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    The Burden of Control – Chaper 8

    Kit: I assume that you ladies are here to eat.

     

    Tina: You know what they say about assuming Kit

     

    Kit: Let me rephrase then. 
    You two are having dinner on me. What can I get you?

     

    Tina (smiles) Ill have a Caesar salad with chicken. And an
    unsweetened iced tea.

     

    Bette: (frowns) How you can drink iced tea without sugar is
    beyond meIll have the Caesar salad as wellhold the chicken though.

     

    Kit (sternly) Youll take the chicken.

     

    Bette: II dont want the chicken.

     

    Kit: Baby girl, I can practically see through you. You need
    some protein. Youre taking the chicken.

     

    Bette: Kit

     

    Kit: Bette, dont be difficult. If I have to, Ill make Lara
    chop the chicken into tiny pieces and mix it into the dressing so youll never
    be able to tell the difference. Dont make us go to all that trouble because
    you want to be an obstinate fool.

     

    Bette: (exasperated) Fine. And Ill take a sweetened iced
    tea. Very sweetened.

     

    Kit: Youre impossible sometimes.

     

    Tina: Just sometimes?

     

    Kit (points at Tina) Dont encourage her.

     

    Kit collects their menus and leaves, heading toward the
    kitchen.

     

    Tina: (quietly) I miss Kit.

     

    Bette: (seriously) Shes here, Tina. II dont mind if you
    want to talk with her or see her. I mean she thinks of you as a sister.

     

    Tina: Thanks (pauses) What she said about the proteinyoure
    okay, arent you?

     

    Bette was torn. She knew that she had her appointment with
    Dr. Harris coming up, but she wasnt about to worry Tina prematurely.

     

    Bette: Yeah, shes just being a mother hen.

     

    Tina: Youreum eating right?

     

    Bette: I make the best TV dinners in town.

     

    Tina: Bette, Im serious. 
    You get way too stressed out over work. You need to eat to keep up with
    everything.

     

    Bette: I find this somewhat amusing.

     

    Tina: What?

     

    Bette: This. (gestures between them and smiles) I mean the
    last time we were here together you flipped a table at me.

     

    Tina: I was very angry them.

     

    Bette: (softly) And now?

     

    Tina: And nowIm still angry.  But Ive had time to think about the past
    year and the choices that weve made. The choices BOTH of us have made. I was
    too hurt and upset to talk to you then. II want to try now. I need to know
    some things.

     

    Bette: Anything. You can ask me anything.

     

    Tina: Dont be too quick to say that. You dont know what I
    want to ask you.

     

    Bette: I didnt think this would be easy. Not by a long
    shot. The fact that youre here today, sitting across from me, is more than I
    deserve. II dont want there to be any more secrets between us. No matter how
    hard they are to sayor to hear.

     

    Tina: Im glad you feel that way. (pauses) Actually, there
    is something I need to talk with you about. What I had started to say on the
    phone. (sighs) This isnteasyfor me. I wanted to tell you at the very
    beginning, but I was afraid.

     

    Bette: Afraid? Tina what was so bad that you were scared to
    tell me?

     

    Tina: Bette, I

     

    Tina and Bette are once again interrupted, this time by Lara
    who was carrying out their order.

     

    Lara: I have two Caesar salads. (she places the bowls in
    front of them, then a second smaller bowl in front of Bette.

     

    Lara: Kit said to put your chicken in a separate dish.
    Sheuhtold me to tell you that it better be empty by the time you leave.

     

    Bette rolls her eyes and Tina laughs. Lara brings them their
    drinks and then leaves.

     

    Bette: I missed that.

     

    Tina: Missed what?

     

    Bette: You. Laughing.

     

    Tina: Bette

     

    Bette: Im sorry. I shouldnt have said that. Uhlets eat
    and then we can continue where we left off before we were interrupted.

     

    They eat their meals in silence. Over the course of a few
    minutes an uncomfortable tension once again settles between them. Unable to
    stand the silence any longer, Bette looks up and addresses Tina.

     

    Bette: Tina?

     

    Tina: Hmm

     

    Bette: I have a very important favor to ask you.

     

    Tina: A favor?

     

    Bette: Yes. I uhI need you to do something for me.

     

    Tina: (concerned) What do you need me to do, Bette?

     

    Bette: (whispers) I need you to eat some of this chicken.
    (she pushes her bowl closer to Tina.

     

    Tina smiles in response.

     

     

    TBC

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    Comments

    1. OMG you gave me hope and then they both chickened out both have things that need to be said get it out already!!!! secrects only hurt those your trying to protect!!!!

    2. Your dialogue is very realistic and easy to read.
      I was squirming in my seat, waiting for Tina to drop the news on Bette. They both have a vital secret to share and they’re both withholding, so much in character and part of their pattern and problem.
      Thanks!

    3. yeah!!! I love drama, so the more you have the better your story will go over with me, LOL
      have a great b-day and an awesome trip.
      can’t wait for more of this dinner, and to see if tina does tell.

    4. OMG! yes their are chicken out to talk about their problems I agree with BTF I can’t wait read more of your Story WHOA! your have a quality of writing and the way you write the way I’m HOOKED LOL! Thank you for posted again Please post soon.

    5. oh man..this is kiling me..i hope Tina tell Bette about the baby and if Bette is really sick (i hope she is not)Tina will be able to help her as her wife not just a friend..amazing chapter as always but please dont do this to my weak TiBette heart..lol..thanks

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