Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Black Flag Ch.13
Login to add story to favorites
(25 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Shane swallowed hard, she could risk it. Risk everything, even for just one night of passion with Carmen. Or she could keep her pants on and live to have the company of another hundred or so girls before her last card is played… Hell, she was a pirate, she would take her chances when she had them.
She took Carmen’s hand from her stomach and pulled the girl closer to her body pressing a tantalizing kiss to her lips, She threaded her fingers into Carmen’s wild mane and deepened the kiss that was soon interrupted by Carmen’s laughter. “I asked if you wanted to… I didn’t give you permission..”
Shane’s mouth hung open for a second trying to let the information process. Her shoulders slumped down and her head rolled back and into the sand again, while her grip on the Latina loosened. She shook her head and bit her lip in annoyance. “That’s not fair.”
“Who ever said life was fair?” Carmen asked and chuckled laying her head on Shane’s shoulder and draping one arm across to Shane’s other shoulder. Shane let out a small huff of air glancing at the girl on her shoulder before her face softened again and her frown was replaced by a genuine smile.
Carmen’s eyes were half lidded and her hair was wild and flowing over the girls bare tanned arms. Shane couldn’t deny that she was still very much tempted to take her but she was content to just lie in the sand with Carmen on her shoulder.
Carmen played with the material on Shane’s shoulder as she let her eyes close. It’s not that she didn’t want to let herself fall into the throws of passion… but having believed her whole life that she could never love a man, she had never really entertained the thought of sleeping with one. Even one as charming and gorgeous as Shane.
“Do you not want to fuck me?” Shane asked, eyes closed but with the hint of a smirk on her mouth. She could feel Carmen smile against her shoulder.
“I don’t know…” Carmen admitted truthfully.
“Would you let anyone else aboard the flagship have his way with you?” Shane asked a bit of curiosity lingering in her voice.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
question, do you remember a forum that used to have a LOT of shane and carmen stories like a lot, that also used to have photos and news about them (as in the actress) cause i can’t seem to find it anywhere. Oh and the stories is going great, awesome actually keep it up
Yup, Rukato. I know I’m not techinically supposed to post links to other site and blah blah blah but to be honest, that’s just stupid. Spread the L Word love! http://z15.invisionfree.com/ShaneCarmen/index.php?
Sorry for not commenting on your last post. I wanted to wait until there was more then 1 new post to read it so I would have more to read. I loved your last chapter and I love this one to. Because Shane said that they would probably leave the next night all I can think off is the two of them under the waterfall together. All day to explore each others body’s surrounded by their own paradise until nightfall. I just want longer posts and more of them. I really love this story so far PPS.
you fing rock! thank you some much i was really looking for that forum! The story is going great and i agree with the person on top of me i would love longer chapters and some action ^-^. thx alot alot alot
What Sciwiz55 said basically :DI find the suspense far too much if I don’t wait until there are at least eight pages, and judging by the last two posts it was a smart decision.Loving this work! It’s a long while since I have visited a fanfiction and known I will go back and read the same part over and over someday… ^-^
Absolutely delightful read! Grrrrreat story.