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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 1

    Story written on June 29, 2005 by tibette99.
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    A Visit and a Memory

    Kit and Bette Porter sat next to one another in the clinics
    waiting room. Bette appeared to be the more relaxed of the two, sitting quietly
    thumbing through the pages of an architectural magazine. Whereas a Kit sat
    somewhat slouched in her seat, nervously bending the covers of the unopened
    novel in her hands.

    Kit: Baby girl, are you absolutely sure that you dont want
    me to go in there with you? I mean

    Bette (interrupts)
    Kit for the third and hopefully last time, Im sure. I had to bring someone
    along in case they needed to take more tests and I couldnt drive. NOT because
    they have any bad news, ok?

    Kit: Okay. Im just worried about you.

    Bette: I know and I appreciate your concern. I doreally I
    do. But Im telling you, Im fine. I
    mean were talking about MY body here. I would know something were wrong.

    Kit: I know. Well Im glad you made the appointment,
    nonetheless.

    Bette: Wow I sense some revisionist history creeping in. If
    I recall correctly, YOU made the appointment for me. Then dragged my ***** here
    after making me think we were going out to lunch. (Pauses) You still owe me that lunch, by the way. Dont think that
    Ive forgotten.

    Ms Porter, a high pitched disembodied voice called from somewhere among
    the file cabinets stationed behind the receptionist’s desk. A moment later, a
    tall and rather lanky redhead came into view holding a manila folder. Ms.
    Porter, the doctor will see you now.

    Both Kit and Bette rose in acknowledgement. Kit turned
    towards her sister as Bette bent down to place the magazine onto a nearby
    table.

    Kit: Are you sure you dont want

    Bette: Im positive. Im a big girl, Kit. I can see the
    doctor all by myself.

    Kit: Ok, okay. Good luck then. I love you.

    Bette: (Smiles as she
    pulls Kit into a brief hug)     I dont need luck, but thanks. I love you too.

    She starts to follow the nurse down a side corridor,
    then pauses at the entryway.

    Bette: Hey, Kit?

    Kit: (looks up from
    her book)     Yeah, baby girl?

    Bette: When I get out of here, youre taking me to lunch.
    (Pauses to think) Somewhere expensive…maybe Italian.

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    Comments

    1. Great start…I always wanted a have a Bette “reaction scene” to Tina leaving. I mean we all saw Tina show up at Alice’s after the fact, but nothing about Bette.
      Uh oh, Bette’s going to the doctor…not a good sign.

    2. BVHALL wE FORGET THAT THERE WERE REASONS FOR bETTY CHEATING,ON tINA WASN’T RIGHT BUT YOU DO GO LOOKING WHEN THE ONE YOU LOVE DOESN’T SEE YOU ANYMORE. THANKS

    7. Liking the start of this, and Bette’s version of things. But please hopefully nothings wrong with Bette that Having Tina won’t fix, cos I think via all the other stories are girls have gone through enough.

    9. Well new stories are always welcomed by me, no matter if they suck or not, and I do have to say yours doesn’t suck at all. I enjoyed this chapter and hope you can post soon, it sounds like you have many chapter to let us read, and I’m alreday wanting more

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