank u i will say it just cause u wnt me too longer
wow… if only things in real life go as smooth as this *sigh… thinking…* :(
Hey so glad to see you post again, I was really suffering from serious withdrawal symptoms. Please don’t let us wait that long again :o)) You know I was glad the gang showed up, but now I want them to leave again, so we…hmmm B&T can be alone!!! LOL. Will they make love this night??? I’m torn.
Babysis only beat me to comment because I was asleep when this was posted. =p Alice probably could’ve handled that better but we know she had the best of intentions.
I do believe that Alice is jealous of Tina. We already know that Alice has a thing for Bette. She needs to tune into what is happening right next to her, DANA. You did it again and brought forth another new word to us, aloverwhelming. Now that is cute. Tina has a word Bette-sexual and now Bette (I think she is the one that thought it) has a word, aloverwhelming. Talk about jello legs for Bette and Tina I have jello body just reading this story. Just to hot to handle. It is like placing my hand on a hot stove and leaving it there.
Just, This chapter was just so warm and loving . Bette-sexual I love it. Tina telling Alice how she really felt was great. You write this story very well. Please Post Soon Thank you
Another great chapter just!! :) And im so glad I got my fanfic fix for the day…lol… can’t wait for more as usual! :)
B+T you’re just amazing, you’re a painter and you’re paintbrush is touching my very soul. Ik vraag mij af hoe jij dat doet, als Bette Tina benaderd en haar armen rond haar taille brengt, girl i can feel that myself. Dit is gewoon te goed om op een forum te worden gepost, jij moet publiceren.