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The Beginning of a Friendship, chpt 50
*You’ve really fallen deep, Porter*
She smiled at me, that wonderfull smile that cme right from her soul when she reached out… The shiver down my spine seemed to reach the depths of me and I once again noticed how I trembled when the knuckles and back of her fingers grazed the skin of my cheek, down to my chin and up again. She looked into my eyes and I couldn’t help but gasp as she minimized the space between us, cupping my face in her hands, pulling me closer before softly pressing her lips on mine…
Tina:
I blinked as I saw her stand there, her eyes fixated on me as if I was a miracle. The glittering of her eyes was full of love and the felt the warm blanket of my feelings for her wrap itself around me tighter. My whole body tingled as I slowly came closer, approaching her with a caution caused by my tight muscles… The light tension that had came over them yet again when my eyes had caught a glimpse of her, made me tremble. And I felt the muscles in my abdomen contract when a wave of desire washed over me.
Never had someone had such a strong effect on me and I smiled as I saw her quiver also. I remember when I was a child and something great happened to me, I pinched myself to be sure I wasn’t dreaming… Somehow that was how it felt, as if all of this was a dream, and yet I had never felt more real. The beating of my heart was strong and has a force that surprised me… I couldn’t believe how much of my live had chanced in just a weekend, a weekend that wasn’t even over yet… At once, I had totouch her, the desire too strong to suppress and bringing my hand to her face I felt a jolt of electricity rush through me as the back of my hand met her cheekbone… Her softness overwhelmed me every time, and I explored it, letting my fingers slide down and up again slowly…
Another strong urge, this time to kiss, and at once the realisation that there was no reason not to go along with that marvelous feeling. Pulling her closer I let my lips meet hers, and I wasn’t sure whether the shiver I felt was hers or mine.
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1st?
YAYYYYYYYYY ^_^
OMG TOO SHORT! j/k lol Ahhh good old Sonya. I hope she remembers to clean the diaphragm. LMFAO (inside joke, everyone).
thank you thank you thank you…pls post soon, I need this story!!!
It’s not a slow chapter but it’s taking ages for them to finally DO it. So Sonya knew Bette all this long huh? lol she’ll prepare a nice dinner but doesn’t need to think of dessert right?
Yes! a chapter for “the beginnig” i miss it too! B&T are more than ready to be together, they just need a push to make them get there. Please don’t let us waiting so long for the next one this story is amazing!
Is GREAT to have you back!!!!!! Excellent job, as always.
Thank so much my friend for posting today. Even tho its raining you have made the day a lot brighter That was so beautiful thanks
I am with lamentamini YYYYYAAAAAYYYY and also to short. please promise that this is just the first of many that you have stored up for us to read. and if not i will just think that and you had better get to writing asap. Thanks for the post it was great as they always are. now off you go and get to work on what is coming next.
Ahhhhhh…welcome back…was missing this story…lol@Lamentamini (from season 1) I can’t wait til Bette takes Tina to her (their soon 2 be) house. Keep posting.
glad to see this story. Please post for us again soon.
got your joke lament LOL i love this chapter, my favorite part of this whole story is the connection between their thoughts and actions, when one stops another picks up and we know what they both think at the same timre, it’s wonderful…i hope it’s not confusing what i said, if it is, it just means simply that i loved this chapter and i love this story
I still adore how you repeat events in this story. Great technique. Anyway, YAYNESS, as usual.
Lamentamini, I remember the diaphragm scene. That was a hoot. JLB+T, I am so glad that you are back. Bette’s knees giving way to her passion and then hitting the floor would have been fun to really see it happen. Then the laughing and love that they have for one another. Heck, they have not even slept together yet. Just think what is going to happen when they do get together.
Helloooo :) Haven’t been commenting but Im still here reading!! Beautiful chapter! I seriously can’t wait for more… TC
Wow beautiful and love the feeling and love they have for each other. Can’t wait to see Tina react when Bette surprise her. OK post soon please, thanks!
Thanks fot the beautiful chapter Mom. *BIG HUG* LMFAO @ “Lament… Ahhh good old Sonya. I hope she remembers to clean the diaphragm..
Oh God, Captain… How is it possible that every single chapter of BOF leaves me floating on air, and all fuzzy inside… It wasn’t such a bad cliffy by the way. In fact it was a perfect chapter with a good place to stop… Scratch that, any stopping this story is bad, bad, bad!!! Let’s just say that it didn’t leave me as frustrated and helpless and miserable and angsty as some chapters have in the past… ;) No seriously, it was great as usual, and again, I so love your style, dear J! These two have it SO bad for each other, it’s amazing to read. It’s a fabulous experience actually as all the emotions you describe make you feel like you’re in love as well. Thanks for taking us on this emotional journey!
And my heart truly belongs to your stories~~~ gosh… I can’t believe that it’s Chapter 50 already, it feels like chapter 8 only :P Ok, continue with the story with Tina’s towel ‘accidentally’ drop… I can’t believe her towel still can hold up that long ;P muahahaha… and Bette sitting on the floor looking up? ehem… ok i better stop :P
Girl, again you leave me here in awe, you’re such a talented writer and storyteller, can’t thank you enough for the pleasure you give me reading your stories.
Ohh how sweet :O) and way to short. Powerfull stuff you bring on the board. Post soon
Oh boy you’re taken this slow LOL….but its okay with me coz I love it :o)) A little more kommunication between them would be great, it was almost only thoughts in this chapter. Post soon, I’m waiting :o))